1、英语 (一二 )大作文写作全景套路大作文写 3 段，总共 12 句左右(其中，第一段 3 句话，第二段 5 句话，第三段 4 句话)，全篇160250 个单词，含 57 个关联词(适可而止)，含 57 个从句(多多益善)。(微信号：kaoyanx)第一段 ，图画 /图表描述 (3 句话 )1.总体描述( 人物+ 动作+环境或数据变化规律) ，1 句。2.细节描述( 挖掘细节词，串联成句)，1 句。(微信号：kaoyanx)3.文字说明或象征寓意，1 句。或者参考：3 句话秒杀大作文开头(详见第 19 期军火库)第二段 ，意义阐释 (5 句话 )1.主题句，象征寓意，1 句。2.论证，3 句。/
2、手段#1：因果论证(详见第 54 期军火库)( 微信号：kaoyanx)/手段#2：举例论证(详见第 53 期军火库)句型 1：Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.(用于举例之前)( 微信号：kaoyanx)句型 2：I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).(用于举例之前)句型 3：This/these case(s) effectively clarify that.(用于举例之后)表示举例的关联词：a case in p
3、oint(一个恰当的例子)after allas a proof(微信号： kaoyanx)as an illustrationas an examplefor example/for instance(微信号：kaoyanx)in particularjust asnamely(微信号：kaoyanx)specifically(特别的)that isto illustrateto demonstrate(微信号：kaoyanx)/手段#3：利弊对比(详见第 55 期军火库)/手段#4：联系现实常用词汇：represent：代表symbolize：象征(微信号：kaoyanx)epitomiz
4、e：是. 的缩影be naturally associated with.：自然与.联系起来3.小结，概括论证，总结本段，1 句。第三段 ，归纳结论 /建议措施 (4 句 话)1.结论句，呼应象征寓意，1 句。(微信号：kaoyanx)2.两点结论或两点建议(针对双方提建议，参考第 56 期军火库)，2 句。3.包装结尾，展望未来，1 句。(微信号：kaoyanx)或者参考：3 类型模板秒杀大作文结尾(详见第 19 期军火库)扩展阅读 ：17 无敌句型+2 万能模板句+高分例子库绝杀大作文大作文如何写利弊对比(4+3 句型)6 类句型疯狂绝杀大作文“因果分析 ”大作文中最常用的解决问题的 6
5、大对策句型+2 大对策模板3 句话秒杀大作文开头3 模板秒杀大作文结尾英语 (一二 )小作文 (书 信) 写作全景套 路第 一 ，书信写作框 架考研小作文的书信内文只需写四大方面：1.称呼2.正文(微信号：kaoyanx)3.结尾礼词4.署名/1.称呼在以往考试中，称呼出现过四种情况：Dear+姓，比如：Dear Mr. Wang,(微信号：kaoyanx)Dear+名，比如：Dear Bob,Dear+头衔，比如：Dear Mr. manager, Dear editor,如果题目中没有告知明确的收信人是谁，称呼这样写：（1）Dear Sir or Madam,（2）To whom it m
6、ay concern,注意：无论哪一种称呼，后面的标点符号都是逗号。(微信号：kaoyanx)/2.正文正文有 2 种书写格式：缩进式(常用格式)：即每个段落的开头空 4 个字母，段与段之间没有空行(微信号：kaoyanx)。齐头式：即每个段落的开头都顶格写，段与段之间必须空一行。/3.结尾礼词有 2 种情况：如果写公务信函，结尾礼词写 Yours sincerely,(或：Sincerely yours,)，Yours faithfully,。(微信号：kaoyanx)如果给比较亲密的人(比如同学、父母、朋友) 写信，结尾礼词写 Yours,即可(微信号：kaoyanx)。/4.署名看题目要
7、求写署名。每次考书信写作，题目要求中都有这样一句话：Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.此时，你署 Li Ming 就可以。第 二 ，书信写作套路与句 式很明显，书信重点在正文。而写正文特别注意三点：/1.开门见山说意图第一段第一句话必须说明写信目的。可套用以下句型：I am writing this letter to appreciate.(感谢信)(微信号：kaoyanx)I am writing this letter to apologize for.(道歉信)I am w
8、riting this letter to apply for.(申请信/求职信)I am writing this letter to complain about.(投诉信)(微信号：kaoyanx)I am writing this letter to inquire about.(咨询信)/2.感谢客气不能少写信的目的都是求人办事，所以，一定要感谢对方。下面是 2 句“感谢客套话”，可任选其一，放在书信最后一段的第一句。I really appreciate your attention to my letter/request.(我真的非常感谢你对我这封信(我这个请求)的关注)(微信
9、号： kaoyanx)I am really grateful for your consideration of my request.(你能考虑我的请求，我表示衷心感谢 )(微信号：kaoyanx)/3.期待回信要记牢书信写到最后，就是要期待对方回信了。下面是 2 句话，可任选其一，放在书信最后一段的第二句(注：最后一段共 2 句话)。I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible.(我期待您能尽快回信)(微信号：kaoyanx)I am looking forward to your reply at your earlies
10、t convenience.(我希望您能在方便时尽快回复)(微信号：kaoyanx)/4.补充说明小作文写作时间最好控制在 15 分钟之内；( 微信号：kaoyanx)最好写满 120 个单词。虽然试卷要求“no less than 100 words”，但超出阅卷人期待总有意外收获。第一，第一句话的任务是 评价图画的价值，应该写成： “这幅图画虽然简单但是令人深思 。 ”注：务必牢记以下四个句型，考场上可任选其一。句型如下：This cartoon(picture/drawing) is humorous but significant.(这幅卡通 (图画 )很幽默但是意义深远 )The c
