1、 高一短文改错练习及答案 下面 各 短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。每句最多两处错误。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ; 2. 只允许修改 10 处 , 多者 ( 从第 11 处起 )不计分。 1.短文改错 Dear sir, Im glad to recommend (推荐 ) my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming was born in July 15, 19
2、74 in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics. After four year of hard work there, he went to the United
3、 States for further study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctors degree in physics in last year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation Looking forward to receive your early reply! Yours truly
4、, Wang Lin 2.短文改错 It seems that there are a larger number of beggar in the streets than there used to be. I dont know how we should help them or not. Once I gave some money to a beggar who looks poor. However, minutes late, I saw him bought some cigarettes. It really shocked at me. In my opinion, an
5、yone who work hard can make a living. Im afraid that giving them money isnt best way to help them. Maybe the government can take some action to helping them. Anyway, if they want to live a better life, they should learn to depend on ourselves. 3. 短文改错 My father go fishing alone every Sunday. This mo
6、rning when we were got up , it was fine. Father decided to go fishing, so mother stopped him,said that it was going to rain according to the weather forecast. She asked him to put off his raincoat, but he did not take her advices. When he got to the river, it was cloud. Soon the rain began to fall h
7、eavily and he was caught in it. After she got home , he was wet through. “Did you catch some fish?” asked my mother. “No, but I caught bad cold,” he answered. 4. 短文改错 While studying in Britain, I stayed with a British family. I got to learn about the life of common people here. I took lots of course
8、s, included English literature, and the history of Britain. During my stay, I had visited many libraries and museums and I traveled to several British cities as well. With this way, I experienced part of British culture. This was really enjoyable and unforgettable experience, that helped me in many
9、ways. Firstly, I learned to make some decision by myself. Secondly, I got to know many about the differences between Britain and China. Final, I made many friends there and had my English improve. 5. 短文改错 Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy. She was
10、 upsetting about the news herself. In the spring, Marias mother had said Maria might be allowed bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach. Since then, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they would do together. By the time August had arrived, Ma
11、rias mother had total forgotten her promise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but that it wouldnt be enough room for Freddy because Marias cousin, Theresa, would be going to the shore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Marias house. 6. 短文改错 Once upon a time there was a boy w
12、ho fond of reading. However, he was very poor to buy any books. That was the reason that he had to borrow books from a rich man who had a lot of books. The boy knew clearly that he has to finish reading the books he had borrowed and return it to the owner as soon as possible. A rich man, who was rea
13、dy to lend any of his book to the boy, read few of his own books. With time going on, the boy read a lot but finally became a famous writer in his time. Though the rich man had such many books, he remained a man with little knowledge because of he seldom read his books. 7.短文改错 Yang Li, a five-year-o
14、ld girl living next door to me, very clever. Because she is not old enough to go to the school, she often asks me to teach herself to read, write and draw. She studies hardly and soon she learns a lot. One evening last month I was doing my English homeworks when she came to my house. She asked me ho
15、w I learned English. “You would find English a bridge for so much knowledge,” I said. She then wanted to learn English, either. She has learned many English words so far but her parents are very grateful to me. 8.短文改错 When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two American I became their guid
16、e First, we went to the Shouxi River They wanted to look around the river by theboat After buy the tickets, we got into a boat We went around seeing the beautiful sight After that, we went shopping The sellers couldnt spoke English Though it was very harder, I tried my best listen to their words car
17、efully and translate the sentences They bought some little things with their help Next, we went to a small zoo but took somepictures When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history 9. 短文改错（满分 10 分） One night, Mrs Riley, an
18、elderly woman, was walking along a dark, London street. She was carrying her handbag in one hand and a plastic shopping bag in other. There was somebody else in the street except two youths. They were standing in a dark shop doorway. One of them was very tall in golden hair. And the other was short
19、and fat. The youths waited for a few moments, and then run quickly and quietly towards Mrs Riley. The tall youth held him from behind until the other youth tried to grasp her handbag. Suddenly, Mrs Riley threw the tall youth over her shoulder. He crashed into the other youth and they all landed on t
20、he ground. Without speaking, Mrs Riley struck them on the head with her handbag, and walked calm away. The two surprising youths were still on the ground when Mrs Riley walked across the street towards a door with a lighted sign above it. Mrs Riley paused, turned, smiled and entered into the South L
21、ondon Judo Club. 10.单句改错 In recent years, dust storms take place more and more often in the north of Chinese. Here are some good way to have a good talk with your parents. During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life. I was really exciting when I was offered the opportunity to go t
22、o Guangzhou for my work. The experience has shown that traveling by air is actually the safest way of make journeys. I wish to know anything more about the Chinese way of living. The boy thought of a wonderfully idea. Please give me some advices. I wonder at if you can tell me about it in your lette
23、r . Life in the twenty-first century will be very different with life today. 11. 短文改错 There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train. They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows them enjoy more freedom at their destination while
24、 a return not only is cheaper but also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like t
25、o have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs. 12.短文改错（ 10 分） Dear Mr. Green, Im Li Hua, a student whom you once teach spoken English. Now our school asks me invite you to be a spoken English teacher on t
26、he English Summer Camp during the summer holiday. Here is anything about the activity. The camp lasts from July, 20 and August 10, 2011. In the morning, youll give three spoken English classes so you are expecting to prepare different topic to communicate with students. In the afternoon, therere mai
27、n outside activities such as having some picnics and visit parks and museums, etc. I hope you will accept the invitation even if you have free time. 13. 单句 改错 1. She got quite angry, think that she had to do this job every day. 2. At the end of the third period, the Australians were winning to eight
28、 points. 3. There are a lot of factors that makes innovation possible. 4. Were practising even much more regularly and were training harder than ever. 5. The biggest secret about inventing is anybody can do it! 14.短文改错 My classmate, Hanks, have been sick in hospital for a week. Yesterday our class d
29、ecided send him some flowers and asked me to buy the flowers. I have had a hard time get them since then. I went to town immediate after class yesterday afternoon only to found the flower shop there already closed. So I returned with nothing. I called it many times at this morning. But the line was
30、always busy. While I finally got through at noon, a lady said she was a new hand and could not tell me the prices. Luckily, I have classes this afternoon, but I am about to go to town again. I must get the flowers for Hanks today. 15.短文改错 Last year my school planned to set up the football team. I wa
31、s exiciting about the news though I was a football fan. I entered for it, only to be told that I was too fat. However, they said there will be a test three months later. If I could lose weight successful, I would be admitted. So I decided get up early every morning to do exercise. It was difficulty
32、for me to get up early, especially in winter. I made a great effort to get up on the first few day, but I did not get up the follow days. At last I failed in. How I regret now! If I had continued with my exercise, I would have achieved my goal and become a member of our school team now. 参考答案 1.1.in-
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44、ted 65. of-to/ make-making 66. anything-something 67. wonderfully-wonderful 68. advices-advice 69. 去掉 at 70. with-from 11.There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train. They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows them enjoy mor
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47、, a student whom you once teach spoken English. Now our school asks taught me invite you to be a spoken English teacher on the English Summer Camp during the summer to for holiday. Here is anything about the activity. The camp lasts from July 20 and August 10, 2011. In the something to morning, youl
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