胡敏的作文14篇背诵.doc

1、胡敏的作文 14 篇背诵如何使作文的时态简单化，以最大程度地避免错误？参加国际上的任何一场考试，只要是写英语作文，主体上应该是一般现在时态；只有当你提到具体的、过去的、某一事件段发生的具体的某一件事情作为例证时，可以一般过去时。中心时态是简单的一般现在时。 图画作文以下四篇背诵文章解决该类题型：第一：对图画进行描述：第二：透过画面点出图画的寓意；第三：发表议论、提出问题方法和建议。P102 Exercise 7Fill in the blanks with appropriate words.（背诵 1）As is shown in the pictures, (From the pictur

2、es, we can see clear that) with the increase of commercial fishing, the number of fishes dramatically decreased. In one picture, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, with many fishing-boats.The purpose of this picture i

3、s to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decline of ocean resources. Owing to over fishing the number of fishes has obviously dropped. If we let this situation go/continue as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destru

4、ction.Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. For another, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Only in this way can we prote

5、ct our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future. P25 范文十Directions:沙进我退，我进沙退A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET .C. Your essay shoul

6、d meet the requirements below:1. Describe the cartoon（对图画进行描述） and the message conveyed（透过画面点出图画的寓意）2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon.（发表议论、提出问题方法和建议）（背诵 2）From the pictures, we can see clearly the relationship between people and the deserts. In the first picture, people are

7、fleeing from greedy sand hills because they cut down all the trees. The caption reads: As the sand advances, we retreat. In the second picture, the people have returned carrying tools, water and young trees to plant the land again. The caption reads: As we advance, the sand retreats.（描述）It seems to

8、me that the cartoonist is sending a message about the importance of trees in water and soil conservation, and the need for everyone to fight against the danger of desertification. In fact, what he is saying is if we do not fight against the sand hills, the sand hills will drive us away from the land

9、. (In fact, what he is saying is that the sand hills will drive us away from the land if we do not fight against them.) If we let this situation go as it is, our environment will suffer a great destruction. (寓意)The best way to fight back against the greedy desert is made clear in the second picture.

10、 There the local people are actively setting about the task of planting trees to reclaim (改造) the land and make it (代词的使用) fertile. The fact that（同位语）there are three people in the picture each with a different job (逻辑独立主谓结构，介词短语表示动态概念), suggest that (事实说明)working together is the key to success in th

11、e battle against soil erosion.(措施、建议)Today, the earths deserts are spreading and getting larger and desertification is a serious problem facing the world. The major reason for this is irresponsible cutting down of trees. As is shown in the first cartoon, when people cut down trees desert forces on a

12、nd becomes irrepressible.People cut down trees for various reasons but they may forget that trees play a vital part in water and soil conservation. Trees can preserve moisture and fertility in the soil, protect soil against erosion and prevent fertile land from becoming desert. Therefore when people

13、 cut down all of the trees, the earth lies bare and dry in the hot sun, and desert is inevitable.Desertification can lead to many other serious problems which may threaten the existence of human beings, such as a reduction of arable land, terrible droughts and famine. In order to prevent desertifica

14、tion, people have to plant trees, as the second cartoon shows. The time when people plant trees is the time when desert retreats. People should not cut down trees any more, as is done in the first cartoon, but rather, they should plant more trees, and only in this way can desertification be finally

15、defeated.P23：范文八隐形杀手Directions:A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET .C. Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed2. Draw a conclusion and give your co

16、mment on the cartoon （背诵 3）Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world. As is shown in the cartoon, two cars are giving off waste gas and three people are trying to avoid breathing in the poisonous gas by masking their face with their hands. The poisonous gas sent off by factories

17、, domestic appliances and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe.（对图画进行描述）There is no denying that automobiles are indications of civilization, progress and development; nevertheless, automobiles cause the serious problem of air pollution. Scientists have warned that unless eff

18、ective measures are taken, the problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand. Actually, people are showing a real concern over the problem. For example, there is an increasingly loud voice from the public（公众） for firm action against pollution from automobiles.（寓意）Indeed, the earth is our home

19、 and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our descendants. In my opinion, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem of pollution from poisonous gas given off by automobiles. For example, the automobiles should be equipped with a device which can dispose of waste gas s

20、o as to prevent it from polluting air. Only in this way can we really solve the problem of air pollution caused by automobiles.（措施、建议）P24 范文九产销会Directions:A. Write an essay that conveys the information in the following chart/ graph/ picture/ drawing/ cartoon accompanied by your comments.B. Time limi

21、t: 40 minutesC. Word limit: no less than 150 wordsD. Your essay should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET.（背诵 4）This picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and being shocked at the message. This is because the billboard is advertising a “Sale of Dead Bodies.“ The cartoon i

22、s a criticism of the careless use of simplified characters.Obviously, the advertiser wants to inform people of the sale of something else- not dead bodies! But we dont know what it is, because the three characters which make up the message are used incorrectly. Nowadays too many people not only do n

23、ot take enough care to write properly, they even invent their own simplified ways of writing.Simplifying the old, complicated characters has been a great benefit, enabling people to learn to read and write quickly. But we should stick to the standard simplified characters, make sure that we use them

24、 properly, and definitely not make up our own simplified characters. Otherwise, what was intended to make communication easier could result in making it more difficult.图画+提纲+场景P7 2001 年写作考题评分标准及样卷76. Directions: Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has

25、 his/her own understanding of it.（不是重心 , 不能展开 ）There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,（描述，寓意）2) give a specific example, and（举例）3) give your suggestion as to the best

26、way to show love. You should write about （建议措施）200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2 (20 points)Sample 1（235 词 15 句）（背诵 5）(Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest.) 删除,败笔，机械抄袭命题语言 Love is of the utmost importance to us humans. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give

27、others love.As can be seen in the picture, “love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.“ This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than other people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strengt

28、h and courage to help them step out of their difficulties.I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following examples. (Numerous examples can be given easily, but these will suffice For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his(

29、her) life. Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her t o finish school and change her life. In these circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.To su

30、m up, we should offer our help to all the needed. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others. So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, dont hesitate to give your love to him (her). I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonio

31、us and our society will be a better place for us to live in. (20 分)Sample 2（背诵 6）It is generally believed that love is a hot topic which is most talked about.（意思重复，但是给人的印象很好）= Love is one of our /the favorite topic today. This is true not only in China but also in other countries. We live in differe

32、nt countries and speak different languages, but love is something common to us all. The picture tell us a simple truth: love is like a lamp which shines brightest in dark places.Love is most valuable when it is most needed. For example, once I saw a foreign lady get lost in the street. She could not

33、 speak Chinese and nobody seemed to be able to help her. Though my English is not very good and I am a shy person, I thought she needed help desperately(绝望地). I asked her what she wanted. She told me she lost her way, so I showed her the way to her hotel. It was a small thing but she thanked me very

34、 much/a lot because my help was needed greatly. Therefore, my help was like a lamp in a dark place.But how to show love may be different with different people in different countries. This is something we should give more thought to（more thoughts should be given to the way to show love）. I think we a

35、ll should be like a lamp in a dark place, showing our love, giving our help to others, even to strangers. In this way we can make this world a harmonious and peaceful world. (18 分)9 个句子 242 单词 加深两点认识：老师写的，全是复杂句子1文章趋势是复杂句子，基本上拿不到高分。2全是简单句子，也不行。*考试，考英语面掌握的宽度。句型多变化2001 年作文范文（背诵 7）When we use the word “

36、love“ we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, which is a very narrow definition of the word. The picture below illustrates the real meaning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes

37、. In fact, throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions.As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although the

38、ir incomes are still low by international standard s, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can-be it money or goods-to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves.In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help pe

39、ople who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of so

40、rrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.图表作文粗线条；原因，没点拓展一下；措施建议99 年 作文 (三)评卷实例Directions:A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words.B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET .C. Your essay should cover these three points: 1. effect of th

41、e countrys growing human population on its wildlife（描述图表，想大于现状，粗线条的描写）2. Possible reason for the effect3. Your suggestion for wildlife protection 样卷 1. 得分 14; 15 句话（背诵 8）From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that, with the growth of human population, the number of species has decreased rapidly

42、 in America, and some species have even vanished from our planet.33Why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are several possible reasons for this. First, with a rapid growth of population (as the human population expands), more and more people came to(逐渐开始) live where some wild species have be

43、en living. Then these species have to move to other places. Some of them probably cannot adapt to the new environment and die. Second, although many people look on the wildlife as their friends, some people may not think so. They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money.

44、Third, with the development of industry, the natural balance and the ecological environment are destroyed. The deforestation(采伐森林) has become more and more serious. So(锁定这一段 some of the wild lives become homeless and extinct. 123In order to protect the wildlife, I have some suggestions. First, the g

45、overnment s should make laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. Second, the governments should educate people to love nature and protect it. Third, as for ours elves, we should take practical actions to protect our living environment.49P18 范文三 老师写的在写一些文章时，不可避免的会有一些核心概念，避免重复。人口增长 野生动物 灭绝 构

46、成威胁THE UPS AND DOWNS OF POPULATION GROWTH (背诵 9)The two charts show that the increase in the U.S. population has been accompanied by a corresponding decline in the number of wildlife species. Far too many species have been lost already. This poses a danger to the ecological balance.As the human popu

47、lation expands, more and more wild animals are hunted for food, or because they are thought to present a threat to man. But studies show that one of the primary causes of the disappearance of wildlife is pollution, which is one of the consequences of population growth and economic development. This

48、makes us wonder if man is able to share this planet in harmony with other life forms.In my opinion, it is imperative(迫切的) to take steps to reverse the disturbing(令人困惑的) trend illustrated in the charts. One measure would be to forbid the building of cities in areas where wild life is threatened with

49、extinction. But, more importantly, man must learn to stop polluting the environment, or he himself will become extinct. 举例时，有两种方式：1举几个例子，每个例子都是高度浓缩，高度的提炼。2举一个例子，把这个例子细化。最后要有一个主题句，在后面锁定段落 范文十一Statistics in Peoples Daily Expenses in XianYear Item 1995 1996 1997 1998 1999Food 66 61 48 41 36Clothing 9 10 12 15 18Recreation 4 5 8 9 11Others 21 24 32 35 35Total 100 100 100 100 100 (背诵 10)What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the peoples daily expenses in Xian from 1995 to 1999. The expenses on food have declined by 30% while