批改网高分表达总结.docx

1、批改网高分表达一、 短语，高分词组1. creating a green campus 创建绿色校园2. enjoy great prestige in the world 享誉世界2. is the essence of 是的精华3. Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。4. Undoubtedly 毫无疑问5. Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。6. Needless to say,

2、a green campus includes.不必说7. Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。8. make efforts toMeanwhile, we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of studentsmental health.9. Work out 解决，实现10. Increase the awareness of the importanc

3、e of.增强对.的认识的重要性11. Rewind the clock 时光倒流12. In addition to this 除此之外13. Go all out 全力以赴( 属于四六 级经典高分短语)14. whats more 意思是另外，而且，是四六级经典补充类词组。 Whats more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure .而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。15. whereas 意思是然而 ，是四六级经典转换话题类

4、词汇。16. nothing but 意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过 是劳动加勤奋。 17. take advantage of 利用，是四六 级经典短语18. attach importance to 意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语 19. take pride in 意为：以自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒20. take advantage of 的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。21. on account of 意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短 语22.

5、far beyond 的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天 边，是四六级经典词组。 23. may as well 意为 ：最好，不妨，属于四六 级经典高分短语，用得很棒！We may as well cut across the playground.我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。24. it pays to 意为：.是值得的。属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better.25. not to mention 意为“ 更不用 说/别提” ，同意表达有 to

6、 say nothing of、not to speak ofIt goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the studying abroad become more significant. A case in point, we can have it. On account of anaccident, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the rewardhe can take p

7、ride in. Whats more , it is universally acknowledged that studying abroad is of consequence. For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to others pain since they might go through some surge. That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence. For the other thin

8、g, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well. For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally

9、cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals. What,more 提高文章连接性 studying 4.1 When there is love, there comes hope. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇 : affection, love, attachment 均含“ 爱，热爱”之意。 4.2 The picture depicts a common sense of a lamp brightening the dark

10、ness, telling a philosophy to us as to love. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇 : lamp, light 均有“ 灯”之意。 4.3 As we can see, evidently, love compared to be a lamp and when the darker surrounding is, the brighter it will be. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇 : enclose, encircle, envelop, fence, surround 均有“ 包围”之意。4.4 The drawing is undoubtedly

11、meaningful and pays to think that has we ever attach importance to love surrounding us. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇 : consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之意。 第 4 段 5.1 It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the love become more significant. 修改 优秀词汇 wher

12、eas 意思是然而 ，是经典转换话题类词汇。 学习提示 易混词汇 : significant, important, momentous 均含“ 重要的，重大的”之意。 精彩句型 it goes without saying that 意为：不用说.，很明显.。类似的表达有：属于经典高分句型， (It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that， Obviously, .。用得很棒！ 5.2 A case in point, we can have it. 修改 闪光短语 a case in point 意为：一个恰当的例子，属于经典高分短语，用

13、得很棒！ 拓展辨析 动名搭配 have.it 在语料库中出现过 34 次 5.3 On account of an accident, he died of tetanus and his son was completely paralyzed. 修改 学习提示 accident 表示“意外事故”。注意与 incident 的区别。详情点击 闪光短语 on account of 意为：由于，属于经典高分短语。 5.4 Without her help and affection, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not t

14、o mention the reward he can take pride in. 修改 闪光短语 高分词组， not to mention 意为“ 更不用说/ 别提” ，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。 学习提示 易混词汇 : plan, design, plot, scheme, project, blueprint, programme 均含“计划”之意。 闪光短语 take pride in 意为：以自豪，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！5.5 Whats more, the Brooklyn indeed light up the worl

15、d, so do their love. 修改闪光短语 whats more 有助于提高文章衔接 闪光短语 whats more 意思是另外，而且，是经典补充类词组。 学习提示易混词汇: earth, world, globe 均可表示“地球” 之意。 第 5 段 6.1 As far as I am concerned, it is universally acknowledged that love is of consequence, while loving each other is our obligation and being loved is our privilege. 修

16、改 学习提示 易混词汇 : acknowledge, admit, confess, recognize, concede 均含“ 承认”之意。 精彩句型 It is universally acknowledged that 意思是大家都认为，是经典句型。闪光短语 高分词组， be of 接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。6.2 For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to others pain since they might go through some surge. 修改 精彩句型 On no account

17、can 意思是.绝对不能. ，是经典句型。 学习提示 易混词汇 : energy, force, power, might, strength, vigour 均有“力” 之意。闪光短语 on no account 意为：决不，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 精彩句型 on no account can we 意为：我们绝对不能.，属于经典高分句型，用得很棒！ 6.3 That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence. 修改 精彩句型 that is the reason why 的

