1、短文改错练习 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 A This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass. I
2、eat too much, so I couldnt finish my sandwich. As I didnt know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, “No litter.“ And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an idea came i
3、nto her mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, “What clever you are!“ B Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till
4、 night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.“ That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw
5、him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him. C Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don t like it, because online shopping is less reli
6、able than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers cant feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk ret
7、urning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isnt reliable at all. D My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the
8、 hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable pri
9、ces, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. E Today we has the honor of invite Professor Smith to give us an English lesson. All of us were deeply impressing by this unforgettable English lesson. The professor
10、began the class in an amusing English story, which attracted our attentions at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that we could follow him well. Great inspired, most of us took an active part in classroom activities. After class, many students being interviewed spoke highly of him. They said never
11、 before have they experienced such interesting a class. From his lesson, we came to conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English whether we find a good way. F In England, nobody under 18 are allowed to drink in a bar. Mr. Thompson used to going to a bar near his house, or he never took hi
12、s son, Tom, because he was too young. Then when Tom had his eighteen birthday, Mr. Thompson took him to his usual bar. After drinking at half an hour, Mr. Thompson said to his son, “Tom, I want to teach you an useful lesson. You must always be careful never drink too much.” “How do you know how youv
13、e had enough?” asked Tom. “Do you see those two lights at the end of the bar? When it seem to have become four, youve had enough and should go to home.” “But , Dad, I can see only one.” said Tom. G Dear John, Im very pleasing to know you are coming to study in Beijing. It is really good idea to impr
14、ove your Chinese before the new term began. And now let me to tell you something about the school. First, it is very conveniently for you to get there by Bus No. 16. Next, the classes are very small. There are 24 teaching hour a week. After class, you can enjoy sports and activities with other stude
15、nts. Stay with a Chinese family will provide you with a chance to practise your Chinese but know more about the Chinese family life. The time will suit you and only 200 yuan are paid per month. Ill get touch with them if you are interested in this school. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yo
16、urs, Li Hua H Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two ticke
17、ts for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happ
18、ily for them and wished them safe journey. 答案 A 1. 第二句删掉第一个 the 2. 第三句 eat改为 ate 3. 第四句 advices改为 advice 4. 第五句 that改为 which 5. 第六句 throw前加 to 6. 第七句 slow改为 slowly 7. 第八句 her改为 my 8. 第九句 by改为 with/on 9. 第十句 Seen改为 Seeing 10. 第十句 What改为 How B 11. 第二句 with改为 on 12. 第三句删掉 so 13. 第四句 have 改为 has 14. 第五句
19、 healthy改为 health 15. 第六句 which改为 what 16. 第七句 paid 后加 a 17. 第八句 her改为 his 18. 第十句 step 改为 stepped 19. 第十一句 picture 改为 pictures 20. 第十二句 as many as 中的 many改为 much C 21. increasing改为 increasingly 22. liked 改为 like 23. And 改为 But 24. merchant改为 merchants 25. 去掉 to 26. is改为 are 27. delivering改为 deliver
20、ed 28. which改为 what 29. our改为 their 30. word 前加 a D 31. visit改为 visited 32. but改为 so/and 33. go to anywhere. 删掉 to 34. comfortably改为 comfortable 35. I liked best were 中的 were 改为 was 36. shared for中的 for改为 with 37. taking改为 taken 38. dish改为 dishes 39. such后加 a 40. friend of me 中的 me 改为 mine E 41. inv
21、ite 改为 inviting 42. impressing改为 impressed 43. class后的 in 改为 with 44. attentions 改为 attention 45. Great改为 Greatly 46. being去掉 47. before 后的 have 改为 had 48. such改为 so 49. conclusion 前加 a 50. whether改为 if F 51. are 改为 is 52. to 后 going改为 go 53. or改为 and 或者 but 54. eighteen改为 eighteenth 55. at改为 for 56
22、. an改为 a 57. drink 前加 to 58. know后 how改为 that或者 when 59. it改为 they 60. 去掉 home 前的 to G 61. pleasing改为 pleased 62. good 前加 a 63. began改为 begins 64. 删掉 to 65. conveniently改为 convenient 66. hour改为 hours 67. Stay改为 Staying 68. but改为 and 69. are 改为 is H 70. touch前加 in 71. their前加 with 72. search改为 searched 73. informations 改为 information 74. we 改为 I 75. had 改为 was 76. the suitcase 前加 into 77. what改为 that/which 78. show改为 see 79. happily改为 happy 80. safe 前加 a