11、artoon is simple but reveals a profound meaning.(这幅图很简单却揭示了深刻的意义 )(微信号：kaoyanx)The drawing above is really thought-provoking.(上面这幅图的确令人深思 )The drawing does mirror a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking.(这幅图确实反映了一个普遍的社会现象而且的确令人深思 )(微信号：kaoyanx)第二，第二句话的任务是 描述图画，分为两种情况：描述 人物 和描述 物体
12、。1.描述人物重点是描述两个动作，套用下面公式：如图所示，次要动作， sb. is doing/do 主要动作注：次要动作一般是 V+ing 形式，或者 with+名词的形式。 (微信号： kaoyanx)举例如下：/例 1：As is vividly depicted in the photo(如图所示), wearing traditional Chinese costume(次要动作),an American girl is smiling(主要动作 )to us.(2002 年真题 “中西文化交流 ”)(微信号：kaoyanx)/例 2：As is vividly depicted i
13、n the photo(如图所示), sitting in a barbershop(次要动作), a young man spent(主要动作)300 Yuan on his hairstyle of Beckham.(2006 年真题 “偶像崇拜 ”)(微信号：kaoyanx)2.描述物体套用下面公式：如图所示， there is a sth./sb. which/who .(定语从句 )/例 1：As vividly depicted in the drawing(如图所示), there is a boiling pot which hold various ingredients(要
14、素 ) of cultures.(定语从句)(2010 年真题 “文化营养要均衡 ”)(微信号：kaoyanx)/例 2：As shown in the picture above(如图所示), there is a house with many rooms in which there sit some people communicating with each other through Internet.(定语从句)(2009 年真题 “互联网的远与近 ”)(微信号：kaoyanx)现在，你已经拥有了两个描写公式，足够用了。特别注意 #1，如果有两幅图，就需要写两个句子，每一幅图用一
15、句话描述。 (微信号： kaoyanx)特别注意 #2， “如图所示 ”句型总结如下：句型 1： According to(或 :As can be seen from, 或 :As shown in, 或 :Its clear/apparent from) the picture/cartoon/figure/illustration, .句型 2： The picture/cartoon/figure/illustration shows/reveals/suggests/illustrates/demonstrates/indicates/depicts/describes that.(
16、微信号：kaoyanx)第三，第三句话是关键，其任务是说出图画要揭示一个什么 社会问题或者现象 。这类似于主旨句。例如，2006 年真题“ 偶像崇拜”第一段的第三句话可以这么写：There is no doubt that the cartoon above reveals and reflects a common and serious phenomenon in China idol worship(偶像崇拜 ) among young generations.(微信号：kaoyanx)第三句话可套用以下句型：句型#1：There is no denying that the pictu
17、re implies that.句型#2：The purpose of this picture is to show us that.(微信号：kaoyanx)句型#3：It seems to me that the picture is sending the message that.句型#4：What is conveyed in the picture goes far beyond merely an issue of.Instead, it carries the message that.(微信号：kaoyanx)句型#5：There is no doubt that the
18、cartoon above reveals and reflects a common and serious phenomenon in China .大作文 结尾段 高分写法：三类型模板 秒杀 大作文结尾注：对于图画作文，根据负面、正面、利弊兼有三种社会现象提供结尾段的三种类型的模板。第一，负面型如果图画中的社会现象是负面( 比如 2011 年的 “旅游景点的污染 ”)，则结尾段就写成“总结归纳+解决措施”。如何写“ 解决措施” 呢？下面是万能措施超级模板，只有 5 句话，直接套用即可。1.万能措施超级模板/第 1 句：总论，说明采取解决措施的迫切性。(微信号：kaoyanx)/第 2、3
19、、4 句：陈述政府、公民和个人三方面的解决措施。/第 5 句：说明美好的前景。模板具体如下：Accordingly, it is imperative(迫切的 ) for us to take drastic and effective measures to.In the first place, we can appeal to(呼吁 ) the government to make some strict laws and regulations to.In the second place, we must enhance(加强 )/cultivate(培养 ) citizens aw
20、areness that.is everybodys responsibility. In the third place, as for ourselves, we ought to take practical actions to.Only in this way can we have opportunities to expect.to come.(微信号：kaoyanx)其中：/措施一(宏观，第句)：我们要向政府呼吁制定出严格的法律和规章来./措施二(中观，第句)：我们要加强公民的意识， .是每个人的责任。(微信号：kaoyanx)/措施三(微观，第句)：对于我们自己而言，也要采取
21、实际行动去.注 ：任何负面现象都可以用这三个措施解决。 (微信号： kaoyanx)2.实战示例 (话题：保护野生动物 )注：只需添加几个关键词即可。Accordingly, it is imperative(迫切的 ) for us to take drastic and effective measures to protect the wildlife. In the first place, we can appeal to(呼吁 ) the government to make some strict laws and regulations to prevent them from
22、 being caught and killed. In the second place, we must enhance(加强 )/cultivate(培养 ) citizens awareness that loving the nature and wildlife is everybodys responsibility.In the third place, as for ourselves, we ought to take practical actions to protect our living environment and wild animals. Only in
23、this way can we have opportunities to expect a beautiful world and a bright future to come.(微信号：kaoyanx)第二，正面型如果图画中的社会现象是正面( 比如 2008 年 “合作精神 ”)，则结尾段就写成 “总结归纳+弘扬提倡” 。如何写“弘扬提倡” 呢？下面是万能弘扬超级模板，只有 5 句话，不管是什么好事，直接套用即可。1.万能措施超级模板/第 1 句：总论，肯定这件事的重大意义。/第 2、3、4 句：陈述媒体、政府和个人三方面去弘扬这件事的做法。(微信号：kaoyanx)/第 5 句：说明美
24、好的希望。模板具体如下：Considering every aspect of this positive phenomenon, we should bear in mind(记住 ) that.(此处写作文话题 ) is of great significance to both our society and ourselves. Therefore, mass media, such as radios, televisions and Internet, should make every effort to propaganda(宣传 ) and advocate(提倡 ) it.
25、 In addition, the government has the responsibility to educate every citizen to.Last but not the least, as for ourselves, we ought to take practical actions to.In conclusion, we have every reason to be convinced that we can achieve more achievements through.(微信号：kaoyanx)其中：/弘扬一(第句)：媒体弘扬/弘扬二(第句)：政府教育
26、( 微信号：kaoyanx)/弘扬三(第句)：从我做起注 ：任何正面现象都可以通过这三个层面去宣传。 (微信号： kaoyanx)2.实战示例 (话题：合作精神 )Considering every aspect of this positive phenomenon, we should bear in mind(记住 ) that cooperation spirit is of great significance to both our society and ourselves. Therefore, mass media, such as radios, televisions a
27、nd Internet, should make every effort to propagandise(宣传 ) and advocate(提倡 ) it. In addition, the government has the responsibility to educate every citizen to learn to cooperate with other people. Last but not the least, as for ourselves, we ought to take practical actions to cultivate the awarenes
28、s of cooperation of our own. In conclusion, we have every reason to be convinced that we can achieve more achievements through joint efforts with our colleagues(同事 ) and companions(同伴 ).(微信号：kaoyanx)第三，利弊兼有型如果图画中的社会现象是利弊兼有( 比如 2009 年 “互联网的远与近 ”)，则结尾段就写成“总结归纳+客观评价”。如何写“客观评价” 呢？下面是万能评价超级模板，只有 3 句话，直接套
29、用即可。1.万能评价超级模板Taking all factors into consideration, we may come to(或 arrive at) a conclusion that there is nothing wrong for sb. to do. However(或 Nevertheless), if they.to the extent of., they misunderstand the significance of.As a result(或 In my point of view), all social members, young and old, m
