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1、新东方在线 CET6 网络课堂电子教材系列 六级写作新 CET6 写作电子教材主讲：王兆飞 欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材六级写作讲义写作的三大原则：第一条原则：vary(变化、多样)第二条原则：input (输入、投入)语言学习的五种技能：听(listening)、说(speaking)、读(reading)、写(writing)、译 (translating)。第三条原则：practise (练习)写作出题分析一、出题内容六级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。具体说来可以分为两个方面：（1）关于大学生的话题：2007 年 1 月 6 级作文（

2、2）关于社会问题的话题：2006 年 6 月 6 级作文二、出题形式六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等。根据具体特点六级考试作文可以分为以下五个类型：对立观点型、解决问题型、谚语警句型、图表图画型、应用写作型。（一）对立观点型2000 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition onthe topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The Firs

3、t sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline (given in 新东方在线 CET6 网络课堂电子教材系列 六级写作Chinese) below:1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是. 2. 也有人持不同意见，. 3. 我的看法和打算（二） 解决问题型2003 年 12 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed th

4、irty minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:1有些大学校园浪费的现象日益严重2浪费的危害3杜绝浪费，从我做起2000 年 1 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College

5、Education. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多种途径解决。2. 哪种途径适合我（说明理由） 。1998 年 1 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commoditie

6、s. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 假冒伪劣商品的危害 2. 怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品（三）谚语警句型 1997 年 1 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words

7、and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below.1. 为什么“欲速则不达”？2. 举例说明。（四）图表图画型 2006 年 6 月 2003 年 9 月2003 年 6 月2002 年 6 月1996 年 6 月1992 年 1 月1991 年 6 月新东方在线 CET6 网络课堂电子教材系列 六级写作（五）应用写作型2005 年 12 月 2004 年 6 月2002 年 1 月2001 年 6 月三、时间与字数六级考试作文要求在 30 分钟内写出一篇不少于 150 词的文章。平均一行

8、的合理字数为 8 - 10 个单词，六级写作最合理字数为 180 左右。30 分钟的合理安排：5(审题和构思 )+20(正文)+5(检查)六级写作改卷分析应对改卷的五大策略1、字迹清楚，段落明朗2、内容完整，紧扣提纲3、首句正确，再求闪光4、先总后分，连词用上5、语言简练，内容得当具体改卷示例实例一2003 年 1 月真题Now in our society, many people are not honest in doing soming. We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest.

9、 For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box. Every people do that, but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. For another example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some stu

10、dents see others.I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be increase and make our socity develop. In doing every thing we should be honest all, study, word, life and so on. If you are honest, every people will be friend to you, an

11、d who will regard you are good people. But if you dont be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are want to be a good people, remember honest first.Nowadays, many people choose not to be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some stu

12、dents cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money, sometimes damaged the patients health, even their life.Seeing this situati

13、on. I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead 新东方在线 CET6 网络课堂电子教材系列 六级写作you to face your problem bravely, which helps to solve it. And the last, honest surely he

14、lps to make the society more harmony.So. I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.实例二1999 年 6 月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensivel

15、y? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人认为读书要有选择2. 有些人认为应当博览群书3. 我的看法When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that rea

16、ding extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good

17、books to read and never touch the bad books. But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know

18、more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.（11 分）注：when it comes to 当谈到的时候When it comes to reading, opinions differ

19、from person to person.Those people who think that reading selectively is better believe that good books are as many as bad books.可以表示“认为”：argue, claim, assert, hold, maintain. 但这些词一般跟在第三人称后面。But 改为 Howeverthe 去掉to my point 改成 in my opinion / in my view / As far as I am concernedI think reading not o

20、nly selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not 新东方在线 CET6 网络课堂电子教材系列 六级写作contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we li

21、ke. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On

22、 the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.（5 分）Most people thought that read books should have been selectived. But others belived reading extentively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?Sure, you can choice one fro

23、m previous ideas, on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us.on another hand. Someones intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldnt reading at only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas we

24、re good but werent wise.As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Dont treat these books with rackless abandon. The best technology of reading is connect.（2 分）How should we read? Should we read selectively or ext

25、ensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our m

26、ind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree. They emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge hell have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in

27、one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one f

28、ield.（14 分）注：more and more 可改为 an increasing number of Some people think reading shall be choosed. Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get 新东方在线 CET6 网络课堂电子教材系列 六级写作mu

29、ch knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books

30、 and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beauiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.（8 分）实例一 2003 年 1 月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty m

31、inutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。2. 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。It Pays to Be HonestIn our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many peopl

32、e are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good

33、not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, well feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and th

34、ey will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again.So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Lets create a morally outstanding social.注：show 改为 showing 或 在 show 前加 thathonest 前应加上 to beas the above is said 正确语序为 as is said aboveAlthough honesty is believed to be a v

35、irtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams. Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a

36、 result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they ar

37、e trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.In a word, honesty w

38、ins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.注：product 应改为复数形式With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly. 新东方在线 CET6 网络课堂电子教材系列 六级写

39、作Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made fro

40、m goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. We should be honest

41、from now on and be honest in our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest them our country will be beautiful and wealthy.注：economic 改为 economyindustry 改为 societycompetitive 改为 competitionobvious 改为 fierce (激烈的)more and more 最好改为 increasinglyphenomenon/phenomena 现象behavior/act

42、ion 行为fur 皮毛 skin 皮肤leather 皮革hide 兽皮from 改为 of六级写作高分策略避免五中常见错误：1、时态错误Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future. thought 应该改成 think2、单复数错误1)Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.seek 应该改为 seekswise man 前面应加上 a/the单数可数名词不可单独存在，要么加限定词，要么变复数。3、代词错误1) We can

43、 use computers in doing everything you like.you 应改为 weIf we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. 两个 you 都要改成 us4、冠词错误1)Horse is an useful animal.horse 前面应加上 a/the an 应改为 aa university an umbrella新东方在线 CET6 网络课堂电子教材系列 六级写作5、词性错误2) If a person wants to success,

44、he must learn to endure sufferingsand setbacks.success 应改为 succeed例文分析Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams. Dishonest people are short-sighted

45、. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but

46、gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his

47、employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people

48、, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist? Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise