1、-1-【第一段】简要描述图片,略微引向主题;图片基调相关细节引向主题【第二段】点明图片寓意,进行充分拓展;TD1D2C1. 化立论为驳论大众观点质疑大众详实论据得出结论2. 化苍白为哲理哲理引入主题阐释详实论据(举例)(正反)(因果)(利弊)重申结论1999 42 GRE黄玉成 83May I SorryPleaseNo wayCome onShut up2400235016503. 化平淡为修辞-2-Conceived in the picture is a simple truth that Are not the following cases sufficient to prove t
2、his point? Havent you ever found ? Havent you ever noticed ? Why.? Why? Why? Arent they .? 【第三段】结合上文论调,进行针对评论。1. 社会弊病(生态环境)给大众的建议或策略控制:外控;内控Corresponding laws and regulations (school regulations) should be carried out to .Official intervention should be put on the matter of to Fines and penalties sh
3、ould be activated to direct the situation to a positive one. New social norm should be established to Media supervision should be cast on the matter of.self-disciplineself-controlself-restrictThe ability of self-restrain should be cultivated among those who .Right attitude toward should be nurtured
4、among those whoAwareness of should be advocated among those who从外控走向内控:【版本一】How can we put the problem of environmental destruction under control? It occurs to many that we are in need of a package deal, involving intervention from environment organizations, legislation from department concerned, an
5、d supervision from the mass media. But is that deal comprehensive enough? Actually, we also need the awareness that the planet earth is our only home, and we may be homeless if we mistreat it, with the assistance of which we can fundamentally put this problem to an end. 【版本二】Such misconducts of shou
6、ld be put under control immediately! But how? Suggestions from the general public may involve , , or . But these proposals have been put into practice for years, with fruitful rewards. Is that enough? Actually, what we need is more than what mentioned above, but a new way that . 狗镇Grace-3-2. 社会风尚表明自
7、己的态度和决心支持:理由:惠及自身与他人惠及当下与未来决心:Asked about my attitude toward , I am to say is either beneficial to individuals or elevating to society. Actually, this escalating effect will not last for merely several years. As it is a social wealth, we are willing to deliver it from one individual to another, from
8、 one decade to another, and from one generation to another. As a college man, I am determined to be a role model in this aspect.(As college men, we have the duty to join the campaign of .)3. 箴言哲理提出针对个人的建议求助:长者、老师、朋友、书刊自助:具体问题具体分析How to step out of the shadow of indecisiveness? If I were confronted w
9、ith the situation, I would be suggested to seek encouragements and suggestions from teachers, seniors, or inspiring books. That is a way, but a passive one. Help from them is not always available, and not necessarily suits me. Therefore, I am determined to make clear my innermost needs, to be aware
10、of the situation, to work out reasonable plans, to persist on my decision, so that I can step out of the delicate situation. 冬吴相对论爱的序位按照环节拆分-4-Exercise 1Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) interpret the phenomeno
11、n it reflects, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)学生的对联图片基调 ironic相关细节Couplet, the first line, the second line, horizontal scroll引向主题 dishonestEmerging from the cartoon is an ironic scene that the couplet pasted by students mirrors their undesirable a
12、ttitude to college examinations. The first line reads “there will be no upgrade without cheating in exams”, while the second line bears “success in tests is preferable to dignity in their minds.” The horizontal scroll summarizes their idea: regardless of the virtue of honesty, they are to pass exams
13、 by any means.Sb. be to do -5-Bad | undesirable |unfavorableSb. prefer A to BA is preferable to B in ones mindA outweigh B in ones mindPersonalityDignity 大众观点 honestIt is generally accepted that .It is conventionally hold that .It is shared by the general public that .It is deeply rooted in the mind
14、 of the public that .质疑大众 反问详实论据 作弊:手势、小抄、手机、耳语、无线耳机得出结论 自身、教育、社会It is widely shared that no other groups in the world can be as honesty as college students. However, is that still the truth? Illustrations against the public view are abundant and within easy reach. From college examinations alone, i
15、t is not surprising to see some candidates delivering keys by whispering, by gesture, or even by mobile phones. Evidently, an expanding amount of students no longer cherish the virtue of honesty, which may be detrimental either to their life-long development, or to the quality of education, not to m
16、ention social atmosphere.An increasing number of A mounting number of .An expanding amount of .Do harm to Be poisonous to Be detrimental to -6-Exercise 2Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended me