30、en and women, should take a reasonable attitude towards.instead of.blindly.(微信号：kaoyanx)2.实战示例 (话题：老年人养宠物 )Taking all factors into consideration, we may arrive at a conclusion that there is nothing wrong for the aged generations to keep pets. Nevertheless, if they love their pets to the extent of ig
31、noring their families, thier children and even their friends, they misunderstand the significance of protecting the animals. In my point of view, all social members, young and old, men and women, should take a reasonable attitude towards keeping pets instead ofspoiling them blindly.(微信号：kaoyanx)附：补充
32、说明针对图画反映的三类社会现象：正面、负面和利弊兼有，哇魔力给出了对应的写作模式：/第一，负面：解决措施+总结归纳/第二，正面：弘扬提倡+总结归纳(微信号：kaoyanx)/第三，利弊兼有：客观评价+总结归纳而且，哇魔力还给出了如何写“解决措施”、“弘扬提倡”和“客观评价”的万能模板，只需填入很少的关键词进去即可！考试时，你只需分清正面、负面和利弊兼有中的哪一种情况，然后直接套用对应的模板即可。(微信号：kaoyanx)千万别忘了，结尾还有一个任务：总结归纳。写“总结归纳”，套用下面公式即可：总结归纳 =总而言之 +经过分析 +不难发现 +重申主题1.表示 “总而言之 ”的词组有：all in
33、 allin conclusionto conclude(微信号：kaoyanx)in generallygenerally speakingto sum up2.表示 “经过分析 ”的句型有：if we take a careful consideration, .(微信号：kaoyanx)taking all factors into consideration, .for the reasons presented above, .3.表示 “不难发现 ”的句型有：it is not difficult to reach the conclusion that.(微信号：kaoyanx)
34、it is appropriate to support the statement that.把上面的“总而言之”、“ 经过分析”和“不难发现” 这三个要素随意组合一下，就会形成强大的句型，比如：/例 1：All in all, if we take a careful consideration, it is not difficult to reach the conclusion that 重申主题.(微信号：kaoyanx)/例 2：To sum up, taking all factors into consideration, it is appropriate to suppo
35、rt the statement that 重申主题.(微信号：kaoyanx)第一， 14 个最易打动阅卷老师的 “曲线美 ”句型 句首状语说明：句首状语，顾名思义，就是把两三个单词组成的状语放在句子开头，再写一个逗号，最后再写主句部分。这种写法杀伤力极大。下面是 14 个句首状语和高分例句。请连词带句都背诵下来。1.Ironically, .(具有讽刺意味的是 .)例，Ironically, it is ourselves who need us to persuade and convince most.(具有讽刺意味的是，我们自己才是最需要说服的)(微信号：kaoyanx)2.Just
36、 like.(就像 .)例，Just like playing football games, united we win, divided we fall.(就像踢足球一样，团结我们就会胜利，分裂我们就会失败)(微信号：kaoyanx)3.Unfortunately, .(不幸的是 .)例，Unfortunately, it often appears that while you are absorbed in a wonderful program, endless ads interrupt you from time to time.(不幸的是，当你专注地观看一个精彩节目时，没完没了
37、的广告总是不停地打断你)(微信号：kaoyanx)4.In spite of.,(尽管 .)例，In spite of my poor English, I thought she was badly in need of my timely assistance.(尽管我的英文不好，但我认为她急需我及时的帮助)(微信号：kaoyanx)/注：be badly in need of(急需)5.Amazingly enough, .(令人惊异的是 .)例，Amazingly enough, it is ourselves who can offer encouragement.(令人惊异的是，能
38、给与鼓励的却是我们自己)(微信号：kaoyanx)6.Undoubtedly, .(毫无疑问， .)例，Undoubtedly, the drawing have symbolically revealed a serious problem in our daily lifeparents spoiling towards the only children in family.(毫无疑问，这幅图画象征性地揭示了我们日常生活中的一个严重问题父母对独生子女的溺爱)(微信号：kaoyanx)7.Apart from.,(除了 .之外， .)例，Apart from chasing the sta
