英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--出国留学的利与弊.doc

1、英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析-出国留学的利与弊题目：Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards写作要求Nowadays more and more students choose to go abroad after they graduate from colleges and universities. They say that they bene t a lot from it, though some people argue that there are many hardships and dif culties. Whats your opin

2、ion about it?Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Studying Abroad: Hardships and RewardsYou are to write in three parts.In the rst part, state speci cally what your idea is.In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.

3、In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure tofollow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一个观点选择型的题目，就目前大学生在毕业后选择 留学的利弊孰大孰小进行分析。题目可以从以下几个方面入手：思路 1：利大于弊虽然有困难 ，

4、但整体上利大于弊，利体现在 ：1. 教学软件硬件优异 ；2. 有利于将来就业等。思路 2 ：弊大于利虽然有好处 ，但整体上弊大于利 ，弊体现在 ：1. 费用昂贵 ；2. 文化差异 ，难以融入其中等。思路 3 ：应具体问题具体分析 ，因人而异留学有益 ，体现参考思路 1；留学也有弊端 ，体现参考思路 2 ；是否选择留学 ，应根据个人情况而定 。Studying Abroad: Hardships and RewardsThere is no denying the fact that studying abroad is a hotly debated2 topic today. As far

5、as Im， concerned, I believe hardships and rewards coexist and people have to consider it from all sides.引言部分：作者先提出留学是个热门话题 ，然后说明留学有利有弊应全面综合来考虑 。这表明下文将既讲利又讲弊。Obviously, studying abroad has a number of rewards . In the rst place, a student can have access to advanced science and technology as well as

6、desirable working conditions which mightnot be available at home. In the second place, he can be exposed to entirely new ideas and trends. Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home.Nevertheless, as every coin has tw

7、o sides, studying abroad also confronts one with a series of hardships. For one thing, learning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people. For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits may also be a barrier to overseas students, espec

8、ially to the young. An added difficulty lies with nance: it can cost a lot to study abroad.主体部分：作者先说有几个显而易见的益处是列举观点时常用的句式。然后用“In the first place, . In the second place, . Last but not least” 。nevertheless 进行转折，说明留学会让人遇到很多困难。这时列举所用的句式换为“for one thing . for another.”使文章更富有变化。Therefore, studying abroad

9、 should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with10 both bene ts and troubles. The best policy11, as I see it, is to take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding. Personally, Id choose to go abroad and study if I nd it necessary.总结部分 ：作者概述

10、上面所列利弊，用“a two-edged sword”来概括再恰 当不过，并提出选择出国留学的标准应该是 “take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding”。亮点回放1. there is no denying that:“无可否认” ；还可以用 undoubtedly ，without doubt 等更为简洁的表达方式 。2. hotly debated: “被激烈讨论的” ；相当于“heavily/frequently discussed” ，但比之要

11、g 更地道些 。3. rewards: “奖赏、报酬 、报答” ；此处表示“回报” ，近义词为“returns” 。4. have access to: “能获得” ，access 的形容词 accessible 也经常使用在 be accessible to 的词组中，注意与之区别 。5.desirable:“令人满意的，称心如意的” ，另外它的反义词undesirable 表示 “不尽如人意的” 。6. be exposed to: “暴露在之下” ，此处还可以用 “be faced with ，be confronted with”等。7. confront sb. with sth.:

12、 “使某人遭遇到 （某事 ） ” ，此处注意与 be exposed to 的区别 ，前者不以人为主语 ，用主动语态 ；后者以人为主语 ，用被动语态 。8. far from: “远离” ，此处表示 “远非” ，相当于 never ，但语气委婉些 。9. barrier:“障碍” ，近义词还有 “obstacle ，block ，hardship ，setback”等 。10. present sb. with sth.: “给某人带来某物” ，也可以用 “provide sb. with sth.” ，但 present 显得更正式些 。11. policy : “政策 、方针 、保险单” ，此处 “the best policy ”表示“最好的办法” ，用法地道 。