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1、评卷实例2008 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 娱乐活动多种多样2. 娱乐活动有可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性3. 作为大学生我的看法【2 points 】There have a lot recreational activities

2、for people to choose for. As to recreational activities, people have different view on it. At first, someone who think those activities are good and necessary. Because they can help people to relax from the hard work and study.It can not only improve our body but also a better mood. People can go to

3、 see movies and surf on the internet as their recreational activities.On another hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other recreational activities, we will have bad influence on his duties, such as studying or working, which is in opposite effect badly. Not liking the recreational

4、 activities, we can do some meaning things. Its batter for us when we are studying and working. So we must go away from it.So I belive that as an university student, you should do much recreational activities. But we should have a balence.【5 points 】Today, recreational activities is very popular. Mo

5、re and more people take time in varous forms of it. People want to relaxe and have fun, he can go sports, singing, go dancing, go to the movies, or surf the Internet.Some people thought having recreational activities good to peoples heath, both physically and mind. Sports and dancing can keep us thi

6、n, surfing the Internet can bring people a lot of information and knowledge. We can know more knowledge about our true reality in life that dont exist in our books. However, others thought that recreational activities are harm to people. Because spending much too time on recreational activities will

7、 influence on peoples work and study. Many students are spend the money of their parents. This question needs to think and think.As a college student, I think recreational activities and study are not contradict.We should try our best to study hard when we studying and enjoy ourselves when we having

8、 recreational activities.【8 points 】In our peoples daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working. There are both outdoor and indoor activities for us to make fun of, such as playing footaball and basketball, dancing, playing computer games and so on.It goes wit

9、hout saying that recreational activities can give us much fun and some could bring excitement.If you surf the Internet, you can get to know people from any other country in the world, talk with them, play games with them.However, we cannot deny the fact that recreational activities can also cause so

10、me disadvantages if we spend too much time on it. Some people even lose their family or job because of doing too much recreational activities.In a nutshell, we should pay more attention to the advantages of recreational activities. The best way is take part in recreational activities properly.【11poi

11、nts】In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.“ Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax. Some of the activities, such as

12、 hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally,which makes people feel energetic for another weeks work-load.Such activities are harmful as well to us if undertaken inappropriately. Because we may fail to concentra

13、te on our duties such as studying or working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.As far as Im concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life. 【14points】Among various recipes one en

14、joys in his college life, recreational activities can by no means be ignored.There are numerous activities, such as spoken English competitions, sports events, and clubs and societies of different interests, which help to make campus life colorful and diversified.Facing so many interesting activitie

15、s, we college students have trouble choosing the proper ones. As freshmen, we are confused by all kinds clubs to recruit new members. There are two opposite views about recreational activities. One says they exert positive influence on a students physical and mental development, for they can explore

16、 students talent, develop students ability in communication, and teach them to be more independent. Nevertheless, opposite voices can also be heard by asserting that recreational activities waste too much time, therefore may hinder student from focusing on their study. As for myself, Im with the vie

17、w that recreational activities do more good than harm, because I have always been of the impression that a college student should pick up more practical skills to be better prepared for the career development. And, so long as one can arrange the time, recreational activities will definitely provide more benefit for us.