17、aning, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)The dream of a Bird图片基调 alarming相关细节A bird is holding a gun He is hiding in the bushHe is staring at the skyin which Human beings are soaring He wants to shoot people for revenge.引向主题 what people once did with
18、 himUnder the amusing appearance of the cartoon lies an alarming scenario that a bird, holding a gun and hiding in the bush, is staring at the sky where human beings are soaring. He intends to shoot people for revenge. Evidently, his “dream” comes from / takes roots in / is induced by / is provoked
19、by / is evoked by / is sparked by what people once did with him.【版本一】It is widely shared that no other decades place so much emphasis on environmental protection as today. However, is that the truth? Illustrations against the public view are abundant and within easy reach. Specifically, it is not su
20、rprising to see some of us shooting wild life for fun, cooking it for food, or even selling it for huge profit. Equally, it is not uncommon to find some enterprises emitting toxic gases with local atmosphere polluted. Evidently, an expanding amount -7-of individuals and groups no longer take care of
21、 our environment, which may be detrimental either to the quality of our life, or to the security of living, not to mention the future of our descendants.【版本二】哲理引入It is the obligation for human to get on well with the nature.The nature may treat us the way we treat it.As a famous thinker once put it,
22、 “”Never easily let go of the motto, “”Never easily wave aside the simple truth, “”Never shrug off the doctrine, “”The extended meaning of the cartoon can be summarized as a motto: 1. idioms600.doc information2. 山寨谚语 transformation 主题阐释That is, .Put it another way, .Simply state it, .In other words,
23、 .详实论据(举例)(正反)in the past currently(因果)(利弊)重申结论The implication of the cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in daily life: the nature may treat us the way we treat it. In other words, it may reward us fruitfully on condition that we are on good term with it; otherwise, punish us if we mis
24、treat it. Specifically, in the past, natural resources were available anywhere, anytime, and anyhow, because our ancestor never went too far in exploiting them. On the contrary, currently, our greediness threatens these resources, putting them to the edge of running out. No wonder the bird in the pi
25、cture desire to revenge on humans. He is warning us that we may pay a heavy price for what we did with the nature.Be on good term with Endangerthreatenput to the edge of .-8-Run out ofis to be answered for.We may pay a heavy price for .We may be penalized for .Intend to .ProfitsAssetWealthFinancial
26、support【版本三】Exhibited in the picture is a simple truth that it is our duty to take care of our environment. However, do most of us bear this truth in mind anymore? Havent you ever found some of us hunting wild life for fun, for food, or even for profit? Havent you ever noticed some enterprises letti
27、ng out wasted water at large amount with water body polluted? Where has their sense of social responsibility gone? Where has their conscience gone? Where has their insight of future gone? Arent the virtues swallowed by their greediness, sacrificing eco-balance for instant profits? Where has all the
28、flowers gone?Brother FourinstantInsight of futureSacrifice for .Seekat the cost of .Pursue at the expense of .-9-Exercise 3Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your co
29、mments.图片基调 instuctive相关细节 A man is facing several directionsHe is walking back and forthHe feels perplexed and confusedHe does not know where to go.引向主题Caption Have you ever been caught in a dilemma? If so, you may feel the same awkwardness as the man in the picture does. In the drawing, the man, f
30、acing several directions, is walking back and forth, feeling perplexed and confused and wondering where to go. The caption is reminding him, as well as all of us, that predicaments are always caused by indecisiveness. Remind sb. of sth. Remind sb. that .DifficultyBarrierPredicament -10-Better late t
31、han never. Better trying than cryingThe implication of the cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in daily life: decisiveness is the first step leading to success / just do it, and anything is possible / better trying than crying. In other words, we, facing delicate situation, may fail to
32、grasp opportunities if we hesitate all the time.(opportunities, if we keep pondering and wondering, may escape our attention) Specifically, hesitating may grind off our passion and judgment. On the contrary, decisiveness and braveness may earn us new chances of stepping out of shadow. Through the sad experience of the man in the picture, the cartoonist is warning us that we should choose the latter without any hesitation.