1、、Conclusion: 结论段、建议措施段三至四句(50-55 词) ： 1+2+1 总分总1. Concluding sentence: 结论句，1 句 引出重复论点（总结归纳中心句）2. Suggestions： 2 句两点建议或两句评论3. 包装结尾，展望未来/趋势， 1 句1. Concluding sentence: 结论句（1 句2. 1） 总之，我们很有必要从这些发人深省的图画中获得积极的含义。/ 采取有效措施扭转这些图画中所反映的负面趋势。3. Accordingly, it is imperative/vital for us to (1)derive positive i
2、mplications from these thought-provoking drawing. / 4. (2) to take effective and efficient measures to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the pictures.2）2006：因此，偶像崇拜这一发人深省的社会现象，是能够对年轻人成长产生深远影响的一柄双刃剑。Hence/Therefore, idol worship, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sw
3、ord which can exert profound influence on the growth of young peoplesuggestions 两点建议或两句评论（ 2经常提到的几个方面：A. authorities(专家参与）; B. education（增强意识）; C. public; D. media（社会和媒体关注） E. self-effortTo begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who plagiarize others works.
4、(法律) In addition, we should enlighten / educate the awareness of the young that academic honesty is extremely vital to us.(教育2）(2008) It is, therefore, necessary that effective steps be made to advocate spirit of supporting each other. To begin with, the government should make laws to encourage peop
5、le to unite. In addition, people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they are in trouble. . 包装结尾，展望未来 （1）倒装句 2）强调句 3）虚拟语气(1) 2002：只有这样我们才能积极发展民族文化，并使我们的世界丰富多元、多姿多彩、充满活力。Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our world dimensional, color
6、ful and vigorous(2) 2003: 只有在逆境中经历更多的挑战和磨练，他们才能培养出坚强的个性和优秀的能力Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and abilityOnly when our eyes have been washed by tearscan we have a broader field of vision.强调句总而言之，只有长期学习才有助于你掌握大量词汇 in conclusion, i
7、t is persistent work that is conducive to (对。 。 。有利）your grasping a considerable vocabulary。虚拟语气It is high time that we placed great emphasis on this phenomenon.008 积极寓义Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of teamwork in our society. We should bear in mind
8、that teamwork is of great significance to both our society and ourselves. Every one should have the ability of teamwork. Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in.(05 年) (中心句)Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measu
9、res. (两个建议)To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who shun the responsibilities of caring their parents. In addition, we have to cultivate the awareness of the young that respecting the old has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture. (结论句)
10、Only in this way can we curb the current evil phenomenon revealed in the picture.08 年）(结论中心句)On the basis of the analysis above, we may draw a conclusion that cooperation and team work really count in this competitive society. (两个建议)Hence, we should associate ourselves harmoniously with our companio
11、ns in every attempt towards our goals. In addition, it is indispensable to train our kids frequently to interact smoothly with others in a team. (结论句)As the proverb goes, unity is strength.1.总共写十七个句子. 第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬
12、义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous
13、 to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用 “not o
14、nly, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。 (1) To acc
15、ount for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than 主题 to contradict with a harmon
16、ious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of
17、 young people who have ever experienced 主题 will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something. 最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们
18、的意识，加强执法 第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。 (1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent 主题. (2)On the one hand, we s
19、hould be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is
20、long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later. 2.积极有利型的文章 文章以团队精神为例子第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻. (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述
21、图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,并最后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有
22、两个大的好处.第五个句子谈第一个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代替 for example 的五星级的句子.第六个是具体的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者 (1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is mo
23、mentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the founda
24、tion for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more be
25、neficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs alon
26、g the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society. 第三个段子首句 谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子
27、谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来. (1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team
28、work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other peoples opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
