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1、对比论点作文框架第一篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1、 有人做好事期望得到回报；2、 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报；3、 我的观点。A great many people presume upon a rew

2、ard when doing a good deed. First and foremost, there is a natural tendency to equate doing good deeds with a certain amount of reward, and reward with a certain amount of money. What is more, they maintain that since the basis of contemporary society is money, one of the major means of earning mone

3、y is getting reward by doing good deeds.（缺乏背景描述句）On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that doing a good deed should be based on peoples personal consciousness. Hence, doing a good deed is fulfilling itself and reward is of minimal significance. Numerous examples can be given, but this

4、 will suffice. Mr. Lei Feng lived a simple life dedicated to doing good deeds without expecting any reward and helping people from all walks of life, yet he was remembered as one of the most successful hero of our time. Generally speaking, it is my view that we should not expect a reward when doing

5、a good deed. Since we do this for enjoyment, self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement, not for the purpose of reward.（缺乏升华主题句, It is high time that）框架第二篇Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150

6、words following the outline given below.1 有人认为名字很重要2 也有人认为无关紧要，3 我认为Recently, it is universally acknowledged that due attention has to be paid to the importance of name. To begin with, a large number of people assert that ones name can exert profound influence on the success of a person or instituti

7、on. In addition, some even maintain that the mental health and physical fitness of a person will be influenced or even determined by his or her name.（缺乏背景描述句）On the contrary, it is the view of a great many people that ones name is of little significance. They can think of no better illustration than

8、 the following ones. “Qiu”， which means “hill”， is the name of Confucius, the greatest thinker, philosopher and educator throughout history. Likewise, another case in point is Lao Zi, the founder of philosophical and religious Taoism, whose name is “er”， which means “the ear”. These examples effecti

9、vely clarify that ones future is only determined by his striving spirit, talent or intelligence rather than some mysterious and superstitious factors such as certain names or lucky numbers. As for me, significance should be attached to intelligence, persistence and diligence instead of ones name. Gi

10、ven all the above arguments, it is high time that we put an end to this undesirable phenomenon.(适用于一方有明显的错误 )对比论点框架结构第一段：1. 背景描述句 （从句套从句）2. A 论点提出句 （be in favor of / prefer to ）3. A 论据提出句（一） （与论点因果关系）4. A 论据提出句（二） （并列或递进关系）第二段：5. 承上启下句+B 论点提出句（让步状语从句倒装）6. B 论据提出句（一） （与论点因果关系）7. B 论据提出句（一） （并列或递进关系）第

11、三段：8. 自身论点提出句（As far as I am concerned, ）9. 自身论点支持句（与论点因果关系）10. 总结句（Given all the above arguments,）赏析第三篇Directions: For this part you are allowed30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on University Ranking. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1. 目前高校排名相当

12、盛行2. 对这种做法人们看法不一3. 我认为There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for some individuals or organizations to rank universities. To this phenomenon peoples attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They claim that ranking universities can help high school graduates o

13、r their parents to make a sound choice when enrolling in a university or college. Besides, this practice can help promote the level of higher education as a whole in that many universities will exert efforts to elevate their position.Others, however, hold the opposite view. They point out that the r

14、esult of ranking is not always credible, for many individuals or institutions do it merely for the purpose of colleting money. Furthermore, some universities overemphasize the result of ranking and waste large amounts of resources.We should not go to extremes. On the one hand, it must be admitted th

15、at ranking is an effective means to encourage universities or colleges to compete with each other and improve their work. On the other hand, it should not be conducted and used in the wrong way. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the second view. What mentioned above shows that we put an end to

16、university ranking.（适用于两方没有明显的对错）仿写第四篇Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1. 家长送学生参加各种艺术班2. 有人支持，有人反对3. 作为大学生，我的观点There is a growing

17、tendency nowadays for parents to send their children to register and attend a great variety of arts courses, such as dancing, calligraphy and musical instruments training, etc. The attitudes of people towards this phenomenon vary from person to person. Some people maintain that these extra curriculu

18、ms are of great necessity and benefits to students. According to a recent survey on pre-school intelligence level, the respondents who take part in out-class courses tend to perform better than those who havent. Moreover, the former can have an all-round development by acquiring knowledge and skills

19、 which are not taught in their schools. On the contrary, others argue that these courses would bring about heavy burdens to students and thus oppose to this practice. They worry about that students might not have adequate time to take rest and reflect on what they have learned in school.（缺乏第二条论据）As

20、a university student, I have ever participated in some arts courses, such as singing, painting classes and dancing, which they proved to be helpful for my hobby development. Therefore, taking some extra curriculum courses properly is meaningful to students development in the long-term.模板总结举例：第一段：1.

21、, which is a hot point that we are talking about recently. / There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend forTo this phenomenon peoples attitudes differ sharply.2. Some people take it for granted that3. Since/ for/ the reason is that They can think of no better illustration tha

22、n the following ones.4. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more第二段：5. Compared with , has also its advantages. / 让步状语从句倒装6. Since/ for/ the reason is that Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice.7. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more第三段：8. As far a

23、s I am concerned, / As to me, I prefer to the opinion 9. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more（Actually I have reasons for it.）10. Given all the above arguments, it is high time that 单一论点文章现象解释型（框架第一篇）Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay enti

24、tled How to improve students mental health？You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1、 大学生的心理健康十分重要2、 因此，学校可以.3、 我们自己应当.Students mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing

25、 popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains. Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools,

26、 such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. Whats more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teachers may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be r

27、equired to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental

28、 illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.（通用结尾句）框架第二篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 m

29、inutes to write a short essay entitled Attention Should Be Given to Chinese. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1. 如今很多学生不重视中文学习2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果3. 我认为In recent years, the ignorance of Chinese has been prevailing among the students. In contrast, more and more student

30、s attach great importance to foreign languages since the economic globalization. In this essay, I will discuss the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.There are a number of factors which can be attributed to this situation. One of the most common factors is that t

31、he majority of people hold a view that English is the dominant language in the world and we should give priority to it. Moreover, although Chinese is a compulsory course in higher education, most professors and students havent given due attitude to it as fewer courses and credits are distributed to

32、Chinese and fewer students attend the class or choose it as their major. And the fundamental factor is that most students take it for granted that Chinese is their mother tongue and they have already mastered it.As far as I am concerned, this ignorance may be the very first step to furthermore overlook Chinese cultures and in order to avoid this consequence- to the students, they should read more Chinese articles not only to gain knowledge but also to broaden