英语老师给的大学英语四级写作.doc

1、大学英语四、六级短文写作高分策略在英语四、六级写作的文章结构安排上，考生应采用较为稳妥的三段式写法（最多四段） ，即总分总的写法。因为所要写的文章的题材无论是议论文、书信，还是说明文和描述文，都可以用以下的写作结构：首段：综述（引出话题）中间段：主题句，接着第一个论据、第二个论据（下面还可以再有一个中间扩展段落）末段：总结全文，前后呼应下面我们将介绍打造高分地道作文的一些技巧。一、开头段精彩、有气势1、开头段的写作要点开头段一定要语言精练，并且直接切入主题或引出观点，一般不对主题进行深入的探讨，具体的论证或说明描述应该在中间段落进行，开头段一般写四、五句即可。开头段的作用是概括陈述主题，提出观

2、点或论点，表明写作意图，在组织开头段时要注意避免以下几点：1）开头偏离主题太远，导致切题不准，主题不明2）使用抱歉或埋怨之词句，因为社会主旋律是倡导积极向上的思想3）内容不具体，言之无物，使用不言自明的陈述，给人以充数累赘之感常言道：好的开始是成功的一半。文章的开篇出色是给评卷者留下好印象的关键。因此，文章的开头段要适合主题的需要，要有利于下文的展开；简明生动，引人入胜，能激发读者的兴趣；开门见山，揭示文章主题，交代写作目的，唤起读者情感上的共鸣。开头段的写作根据不同的题目可采取不同的方法，常用的几种写作方法请参考本章第三节写出稿部分。方法运用恰当，文章的开头段会比平铺直叙更引人入胜，更能激起

3、阅卷人继续读下去的好奇心和兴趣。2、开篇要有气势开篇的几句话要有爆发力，充分表现考生的语言水平和写作实力。因此要把平时积累的优秀句型应用到第一段开篇，以下是开篇的经典句式：1) Recently, sth. ( the problem of ) has been brought to public attention (has become the focus of public concern).2) There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of . Those who object to argue that . But

4、people who favor , on the other hand, argue that. 3) Currently (In recent years / In the past few years), there is (has been) a general (widespread / growing / widely held) feeling towards (concern over / attitude towards / trend towards / belief in）.4) There is no denying/ doubt that But 5) Anyone

5、who takes a closer look at the data in the table/ graph can be surprised to find that 6) Now it is commonly (widely / generally / increasingly) believed (thought / held /accepted/ felt / acknowledged) that . But I wonder (doubt) whether 7) It has long been considered only right and proper to (in Chi

6、na).8) As opposed to generally accepted views, I believe that 9) With the development of , vast changes await our college students (our society/ our country).10) When it comes to (Faced with)., most people (the public/ quite a few people) maintain (argue/ contend) that., but other people conceive di

7、fferently.11) A public debate has arisen as to (over/ concerning)12) We often find ourselves caught (involved) in a dilemma(窘境)whether13) I agree with the above statement because I believe that . 14) As far as I am concerned, however, I believe that .15) On the surface (At first thought), it may see

8、m a sound (an attractive) suggestion (solution / idea), but on second thought (on closer analysis), we find that 二、中间段论证充分、流畅自然1、中间段的写作要点中间段的任务是依据开头段所交代的内容来阐述文章的论点，围绕主题或论点展开讨论，或就具体要求进行描述和说明。中间段是文章的正文，其作用是从不同的层面对文章主题进行具体和详实的解释和论证。中间段篇幅一般比开头段和结尾段长，每段有相应的主题句，包含定义、解释、描写等手法，说明主题思想的扩展句采用实例、数据或个人经历等写作手段，当然

9、不同种类的段落采用不同的扩展手段，这在第一章的第五节关于段落的展开方法部分详细讲过。中间段要有以下特点：1）所涉及内容应该准确、清楚，颇具说服力；2）段落中一定具备主题句（最好放在句首） ；3）段落内容应该保持完整、统一，没有说明不足之处或多余冗长的细节；4）内容顺序安排合理，逻辑性较强；5）段落之间连贯自然；6）段落中讨论的内容主次分明，材料比例适当；7）词与句型运用合理并且有变化。2、文字通顺连贯，善用过渡词或词组英语中的过渡句和连接词是文章通顺连贯的重要标志，复合句内部必须要有连接词，有时句子之间也需要连接词，而连接词体现的是句子内部和句子之间严谨的逻辑和论证推理关系，是英文语言最大的价

10、值之一。当然段与段之间还需要过渡句或过渡词组来加以联系，以达到通顺之效果。大家如果在写作中恰当应用过渡词语，会增加文章的可读性，使文章层次分明，以下是我们对写作中英文逻辑关系以及引导各种逻辑关系连接词和词组的归纳：1）总结关系过渡词语generally speaking, generally, as a general rule, in general, on a larger scale, to take the idea further, in a sense, in a way, to some extent, in my opinion, in my view, as for me,

11、as far as I am concerned, obviously, undoubtedly, in terms of, in conclusion, in short, in brief, in summary, in a word, on the whole, to sum up, to conclude 2）比较对比关系过渡词语similarly, likewise, like, too, equally important, the same as, in common, in the same way, on the contrary, on the one hand, on t

12、he other hand, otherwise, in sharp contrast, whereas, rather than, conversely, instead, in/by contrast, but, however, yet, nevertheless 3）列举关系过渡词语for example, for instance, as an example, as a case in point, such as, namely, that is, like, thus, first, second, third, finally, in the first place, initially, first of all, to begin with, to start with, what is more, furthermore, eventually, besides, in addition (to that）, first and foremost, last but not least, next, also, moreover, for one thing,