1、Book 5 Unit2 单元写作训练之地点介绍 一、 范文赏析。李华的美国朋友 Peter 打算今年暑假来西藏旅游,李华写了一篇介绍西藏的电子邮件给Peter。请赏析一下这篇文章。Dear Peter,I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit. Now let me introduce something about Tibet for you.Tibet, known as the “Roof of the world“, belongs to the Peoples Republic of China. It
2、 is located in the southwest of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering an area of more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honored as “the highest city” in the world. It has a long history of more than 700 years as well as a number of world-famo
3、us places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. Since the liberation of Tibet on May. 23rd, 1951, it has made great progress in politics, economy and culture.Im sure you will have a wonderful journey in such a great land. Looking forward to your coming to China.YoursLi Hua 练习:赏析范文,并找出下列中文所对应的短语或句子
4、:作为而出名 _known as_属于_belongs to_位于,坐落在_ is located in_有的人口_ have a population of _占地面积超过. _covering an area of more than 1.2 million square kilometers _ 有年的悠久历史_ _ have a long history of _名胜古迹_ places of interest _自从 1951 年西藏解放以来,它在政治、经济和文化方面取得了巨大进步。Since the liberation of Tibet in 1951, it has made
5、great progress in politics, economy and culture._二、补充短语。(1)be made up of/consist of 由 组成(2)serve as.当 用(3)the third largest city 第三大城市(4)with green hills and beautiful rivers 青山绿水(5)with a warm/ mildclimate 由于温暖/温和的气候(6)be rich /abundant in 盛产 三、句子练习。(1)那座大楼位于拐角处。 The building is located at the corn
6、er . (2)这间学校的面积是 459 平方米。This school covers an area of 459 square meters. (3)这座城市有 1000 多年的历史。 The city has a history of more than 1000 years. (4)上海人口超过两千万。 Shanghai has a population of more than 20 million . (5)气候因地方不同有所差异环境气候:The climate varies from place to place. (6) 它有丰富的自然资源,比如煤碳、金矿,而且气候温和。It
7、is rich in natural sources, such as coal and gold, and has mild climate._.(7)名胜景观:_tourist attractions_ 旅游景点 places of _interest_名胜古迹四、篇章练习1) 、请根据中文, 完成短文。Guangzhou, (1) _ the third largest city in China_(中国第三大城市), also known as City of Flowers, serves as the capital city of Guangdong and the center
8、 of its political,economic,scientific ,educational,and cultural life.(2) _ Covering / With an area of 7434.4 square kilometers_ (全市面积 7434.4 平方公里), it is home to more than 11 million people. Located in the middle of Guangdong, north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way throu
9、gh the city, Guangzhou (3)_ enjoys a warm and wet climate_ (气候温暖湿润). Besides, it is a famous city with (4)_ a history of more than 2200 years_(有着 2, 200 多年历史)and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou (5) _ is also abundant in traveling resources_ (旅游资源丰富).2
10、) 、 根据下面所给信息, 简要介绍英国。【写作内容】 英国由英格兰、苏格兰、威尔士和北爱尔兰组成。 面积约 245,000 平方公里。 人口约 6 千万。 首都伦敦。 气候不冷也不热。 国内有许多著名的河流,其中泰晤士河是英国第二大河,也是英国最重要的河流。它是世界上第一个工业化国家, 也是一个发达并且具有多元文化的国家。 【写作要求】 应用所学句式; 必须包括所有内容要点。点评:这是一篇典型的基础写作训练题,先赏析范文,引导学生从范文找出地点介绍的相关短语,然后使用短语进行句子训练,接着是篇章练习。从短语到句子到篇章,层层推进,深入浅出,就算是中下层的学生也能通过模仿完成写作要求,特别适合平行班的学生。此外,老师在引导学生归纳相关短语的环节,可补充高级的词汇,在讲解句子翻译的环节,亦可引导学生使用高级句型, (比如结合刚学习的过去分词的用法) ,这样就能同时兼顾中上水平的学生。注:课前听写,daily report 等日常教学活动很有必要长期坚持,但是在公开课上,如果这些课前活动与本节课联系不大,最好暂时取消,以免导致课堂时间不够使本节公开课质量受损。