1、- 1 -四、短文改错题组(一)短文改错Passage 1(2015长春市质检二)Dear manager，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English. Here I would like to introduce me briefly.I am a 25yearold young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University. I have
2、been a English guide for two years after graduation. As a result, my oral English is pretty well. I have great interest the job. I had much confidence in myself. If I am given to the job, I can assure you I will do my best to do it well. Id like to meet you at your convenient to discuss the possibil
3、ity of working in your company. An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.Yours respectfully，Wang Yong答案：Dear manager，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised as a secretary of positions positionEnglish. Here I would like to introduce briefly.me myselfI am a 25
4、yearold young man / from the Foreign Languages who/that graduated graduatingDepartment of Jilin University. I have been English guide for two years after graduation. As a a anresult, my oral English is pretty . I have great interest the job. I much confidence in well good in had havemyself. If I am
5、given t the job, I can assure you I will do my best to do it well. Id like to meet you at your oto discuss the possibility of working in your company. An early reply to my application convenient conveniencewill be appreciated.high highlyYours respectfully，Wang YongPassage 2(2015郑州质检二)Dear Mandy，Im n
6、ot doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy, but its not true. I work really hard, often study late into the night! Ive tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work as hard like my bro
7、ther does. My brother doesnt study very hard, and he always gets excellent grades. Its not fair!The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says Im the best student shes had for year. When I told my dad, all he said was, “You mustnt waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons！”
8、Im feeling quite puzzling about what to do now. Would you please help me out?Thanks a lot!Yours sincerely，Lisa答案：Dear Mandy，- 2 -Im not doing well in my lessons at school, in maths. My dad says I must try hard especial especiallybecause he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy, but its not tr
9、ue. I work really hard, tooften late into the night! Ive tried to talk to my mother, but she always I have to work study studying said saysas hard my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard, he always gets excellent like as and butgrades. Its not fair!The only thing I like i tis art. My teac
10、her says Im the best student shes had for . When I told my dad, all he said year yearswas, “You mustnt waste your time art. You must focus your mind on your lessons！” Im in onfeeling quite about what to do now. Would you please help me out?puzzling puzzledThanks a lot!Yours sincerely，LisaPassage 3(2
11、015石家庄一模)One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats.Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words
12、and sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vivid
13、ly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.答案：One year ago, I had a special English lesson at the railway station. It was quite different hold heldfrom the regular English classes we were familiar ， for
14、 we had no textbooks, no blackboard to withno fixed seats.or andGathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and weresentences as possible . Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked here thereeverywhere, for any information in English. Whenev
15、er an English word into sight, search searching comes camethe class would burst into t echeers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and pictures, vividly vividwe could figure out its meaning with ease.- 3 -Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an activ
16、e learner I go.where whereverPassage 4(2015南昌市一模)Im going to study in the senior middle school on September. I can live either at school and at home. But I cant decide because both has advantages and disadvantages. At home, I have my own room, but I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share on
17、e room with 56 student at school. Maybe I cant sleep good. Its a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eat with my classmates. I think its a great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, Ill have ride to school. Its a waste of time and not safely. Its so hard to make
18、a decision.答案：Im going to study in the senior middle school September. I can live either at school at on in and orhome. But I cant decide because both advantages and disadvantages. At home, I have my own has haveroom, I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 56 at but so/and s
19、tudent studentsschool. Maybe I cant sleep . Its a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy good wellwith my classmates. I think its eat eatinggreat fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, Ill have ride to school. Its toa waste of time and not . Its so hard to make a deci
20、sion.safely safe(二)短文改错Passage 1(2015山东济南模拟)Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions. Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture. But several years ago, visitors behave badly. Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere. Some picked flowers,
21、cutting down trees and hurt animals. And even better, some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily, things has changed. Rubbish is always put into dustbins. People are friendly at animals. Everybody smokes in the woods. All these changes make us happily. As student, I think we should kn
22、ow its our duty to protect the environment. Lets to change our behavior when we travel.答案：Beijing has lots of famous attractions. Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its tourist touristsbeautiful scenery and rich culture. But several years ago, visitors badly. Some talked loudly behave behave
23、din public and threw litter everywhere. Some picked flowers, down trees and hurt animals. cutting cutAnd even ， some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.better worseLuckily, things changed. Rubbish is always put into dustbins. People are friendly has haveanimals. smokes in the woods. All th
24、ese changes make us . As at to/towards Everybody Nobody happily happy astudent, I think we should know its our duty to protect the environment. Lets t ochange our behavior when we travel.- 4 -Passage 2(2015山西质量检测)Trying to come to decision completely of your own can be risky. Some decisions are so i
25、mportant that they should not be made without talking to the others first. There are several advantages of consulting people you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice but they may point out some things you may have overlooked. For another, friends may stop you from making big mista
26、kes. When consult others about important decisions, you should keep two things in mind. The first one is figuring out whom we respect enough to trust their judge. The second thing to consider is what to do if you disagree to this person. Maybe getting a third or fourth opinion was the best option. I
27、n short, making any big decision lonely can lead to some problems. Talking to friends or family members first is always a good idea.答案：Trying to come to decision completely your own can be risky. Some decisions are so a of onimportant that they should not be made without talking to t ehothers first.
