高考英语书面表达试题分析.ppt

1、高考英语书面表达试题分析,曾用强广东外语外贸大学,试题结构,输入,过 程,输出,情景描述,写作要求,文字图画 应用文, 具体内容, 写作提纲, 自由发挥,功能意念陈述/描述（事实/事件）观点看法, 覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词 汇。 语法结构或词汇方面只有少许 错误。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑。,举例,请根据所给材料、提纲以及要求写一篇英文稿件。背景材料：English Horizons 第25卷 总228（5/2007）期编者按：本期刊出Lora的来信，欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。 Dear editor. Im a senior hig

2、h school student,and I want to work part-time this summer. I think it is good to do so,but my parents dont agree with me I just cant understand them I need your advice. Lora要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部 分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写须清晰、工整。提纲：第1段：Lora利用暑假打工的理由 第2段：Lora父母不同意的理由 第3段：你给Lora的具体建议,

3、内容构思：主题集中 内容关联语言表达：意义明确 句式准确连句成篇：结构衔接 意义连贯,举例,学生作文分析,Clothings Uses Throughout the word, clothing has many uses. It is used to provide protection from the elements. It also is worn to prevent others from seeing specific parts of ones body. Some clothing is worn to provide supernatural protection. To

4、day clothing is all kinds of different. Most of them are very beautiful. Women like beautiful clothing and men too. People in all cultures use clothing and other forms of bodily decoration to communicate status, intentions and other messages. Clothing is faction. Different people like different clot

5、hing. A clothing likes a people. It has different advantages and the same people. one clothing can point out one peoples advantages and disadvantages. And when the weather is hot, we can wear clothing which can make us feel cool. When the weather is cold, it can make us feel warm. Clothing has many

6、uses. I like clothing!,学生作文分析,Clothing and Status The deepest impression Text A makes on me is that: “People in all cultures use clothing and other forms of bodily decoration to communicate status, intentions and other messages.” The author told us that throughout the world, clothing has many uses,

7、but clothing also stand for status and other messages. These days, people who do manual work often receive far more money than people who work in offices. People who work in offices often called “white-collar workers”, for they always wear white collar and tie to go to work. But many people are will

8、ing to work in office instead of a manual worker. Why? Just for increasing their social status. Take a man for example, he worked on the company as a cleaner. People called him “Bloggs”. His salary was higher than any other white collar workers. But he, changed for a job as a white collar last week.

9、 Whats worse, his salary only equal half of a cleaner. Yet he was statisfied with the job, people never called “Bloggs”, called him “Mr. Alf”. His social status increased, while his salary was reduced. It is commonly believe that wear a lucky shirt to take an exam is calling for supernatural assista

10、nce. That is to say, clothing can create extrordianry power as well. In addition, we begin to tell the differences between the poor and the rich by clothing. Thus, clothing plays an important role in social activities. Thus choose a better clothing when you go to a party, which will increase your st

11、atus.,一、形式From my personal perspective, I firmly think my perents 拼写 always be 词形变化 my idol because they treat me always well and give me deep love.Boys and girls have different idol 词形变化, but they have the same idol is famous people.Boys and girls all like important people, and boy 词形变化 like sports

12、 star than girls. I have idol sport star 词形变化 because they sport is very well, I like sport. To our surprise, there are almost 50 percent of girl students treat the TV stars as their idols, while there are only 14 percent of boy student 词形变化 treat the TV stars as their idols.The girls likes 主谓一致 the

13、 stars than the sports men and the boys likes 主谓一致 the sports men than likes the stars.,试题,学生作文分析,二、结构From my personal perspective, I firmly think my perents 拼写 always be 词形变化 my idol because they treat me always well and give me deep love. 句子结构:语序 Boys and girls have different idol 词形变化, but they h

14、ave the same idol is famous people 句子结构:结构.Boys and girls all like important people, and boy 词形变化 like sports star than girls 句子结构:不完整. I have idol sport star 词形变化 because they sport is very well 句子结构:词性, I like sport. To our surprise, there are almost 50 percent of girl students treat the TV stars

15、as their idols, while there are only 14 percent of boy student 词形变化 treat the TV stars as their idols.The girls likes 主谓一致 the stars than the sports men and the boys likes 主谓一致 the sports men than likes the stars 句子结构:结构.,试题,学生作文分析,三、意义However, their parents are only the second idol for the girls an

16、d the third idols for the boys. 不够准确Last week,we made a survey among 2600 students for a topic which was that who is your idol. 不够简练The same point between boys and girls is the same percentage of Great men, but little different is the place 用词不当.The idol of great people were the same, which was abou

17、t 18% of girls or boys and there were 1% of boys havent any idols. 语义关系混淆From the survey, there are more girls like film stars while more boys like sport stars. 不符逻辑 I no idol, I think I was best good. 汉式英语,试题,学生作文分析,写作能力的培养,词,短语,句,篇,同现关系词,词语搭配,句法(句型)结构,篇章连贯,How should one invest a sum of money in t

18、hese days of inflation (通货膨胀)? Left in a bank it will hardly keep its value, however high the interest rate. Only a brave man, or a very rich one, dares to buy and sell on the Stock Market. Today it seems that one of the best ways to protect your savings and even increase your wealth is to buy beaut

19、iful objects from the past. Here I am going to offer some advice on collecting antique clocks, which I personally consider as one of the most interesting of antiques.,How should one invest a sum of money in these days of inflation (通货膨胀)? Left in a bank it will hardly keep its value, however high th

20、e interest rate. Only a brave man, or a very rich one, dares to buy and sell on the Stock Market. Today it seems that one of the best ways to protect your savings and even increase your wealth is to buy beautiful objects from the past. Here I am going to offer some advice on collecting antique clock

21、s, which I personally consider as one of the most interesting of antiques.,How should one invest a sum of money in these days of inflation (通货膨胀)? Left in a bank it will hardly keep its value, however high the interest rate. Only a brave man, or a very rich one, dares to buy and sell on the Stock Ma

22、rket. Today it seems that one of the best ways to protect your savings and even increase your wealth is to buy beautiful objects from the past. Here I am going to offer some advice on collecting antique clocks, which I personally consider as one of the most interesting of antiques.,Friends形容词搭配best,

23、 bosom, close, dear, good, great, intimate, real, specialHer best friend at school was called Anna.Im inviting only my closest friends to the party.faithful, loyal, true, lifelong, long-standing, oldIt was so relaxing to be among old friends.动词搭配become, remain, stayThey became friends after meeting on holiday.find, make, winShes made friends with the little girl who lives next door.He wont win any friends if he carries on talking like that.,举例,谢 谢!,