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1、V 1.00 Build 061109 Page 1 of 201目录TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路范文 完美重排版 3本部分填补了目前网络iBT 备考资料的空白。根据李笑来老师提供的作文思路与iBT高分作文 原书范文重排。本部分对iBT 考试的独立写作部分与口语部分均具有重要的参考作用。范文中加粗部分均依为原书所有。附录一 185题库按关键词分类 184照录原书附录附录二 李笑来作文笔记（独立部分）185根据本人新东方听课详尽笔记整理而成附录三 句法多样性专题 193摘自李笑来老师网站（）附录四 例证表达法 199摘自李笑来老师网站（）时间匆忙，欢迎指出错误，将在后面的版本中修正。感谢笑

2、来老师给我们提供了如此之好的备考材料，一切版权归笑来老师所有。仅供广大iBT 考生备考参考，建议购买原版以更好使用。Lost Lawyer2006年11月10日 Page 2 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路范文 完美重排版1. Why people attend college?People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think

3、 people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个) ：增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机会父母要求子女上大学别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书找不到工作(“无知“，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是1，去博物馆如是12 ，从事危险运动亦如是43。)相关题目：168范文After graduating f

4、rom high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly com

5、petitive job market.Before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs i

6、n high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.Additionally, employers are willing to pay a

7、premium for highly qualified applicants. For example, many companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still placePage 3 of 201TOEFL

8、.iBT 高分作文 完美重排版 Edited by Lost Lawyera higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field, college graduates are not only m

9、ore likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for

10、example, could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step o

11、f an undergraduate degree in biology.2. Are parents the best teachers?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析因观点绝对而不能同意。不是所有的父母都是好老师最好的老师不仅仅是父母有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响范文Obviously

12、, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the best teachers.First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals,

13、some parents more or less have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents.

14、Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do no

15、t follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses.Page 4 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 完美重排版 Edited by Lost LawyerMoreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but no

16、t all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where kno

17、wledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fiel

18、ds. Wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the family.Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children education are virtually beyond teachers reaches. It is pa

19、rents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albeit Einsteins mother and that of Forest Gump are both good examples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The

20、natures of those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted. In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.3. Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the

21、way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析总体上，“食物变得越来越容易准备”是一种进步37，所以自然会带来improvement 。使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化：好的：节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来也有不好的变化：准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减少了，比如“速冻饺子”quick-frozen dumpling快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩子相关题目：13范文People tod

22、ay can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. To prepare a single dinner, provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to buy home dirty vegetables which had Page 5 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 完美重排版 Edited by Lost Lawyerto wash, meat which had to slice, and so

23、 on so forth. Each and every step of preparation was a time-consuming task. But now, things are entirely different. Supermarkets provide vegetables and meat clean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and need only a few minutes to be made into delicious meals. And this change has in

24、deed greatly improved the way people live.In a sense, food preparation is no longer a tedious task, at least much easier to tolerate. Such a change has liberated many women and given them chance to do more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. On the other hand,

25、more men are becoming willing to do the thing that they once hated so much, and in some cases such transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on the family. Today, its not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a days hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has alrea

26、dy prepared her several her favorite dishes! Children can more easily become independentat least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents are occasionally not present.But such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. Girls nowadays are becoming more and more relucta

27、nt to deem household work as their responsibility. The reason is quite straightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: “I can work as well, or maybe I can

28、earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if you want to marry me, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day?“ And some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is

29、one thing: “I can take care of myself, at least I dont really need someone prepare me dinner!“Anyway, such a change is positive and it did improve the quality of peoples life. At least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no

30、matter what kind of opportunity it is.4. Which is more important, book knowledge or experience?It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.“ Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more impor

31、tant? Why?分析注意一定要先进行比较从书本中获取的知识优点：题材、范围更多 Page 6 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 完美重排版 Edited by Lost Lawyer有更多的深度更加的系统缺点：有时过于教条也不见得完全准确从经验中获取的知识优点：获取直接、简单明了更加地实用有些知识无法从书本中获得缺点：不系统，很大的随意性很容易产生片面理解不一定要说A比B更重要，或者B比A更重要。也可以选择在不同的情况下，有不同的比较。学习抽象的知识，书本是最好的来源。学习游泳，这只能靠经验。另外，大多数的知识要书本经验相结合才可以。相关题目：116有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习

32、，比如，语言，体育有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、地理有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧；管理技巧所以不能一概而论(treat different things/problems/matters as the same)，要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。范文In general, knowledge gained from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. We now live in a world that typophile is no longer exorbit

33、ant, and that printed matters are readily available. In libraries, we can learn nearly everything only if we have already acquired basic reading skills, philosophy, history, literature, physics, mathematics, chemicals, biology, geography, anthropology, and the list will go on. Unlike the experience

34、of an individual that is limited by the range of that individual, books seem to have almost no limitation. Sitting in the local library, we virtually can travel everywhere through an interesting geographic encyclopedia, and certainly, with nearly no expense at all.On the other hand, it can be argued

35、 that sometimes knowledge gained from experience is much deeper and more comprehensive than that gained from books. It is quite true that not every thing is contained in books. HowPage 7 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 完美重排版 Edited by Lost Lawyerto deal with personal finance, how to cope with current social tr

36、ends, even how to most effectively organize our own mind, and numerous other things can seldom be found thoroughly and comprehensively discussed in books, we have to gain the knowledge by our own experience. And the sad news is that even some knowledge that is contained in books usually needs furthe

37、r comprehension, mainly through experience.As to which source is more important, the answers vary. Some knowledge can be acquired only through books. Its hard to imagine we can have a good understanding of history without reading books. On the other hand, some knowledge can be obtained only through

38、experience. When we try to learn to swim, merely a detailed manual of swimming skills, even abundantly filled with illustrations, is at most useless. We have to jump into the water and then gain the knowledge with experience. We have to use books and experience as source simultaneously to get what w

39、e want to know. Take learning physics for example, both books and experiences are equally important sources, and examples as such are numerous. Therefore, I think whether one source is more important than the other depends on circumstances.5. The advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near yo

40、ur communityA company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.分析先讨论“假设工厂真的落成了，而带来的好处和坏处”，而后发表看法。好处：直接增加了就业机会(到工厂去上班 )；间接增加了

41、就业机会 (会有很多服务业，比如饭店、商店、超市等等跟着开业)如果工厂规模足够大，物流规模也足够大，那么将最终成为交通改善的起点大的工厂可以缴纳很多税，对地方财政有好处，进而促进社区的繁荣坏处：带来各种污染，比如，噪音、废气、污水等等工厂不一定会赢利相关题目： 16、25 、26、30、79范文Page 8 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 完美重排版 Edited by Lost LawyerI live in a primarily agricultural community, and most of the population lives hand to mouth. Par

42、ents keep children home from school to work in the fields. If there is a flood or a drought, people starve. A new factory would mean regular monthly salaries as well as protection against natural disasters or a sudden drop in the price of our main agricultural product, say, corn.Regular salaries wou

43、ld allow families the confidence to make investments in their futures. The locals would be able to plan their finances accurately and free themselves from debt. This in turn would encourage entrepreneurship and further develop the local economy. People could begin to open shops, restaurants, dormito

44、ries, and entertainment facilities to serve the factory workers with their savings. Profits from these small enterprises would further enrich the local community and turn our relatively poor farmland into a truly profitable development zone. Perhaps more parents could then afford to send all of thei

45、r children to high school and maybe even college.There would certainly be negative effects as well. If the area becomes prosperous, immigrants from poorer regions will come here looking for work. Because of their relative poverty they will work harder for less money than the locals and drive wages d

46、own. There might be more immigrants than factory jobs available, leading to an unemployment crisis with a rising crime rate as a potential negative side effect.On the other hand, the proposed factory would almost certainly have adverse effects on the local environment, particularly in regards to pol

47、luting the water. This is perhaps the most serious concern, because without clean water the area cannot sustain life of any kind, com, livestock, or human.However, because of the relatively desperate economic situation of my hometown, I believe the potential benefits of opening a new factory would o

48、utweigh the risks. If we take the proper precautions, such as imposing strict environmental standards and providing adequate social services for immigrants, the whole area stands to benefit.6. The most important thing you want to change about your hometownIf you could change one important thing abou

49、t your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.分析改变其环境，因为一个好的环境会使人们更加快乐更加健康更加有效率相关题目：52、141 、165都可以选择改变其环境。这些题目实际上可以用一篇文章应对。 Page 9 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 完美重排版 Edited by Lost Lawyer范文I was born in a small town named Hailin, located in the North-East of China. The most serious problems in my hometown are the backward ideas about a womans place in the family, school, wor