28、 There are several advantages of consulting people you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice they may point out some things you may have overlooked. For but andanother, friends may stop you from making big mistakes. When others about important consult consultingdecisions, you shoul
29、d keep two things in mind. The first one is figuring out whom respect we youenough to trust their . The second thing to consider is what to do if you disagree judge judgment/judgementthis person. Maybe getting a third or fourth opinion the best option. In short, making any to with was isbig decision
30、 can lead to some problems. Talking to friends or family members first is always lonely alonea good idea.Passage 3(2015兰州双基过关考试)Dear Sir/Madam，Im one of your customer. I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks ago, but I didnt received it until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the
31、books were too poorly packed up that the cover of one book were torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missed.Im sorry to have received such poorly service, and I believe I have every right ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money
32、back or deliver a new set of books to me. Beside, Id like to be informed of the process of your deal with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.Li Hua答案：Dear Sir/Madam，Im one of your . I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks ago, but I didnt customer customersit until yesterday. And
33、much to my disappointment, the books were poorly packed up received receive too sothat the cover of one book torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one were wasbook .missed missing- 5 -Im sorry to have received such service, and I believe I have every right ask you to poor
34、ly poor todeal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money b ckaor deliver a new set of books to me. ， Id like to be informed of the process of your Beside Besideswith my complaint.deal dealingLooking forward to your reply.Li HuaPassage 4(2015南宁适应性测试)I threw my magazines into a waste b
35、asket and decide to join in Malaysian life. Then everything came alive. I stared at everything as if I were looking at it the first time. The day passed fast. I looked at my watch but was surprised that it was 3 pm. Soon the train pulled up at Butterworth. I looked at the people all around me. They
36、all looked beautifully. When my uncle arrived at with a smile, I threw my arm around him to give him a warm hug. I had never done this ago. He seemed surprising and then his weatherbeaten face warmed up with the huge smile. We walked arm in arm to her car.答案：I threw my magazines into a waste basket
37、and to join in Malaysian life. Then decide decidedeverything came alive. I stared at everything as if I were looking at it the first time. The day forpassed fast. I looked at my watch was surprised that it was 3 pm. Soon the train pulled up at but andButterworth. I looked at the people all around me
38、. They all looked . When my uncle beautifully beautifularrived tawith a smile, I threw my around him to give him a warm hug. I had never done this arm arms. He seemed and then his weatherbeaten face warmed up with huge smile. We ago before surprising surprised the awalked arm in arm to car.her his(三
39、)短文改错Passage 1(2015兰州实战考试)Recently a survey has been done find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. With this survey, two thousands senior middle school students from ten schools in Lanzhou were interviewed. They were asking which they liked reading most among the four categor
40、ies of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The survey show that more than a half of the students like to read news most. Twentysix percent of the students say that English stories are his favorite. Only seven percent of the students are mostl
41、y interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy read popular science articles doubles that of those which prefer reading articles about learning methods.答案：Recently a survey has been done find out the reading interests of senior middle to- 6 -school
42、 students. this survey, two senior middle school students from ten schools in With In thousands thousandLanzhou were interviewed. They were which they liked reading most among the four asking askedcategories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning met
43、hods.The survey that more than show showshalf of the students like to read news most. Twentysix percent of the students say that aEnglish stories are favorite. Only seven percent of the students are interested in reading his their mostly mostarticles about learning methods. However, the number of st
44、udents who enjoy popular read readingscience articles doubles that of those prefer reading articles about learning methods.which whoPassage 2(2015山西四校联考)Ladies and gentlemen，Welcome to our English Corner. This corner was set up three years before. Every Sunday morning, students from different school
45、s and some foreigners often took part in it. Gather around here, we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested. We also exchange my experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousands of people have been here when it was set up.We think that they have lear
46、ned a lot by taking part in activity here. It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. They all think it is of helpful. If you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here.答案：Ladies and gentlemen，Welcome to our En
47、glish Corner. This corner was set up three years . Every Sunday before agomorning, students from different schools and some foreigners often part in it. around took take Gather Gatheringhere, we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested . We also inexchange experience in
48、English study. We all have a good time here. Thousands of people have my ourbeen here it was set up.when sinceWe think that they have learned a lot by taking part in here. It is a supplement activity activities really realto our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers
49、. They all think it is / . If you want to know about the corner, you may talk to the students here.ofhelpful help much morePassage 3(2015青岛期末)My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao, Shandong Province on February 1995. I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer. The main subjects I studie