39、r in a kind of blind worship, we have another way to show our love.(除了盲目追星，我们有另一种方式来表达喜爱)( 微信号：kaoyanx)8.In addition to/Besides.(另外， .)例，In addition to the language skills, those volunteers are expected to be patient, helpful, open-minded with a loving heart.(除了语音技巧，这些志愿者还应该有耐心，乐于助人，思维开阔，并且充满爱心)(微信号
40、： kaoyanx)9.Interestingly, .(有意思的是 .)例，Interestingly, the player and the keeper are experiencing quite opposite psychological processes: the player thinks the tasks extremely difficult as the goals(球门) are quite small compared with the huge goal keeper, while the latter fears that the goal is too en
41、ormous for him to protect.(球员和守门员正在经历截然相反的心理过程：球员认为任务极其困难，因为球门与强大的门将比起来相当小，而门将担心球门对于他的防守来说太大了)(微信号：kaoyanx)10.Not surprisingly, .(毫不奇怪， .)例，Not surprisingly, this kind of star-worshipping is not uncommon nowadays among the Chinese people.(毫不奇怪，这种明星崇拜在中国并不少见)( 微信号：kaoyanx)11.Similarly/Likewise, .(同样的
42、， .)例，Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in the 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates.(同样的，一些女孩在 2005 年的中国“超级女声”比赛上一夜成名，这个事件激起了全国性的争论)(微信号：kaoyanx)12.Obviously, .(显而易见， .)例，Obviously, the picture depicts(显示) that love is just like a lamp whos
43、e rays become brighter where it is darker.(很明显，这张图片显示出爱心像一盏灯，在越黑暗的地方越闪亮)(微信号：kaoyanx)13.Overall, .(总而言之， .)例，Overall, the future for fish will be bright with the solution of over-fishing.(总之，随着过度捕捞这个问题的解决，鱼类的未来将会更加光明)(微信号：kaoyanx)14.Without.,(.没有 .)例，Without love and respect for the old, our society
44、 will be dark through.(没有了对老年人的爱与尊敬，我们的社会会变得暗淡)(微信号：kaoyanx)/注：dark through(暗淡)第二， 4 个最出其不意的 “加强型 ”神句 双重否定句功能就是加强语气，使你的句子与众不同。务必熟记下面四个双重否定句式。句式 1： never fail to do(一定会 )例 1，I am convinced that they will never fail to accomplish the tough job.(我坚信，他们一定会完成这项艰巨的工作)(微信号：kaoyanx)例 2，Chinese people will n
45、ever fail to make more achievement in the aspect of space technology.(中国人民一定会在太空技术方面取得更多的成就)(微信号：kaoyanx)句式 2： It is not unrealistic to do.(去做某事是现实的 )例，It is not unrealistic to protect those endangered species through modern medical research.(通过现代医学研究来保护濒临灭绝的物种，这是可以实现的)(微信号：kaoyanx)句式 3： It is not u
46、ncommon that.(某种现象是比较常见的 )例，These days, it is not uncommon that the young generations have some certain super stars as their idols.(近来，年轻人把某些超级巨星作为自己的偶像， 这种现象比较常见 )(微信号：kaoyanx)句式 4： Not surprisingly, .(不出所料 )注：严格说，此短语属于 “单重否定 ”，但其意思比较接近双重否定。例，Not surprisingly, students who are under constant stress
47、 may suffer from mental disease.(长期处于高压之下的学生会患有精神疾病，这一点不足为奇)(微信号：kaoyanx)第三， 12 个表述 强调 的高分神词下面 12 个副词都可以表示“十分、相当、非常、颇”的意思，可用于作文写作中表述 强调。/ever（曾经，永远）/never（绝不）(微信号：kaoyanx)/badly（严重地）例，It seems that many youngsters are badly in need of an idol to whom to pay their respect and attention.(很多年轻人似乎非常需要一个偶像来接受他们的尊敬和关注)(微信号：kaoyanx)/really（真正地）/highly（高度地）(微信号：kaoyanx)例，Frankly speaking, the bus system in Beijing has been highly well-developed.(坦率来讲，北京的公共交通系统还是高度发达的)(微信号：kaoyanx)/completely（完全地）/totally（完全地）/extremely（极其地）/exactly（确切地）(微信号：kaoyanx)/absolutely（绝对地）/greatly（十分地）