18、意思是原因是，是经典句型。 学习提示reason 表示“原因，理由”。注意与 cause 的区别。详情点击 精彩句型the reason why 意为：.的原因是.，属于经典高分句型。6.4 For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well. 修改 闪光短语may as well 意为：最好，不妨，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 闪光短语take ad

19、vantage of 的意思是利用，是经典短语。 闪光短语 go all out 意为：全力以赶；鼓足干劲，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 拓展辨析 动名搭配 lend.hand 在语料库中出现过 559 次 6.5 To conclude, only when we fall into the darkest place, will we truly understand how precious love is. 修改 拓展辨析 注意 conclude 和 deduce 区别。 6.6 For your information, it is love that contributes to

20、the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals. 修改 学习提示 易混词汇 :battle, war, campaign, struggle, warfare, fight, combat, engageme

21、nt 均有“ 战斗，战争”之意。is the essence of 是。的精华 Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。Undoubtedly 毫无疑问 Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。Needless to say,a green campus includes.不必说 Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。 Meanwhile,we should make efforts t

22、o improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of studentsmental health. 过渡句：In the first place,it is essential that.,furthermore,it is high time for us to.,last but not least. Work out 解决，实现 Increase the awareness of the importance of.增强对.

23、的认识的重要性Rewind the clock 时光倒流 In addition to this 除此之外 Go all out 全力以赴属于四六级经典高分短语 Whats more 高分词汇 whereas 意思是然而 ，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。 nothing but 意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。 whats more 意思是另外，而且，是四六级经典补充类词组。Whats more, bigger banks can diversify their e

24、arnings, which should further militate against failure . 而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。take advantage of 的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语 attach importance to 意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语 高分短语 take pride in 意为：以自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒高分短语 take advantage of 的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。 on account of 意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语 it goes without saying that

25、意为：不用说.，很明显.。类似的表达有：属于四六级经典高分句型， (It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that， Obviously, .。用得很棒！ 高分词组 far beyond 的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。 It goes without saying thatit pays to keep early hours. 不用说早睡早起是值得的。 高分短语 may as well 意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！We may as well cut across the playground

26、. 我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。 高分句型 it pays to 意为：.是值得的。属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！It pays tohelp others. 帮助别人是值得的。 高分表达 高分词组， not to mention 意为“ 更不用说/别提”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。 高分表达 高分词组， be of 接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better. 高分短语 contrib

27、ute to 意思是对某事有帮助，有贡献；有助于做某事，是四六级经典短语。 高分短语 stay up late 意思是熬夜，是四六级经典短语。 Many retired people can still contribute to the society with their rich experience . 许多退休的老人还能用他们丰富的经验为社会作贡献。 好评报错 高分短语 on no account 意为：决不，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Young people should on no account neglect their daily physical exercise

28、s. 青年人决不应疏忽每天的体育锻炼。 好评报错 高分句型 On no account can 意思是.绝对不能.，是四六级经典句型。On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 好评报错 There is no denying that 意思是不可否认的，是四六级经典句型。 There is no denying thatthe qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 高分句型 the reason

29、 why 意为：.的原因是.，属于四六级经典高分句型。The reason whywe have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 好评报错 高分表达 高分词组，look forward to 意为“期望/等待”。 好评报错 高分表达 高分词组， look forward to 意为“期盼/期待”。 高分句型 It is universally acknowledged that 意思是大家都认为，是四六级经典句型。 whereas 意思是然而 ，是四六级经典转换话题类

30、词汇 take into account 意为把考虑进去，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ A case in point is高分短语 意为：一个恰当的例子，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 高分短语 cope with 意为：对付，妥善处理，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 高分短语 once for all 意为：一劳永逸地，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 比如 take into account（我不觉得它很牛的样子）、heart and soul ，play an role in等等。高分句型 that is the reason why 的意思是原因是，是四六级经典句型。

31、 referring to not hesitate to Give priority to 给= 优先权 Recently,a heated debate arose online in China about the “Chinese style of crossing the road“, a term referring to the tendency of large crowds of people to cross roads in disobedience of red lights. Puzzle out 苦思，puzzle over Be short of 缺乏。 atta

32、ch great importance to 高度重视 七、An advantage of is that + 句子(. 的优点是.) 例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce)any pollution. 三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。) 例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调

33、保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 It makes me understand that perseverance makes the impossible possible. To make a long story short enrich ones experience 增长见识 in defiance of 不顾，无视 Its highly desirable for sb to do something.很希望某人做。 Submit oneself to.遵守 Interpret.as. 把什么理解为 Whereas 然而 Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that /There are many ways which can be adopted to 解决问题