1、1历年中考英语作文满分精选【书面表达 1】近日，某中学“iPad 进课堂” 的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你校的 English Newsletter 正在以“iPads ，Coming into the Classrooms”为题举办征文活动，请你根据下列表格(略) 提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。iPads, Coming into the ClassroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new te
2、aching methods.The students dont think they have to carry heavy bags any more. Its cool to have lessons over iPads. Its very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better. However, parents think using iPads for too long will influence childrens eyesight. And some
3、poor families cant afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. Its easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【书面表达 2】 (2014 镇江卷) 父母的鼓励有利于孩子健康成长。鼓励可以是赞许的话语，也可以是一份礼物。请根据表格描述李江的父母曾经对他鼓励的方式，对此做出你的
4、评价并表达你希望你的父母如何鼓励你。人物 成长的点滴 鼓励的方式李江 学习进步 买礼物，如：文具 (stationery) 、手机等竞赛获奖 去饭店庆祝你的评价与希望 分担家务 多给零花钱要求：1所写内容必须包括所有信息，可适当发挥；2评价李江父母的做法；表达你希望你的父母如何鼓励你；3文章不少于 90 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；4语气通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整；5文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。Parents encouragement is good for their childrens growth. Its a nice way for parents to
5、 speak highly of their children when they make progress. It is very common for parents to buy their children presents. For example, when Li Jiang made progress in his study, his parents bought him stationery, a mobile phone and so on. After Li Jiang won prizes in the competitions, his parents took h
6、im to the restaurant for a big dinner. When Li Jiang did some housework, he could get some extra pocket money from his parents.I dont think/suppose its really a good way for Li Jiangs parents to give him something or money as encouragement. I dont want my parents to buy me something when Ive done ve
7、ry well in my study. I hope they can give me more chances to decide what I can do in my free time. If so, I will be more confident to do everything better. And its good for my growth. (138 words)【书面表达 3】假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。请参考表格内容，用英语写一份倡议书。读书的意义 1. 获取知识，开阔视野；2. 使人愉悦，益于学习；3. （自由
8、发挥）现 状 1. 作业多，无良好读书习惯；2. 电视和网络占时多。倡 议 （至少两点）要求：1）要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯。2）正确使用时态，语法正确,书写整洁。3）80 词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2Dear friends,Reading is very important in our daily life. First of all, reading will help us get knowledge from all kinds of books. It can also help us to open up a whole new world. Secon
9、d, reading will help us to be clever and happy. Third, reading can help us think further and make our life more colorful. However, there is usually so much homework for us to do that we dont have enough time for reading. Moreover, some of us dont have a good habit for reading. We shouldnt spend too
10、much time in front of TV or searching the Internet.In my opinion, our school can have a Reading Week once a term. Teachers should encourage their students to borrow books from the library. We must spend more time reading good books. As a result, we can have a bright future. Lets start reading now! 【
11、书面表达 4】家规孟子曰：“不以规矩，不成方圆”。家规体现着家人的价值追求和传承，也是社会风气、公民道德的源头。请根据下面表格内容的提示, 以“My family rules”为题，写一篇短文。My Family RulesMost families have some rules for children to follow. Family rules are good for our growth. We can also know how to behave properly both at home and at school with the help of these rules.
12、There are some rules in my family. First of all, I am told to be honest and polite at any time. Second, I should be grateful to others for their help. My parents often tell me not to forget those people who once gave me help. Last but not the least, I am asked to do some housework when I am free.My
13、family rules are a good influence on me. I always tell the truth, so my classmates all trust me. I often help my friends in need. At weekends, I also do some cleaning to make my parents happy and relaxed.【书面表达 5】网购现在网上购物已成为一种时尚，越来越多的人喜欢在网上购物。网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题。你们班上周进行了关于网购利与弊的讨论。同学们各抒己见。请根据下表的讨论记录，结合
14、你自己对此事的看法，给校报写一篇英语短文.赞成商品多，价格优惠。足不出户就能买到各种各样的东西。省钱省交通费反对不能接触或试穿，质量无法保证，网上付款也存在不安全因素你的观点 （至少一点）Possible words： convenient(方便的)，deliver( 发送)We had a discussion about whether to go shopping on the Internet. Opinions are different.Some people think shopping on the Internet has made our daily life more c
15、onvenient and comfortable. The goods, come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. People dont have to waste a lot of their energy and time to go from one shop to another to choose the goods they like. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the Mice. They can co
16、mpare the quality and prices and choose the best products. Then the goods they order will be delivered to them quickly.However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that people cant see the goods or try them on. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same
17、as what they have seen on the Internet. The second disadvantage is that some shop owners on the Internet are not honest. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money 3from you. Once cheated, you will find that it is hard to go to complain.【书面表达 6】要获取知识，我们就离不开阅读。我们应该从小培养良好的阅读习惯，把阅
18、读作为终身的爱好。请以 Reading Is a Good Thing 为题目，写一篇英语短文。Reading Is a Good ThingWith the development of science and technology, new knowledge comes every day. If you stops learning even for a day, you will likely lag behind or even be lost. (落后甚而迷失)Reading is a good way to help you to get in touch with the o
19、utside world. Read widely and you will be rich in knowledge. As we all know, knowledge is power. With knowledge you will be a powerful person. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. You can get a lot of fun in books. Whats more, books are good friends to comfort(安慰) you when you are unhappy.
20、So long as you have a good book at hand, you wont feel lonely. Every valuable book will open a new world in front of you. Reading is a good thing for any book lover. 【书面表达 7】Less stress, better life为了发现并解决同学们学习生活中的心理压力问题，你们班开展了以“Less stress, better life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请准备发言稿，谈谈缓解压力的好办法。内容包括：1同学们中普遍存在的压力
21、是什么； 2我的压力是什么；3我是如何成功缓解压力的。注意：1文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，写规范；3词数 80 左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Less stress, better lifeHello, boys and girls!Stress is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much stress. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while o
22、thers may worry about their exams.Im always under stress, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired and needed time to rela
23、x. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problemThats all. Thank you!【书面表达 8】近年来，很多地区出现了不同程度的雾霾(smog/haze)天气，给我们的学习、工作和生活带来一定的影响。假如你是李明，请根据表格内所给信息给环保俱乐部( Environment Club)的王主席写一封申请信，希望能成为该俱乐部的志愿者( volunteer) ，为环境保护尽一份责任。 (smoke+fog=smog)就读
24、于第一中学八（3）班；个人信息彬彬有礼，乐于助人。空气质量差，危害健康；能见度低，常常引发交通意外；天气状况部分地区的学校停课。政府应该采取措施治理空气污染几点建议（至少自拟两点）Dear Mr Wang,Heavy smog hit some areas of our country. It has had a bad effect on our study, work and life. I think its a problem to be solved immediately.(过渡句) to be dealt with4Im now a student in Class 3, Gra
25、de 8 in No. 1 Middle School. I receive/get good education from the teachers and I learn to be polite and helpful to others. So Im much concerned about(关注) the problem of smog in many parts of China. We may complain about (抱怨) the poor quality of air and the possible harm to health. We are much worri
26、ed about the weather conditions like low visibility. It is not uncommon for us to see the traffic accidents in bad weather. Moreover(=Furthermore), schools in parts of China have to be closed because of (=due to) the possible bad effects. In my view/opinion (=In a word), our government should/must t
27、ake steps/measures to stop the air pollution. For instance, wed better drive less and take buses more often because it helps to reduce the air pollution. Whats more, any factory with heavy pollution should be closed if it takes no steps to improve its situation. (156 words)【书面表达 9】校团委正举行“畅想未来”的征文活动，
28、请根据提示，以“My ideal school life”为题，写一篇 100 词左右的短文。（开头及结尾已给出，不计人总词数）现在 未来多彩的校园生活（课外活动）多样的学习方式（网上学习）和谐的人际关系（交友互助）至少写两点现在的情况丰富的校外活动（做志愿者）My ideal school lifeI am a student in Grade 9. I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful. Im very happy to study in the school.We have five classes every d
29、ay. I like all the lessons, because they are interesting and we can choose our favorite lessons to learn. At noon, we have an hours rest time, during which we can chat with each other.I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. We can play ball games every day. Therere many organizatio
30、ns and clubs in our school and Id like to join in such activities. Doing homework is part of the school life, and it is challenging sometimes. We often use e-mails to send our homework to teachers. Our teachers and classmates are helpful and kind all the time. During my holidays, I want to be a volu
31、nteer to help others in need.This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day.【书面表达 10】这是学校学生会最近在全校高中学生中进行的一次“你是否在上课时记笔记？”的调查。你作为校报记者，请用英语将调查的情况写成一篇短文刊登在校报上。【写作内容】调查范围和对象 全体高中学生，共 2105 人调查结果 25%的学生记笔记，他们的学习成绩都较好37%的学生尝试记笔记，但不会记，希望老师指导38%的学生根本不记笔记，不知道记什么调查结果 令人担忧你对调查结果的看法 【写作要求】只
32、能使用 5 个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。Recently a survey has been carried out on whether you take notes in class or not among all the 2105 senior students. I am so worried about the finding of the survey. The data shows that only a quarter of the students surveyed often take note in class, whic
33、h helps to get their studies improved ,while about 37% of the students do a try ,but they dont know how to take notes ,hoping to get a hand from the teachers. To 5my surprise, from the survey I know about 38% of the students have never taken notes, for they have no idea what to take in class. In my
34、opinion, our teachers should tell the students what to write down in class so that we can make greater progress in study.试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构， （2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用 5 个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要
35、点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息，如范文里面的句子：The data shows that only a quarter of the students surveyed often take note in class, which helps to get their studies improved ,while about 37% of the students do a try ,but they dont know how to take notes ,hoping to get a hand from the teachers.既有宾语从句，又有定语从句，也有 whi
36、le 连接的并列句。点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。【书面表达 11】假如你是 Alice，你想写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学 Daniel 获得今年的“新星奖” 。推荐信词数为 100 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Dear Sir / Madam,I would like to recommend Daniel for this years Young Star Award.Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his
37、neighbors fix computers. He always offers his seat to someone on the bus.He is also clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard on all the subjects. He is even able to put up tents when we go camping.He is brave, too. One Sunday morning, he sat by the lake and read books as usual. Suddenly, he h
38、eard a girl . He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water. At last, he sent her home(未成年人施救他人？不提倡！)Daniel is polite and kind to others. He always says “hello” to his teachers. (He thinks carefully when he works. He plans everything well. He often takes part in all kinds of activities l
39、ike collecting clothes and books for the children in need. )All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours faithfully,Alice【书面表达 12】假设你校为配合创建“文化校园 高效课堂”活动，最近以“学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案？”为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成，但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，以“Thin
40、k before you search online”为题用英语写一篇短文。赞成者 反对者 你自己不会做题 不利于能力提升 考生自拟学习别人 不利于思维发展 （至少两点）观点节省时间 Think before you search onlineSome students now have a new use for the Internethelping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.Some students agree with it. They sometimes
41、dont know the answers to the problems, so they have to turn to the Internet. They think they can learn from other people. At the same time, its easy and it saves time. However, not all the students welcome this. Many students think (that) simply copying the 6answers wont improve their abilities and
42、that it may make students stop thinking.As for me, students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study. (=As far as Im concerned, In my opinion/view, From my standpoint, In a word, .)【书面表达 13】中山公园醉鸡有很多问题。假设你是 Tom，请你写一封 80 词左右的
43、信呼吁人们保护环境，遵守规则。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词 数。可以适当发挥。要点如下：1首先，不要乱扔垃圾，保持公园的清洁，不要摘公园里的花；2其次，在公园里大声谈笑是粗鲁无礼的，请把声音放低；3第三，如果有人挡住你的路，可以说“劳驾”等他移动；4还应向人们解释保护公园的重要性；5做这些对我们的环境以及健康都有好处。Dear all,The environment in Zhongshan Park has become worse recently. We must do something to stop itFirst, we shouldnt drop litter everyw
44、here and always keep the park clean. We should never pick flowers in the park Second, its rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park Please keep our voice down Third, if someone is in your way, please say “Excuse me“ and wait till he moves. We should also explain to others the importance of protecting
45、 the park. Its good for our environment as well as our health by doing this.Yours sincerely,Tom【英文写作常用衔接方式】1. 表示“起”的常用词（组）：用于开篇引出扩展句。at first/firstly, in the beginning, first of all/in the first place, at present/ nowadays/currently, to begin with/to start with, lately/recently, for one thing. . . (
46、for another), in general/generally speaking/on the whole, on one hand. . . (on the other hand) , it goes without saying that. .2. 有关“承”的常用词（组）：用来承接上文。after/after that/afterwards, also/too, at any rate, at the same time/meanwhile, besides (this), by this time, certainly, consequently, for example/for
47、 instance, for this purpose, from now on, furthermore, in addition (to), in fact, in other words, in particular, indeed, moreover, no doubt, obviously, of course, particularly, second/secondly, similarly, so, soon, still, then, third/thirdly, for another, such as, truly, unlike . . , what is more3.
48、有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见。after all, all the same, at the same time, but, by this time, conversely, in/by contrast, even though, though/although, nonetheless, still, in fact, as a matter of fact, despite, especially, fortunately/luckily, however, in spite of, nevertheless, no doubt, on the contrary, c
49、ontrarily, on the other hand, otherwise, unfortunately, unlike, whereas, yet4. 有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。above all, accordingly, as a consequence, as a result, as has been noted, at length, briefly, by and large, by doing so, certainly/surely, consequently/hence/therefore/thus, eventually/ finally/at last, for this reason, in a word/all in all/in brief/in short, in sum/in summary/to sum up/to summarize, in conclusion/to conclude, no doubt, obviously, on the whole, to speak f
