1、数量用 the number of 增加 increased 轻微的的变化 a slight change of比重用 the percentage of 减少 declined 很大的变化 a great change of比率用 the rate of 大大增加 Greatly increased某物的数量在不断增加/减少 The number of something is increasing/ decreasingMakes up Made up（过去式）ABC 是人做主语要用复数形式：people take up ；students make up。开头1、 According t
2、o the chart above , from 2014 to 2017 , the number of A increased from 20 to 50 . while the percentage of B declined from 70 to 30 .with the rate of C experiencing a slight change of 5 .2、 It can be seen graph above that the number of people doing something rose greatly/obviously/dramatically from 4
3、0to 80. meanwhile the rate of people doing sth descended by 30，whith the percentage of people doing sth staying at the same level/a similar level。 The graph above offers us a series of figures showing the proportion sth/people doing( sth: A takes up 30and B makes up 40 with C and D occupying 10and11
4、 respectively.结尾These figures reveal a prevalent phenomenon that +句子（a growing number of people are paying close attention to the value/important/harm of sth ） ，which is meaningful and thought-provoking。 第二段首句 1、 What are the leading factors behind the phenomenon mentioned above 。2、so why did the ph
5、enomenon appear？3、 for my part,there are two primary reasons accounting to for the phenomenon revealed by the chart.中间句（重要性、影响）重要性 There is no doubt in saying that sth/doing sth can , directly or indirectly play an indispensable role in our life with sth , we would not achieve anything great in 方面 。
6、影响1、 There is no exaggeration in saying that sth may , in one way or another , bring a positivenegative influence on。2、it is an undeniable fact/truth that sth .will/could , to a large extent, exert a subtle/great effect on .尾句 1、For my part ，the to reasons given above are the main factor leading to
7、the phenomenon /the problem/the changes mirrored by the chart 2、it is high time we should take some efficientefficienturgent measuresmovessteps to solve the problem第三段 首位句措施段：with the problem becoming srvere/urgent，it is imperative that we （should） adopt measures to batter / improve the current situ
8、ation。总结段：Taking all the factors above into account，we can come to a conclusion+句子， 尾段其他内容措施段：On the one hand ，the department concerned should make laws/rules to protect 1sth/fight against sth。 to encourage people to do sth。 to dis courage people from doing 2 3sth。 On the other hand ，we should enhance strengthen peoples awareness to do sth/of doing sth/of the importance of sth
