第十五讲高分作文的写作模3.doc

1、第十五讲 高分作文的写作模式四、参考范文 1 Why College Students Take a Part-time Job a. 最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍 b. 为什么大学生打工 c. 大学生打工的意义 According to a recent survey, about 25 percent of Chinese college students now hold a part-time or temporary job, compared with nearly none 10 years ago, and this figure increases to 72 pe

2、rcent during summer vacations. College students are working as tutors, salespersons, engineers and doing whatever work they can find. Why do they want odd jobs - jobs usually requiring little skill and knowledge? The primary reason, I think, is money. Feeling the financial pressure as books, movies

3、and bus fares have all gone up in price, there is scarcely a young boy or girl who does not want to earn a little money to help cover the increasingly higher college costs, and at best save enough to go traveling or buy things they have long desired. In this way they hope to be economically independ

4、ent and avoid the indignity of having to ask for money again and again. Besides they want to gain some experience in the ways of society. Students growing up from nursery school to college only know about books and have trouble dealing with realities. Working on a part-time basis can provide them wi

5、th a rare opportunity to know the outside world and prepare them for a future career. The significance for college students of doing a part-time job means more than money and experience. It will broaden their outlook and exert a profound influence on their personality and life. 2. The Job I like Bes

6、t a. 我最喜欢的工作是 b. 我为什么要选择这个工作 c. 结论 In the past three years of my college life I have never ceased to think what kind of work I shall take up upon graduation. Although my ideas are not consistent, I have now decided on a college teacher as my lifelong career. A variety of reasons have led me to choos

7、e this occupation over other more lucrative ones. First, teaching is learning. To make my lectures more constructive and stimulating, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world - the very thing I enjoy in my life. Second, teaching means freedom and

8、independence. As a teacher, Im free to use my own ideas and make my own decisions, a privilege not everyone can have, even those with highly-paid positions. Finally, I like teaching because it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catch a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, n

9、o more worries about your paycheck which is steady, if not handsome. Nothing, not even a big salary, can equal for the opportunity to continue learning, the satisfaction of being your own boss, and a gentle peace of life. (归纳全文，强化全文的中心论点) 3. How to Solve the Energy Problem a. 有人认为解决能源危机的方式是厉行节约 b. 有

10、人则认为开发新的能源是最好的办法 c. 我的看法 When asked about one of the biggest problems today, many people say that an energy crisis is approaching and is threatening mankinds survival. They are afraid that the world is likely to run out of oil and metals and to run short of food in the near future. To this problem,

11、most countries respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources. Indeed, this is urgently needed, for the present waste of energy in industrial and personal consumption is so serious that it has become habitual and traditional. If the natural resources are used economical

12、ly, we can certainly slow down the present drain on the limited energy supply. However, conservation alone is not the answer. It is obvious that even if we can save much energy, we can only delay the energy crisis, but cannot solve the problem completely. However abundant certain natural resources m

13、ay be, they cannot reproduce themselves and are bound to be used up ultimately. So in the long run, we must develop new sources of energy instead of merely conserving the known, limited supplies. Man is highly adaptable and creative, and since he is able to tap such resources as oil and metal, why c

14、ant he develop and harness solar energy, nuclear energy and other unknown energy resources? 4. The Internet a. 什么是英特网 b.英特网的作用 c. 英特网对社会的影响 The Internet The later part of the 1990s finds the worlds “the Internet“ become fashionable in peoples daily life. The Internet is a network of thousands of net

15、works, linking schools, universities, businesses, government agencies, libraries and millions of individuals. Something like “information superhighways“, the internet can bring many conveniences into the school, home and office. College students can check the card catalogue of Library of Congress in

16、 the United States to finish their papers. Housewives can do shopping and pay bills without leaving their homes. Businessmen can sign a contract and land an order through electronic media. Patients can reach the worlds leading authorities and experts on the disease they may suffer from .men and wome

17、n can have a conversation with people all over the world by sending and receiving electronic mail. With a basic computer and modem any individual can call up information about almost anything from almost anywhere and almost anytime. The Internet exerts such a profound effect on our life that it revo

18、lutionizes the way of peoples living and thinking. 5. Advantages and Disadvantages of Home Computers a. 家用电脑的普及 b家用电脑的好处 c家用电脑带来的问题 Just a few years ago, the idea of having a computer in ones home seemed far-fetched for most Chinese. Now, however, with the advent and popularity of the home computer,

19、 its advantages and disadvantages have been a subject of discussion. There is no doubt that like TV, computers benefit people hugely. With the computer, the home will become a library, a school, an office and an entertainment center. All transactions, from banking to shopping, will be performed elec

20、tronically and all information, form train schedules to discount price goods, will be as close as the press of a key. In addition to providing us many of the facilities and services we now must travel to obtain, with the Internet, the computer will even let us communicate directly with other homes a

21、nd with information sources worldwide. Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by the computer, the changes it brings could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences. For example, as nearly all activities could be conducted in the comfort of our homes, we could all beco

22、me hermitlike, never feeling any need to leave the house. This would be unfortunate because our children especially will become so addicted to computers that they might never be exposed to either peer pressure or social interaction. Unquestionably, the challenge of the home computer means we all sho

23、uld consider how we can control it, so that it wont control us. 6. Should Euthanasia Be Legalized a.有人赞成实行安乐死 b.有人反对安乐死合法化 c.我的看法 Euthanasia, a quite and easy death, or “mercy killing“ as we call it recently has made the headlines frequently. Many people applaud it and argue that euthanasia should b

24、e legalized. As is pointed out, to practise euthanasia can benefit both the patient and his family. To a terminally ill person who is suffering excruciating pains day and night or living “like a vegetable“, to be allowed to end his life painlessly is a good release. To his family it is also a big re

25、lief considering the financial and emotional drain on them that having to sustain his life entails. However, the legalization of euthanasia may also bring with it problems our society has not previously faced. Is it humane, for example, that a terminally ill patient is thus caused to feel guilty for

26、 remaining alive because he does not want to die? Is it wise that a patient is killed alive simply because of a mistaken terminal diagnosis? And is it possible that euthanasia could be taken advantage of for some ulterior or even criminal purposes? Since the legalization of euthanasia will raise serous moral and social issues, the decision our society makes about euthanasia will undoubtedly have tremendous consequences in society. 同学们，写作能力的培养非一朝一夕的事情，不只是掌握一些固定的模式，一些常用的句式，背几篇范文就能解决的问题。但是，在临考之际，我就我所能给同学们归纳出了四六级写作的一些规律，和常用策略，希望能给同学们一些启示，一些帮助。祝同学们考个好成绩。