1、大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导1/49大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文Internet Surfing-因特网冲浪Nowadays, there is a growing popularity of Internet surfing on college campus. An increasing number of students, majoring either in science or engineering or in liberal arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen i
2、nterest everyday.Internet surfing has attracted college students like magnets because it is the world of Internet and the world of globalization. First,with the global coverage of Internet,we can reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world. Via Internet,we can send and receive E-mails at an
3、y time much faster, cheaper and more effective than conventional means such as telephone, telex and fax. Next,via access to the home pages of libraries, universities, journals and news agencies, and research organizations, we can easily acquire all kinds of information, to know what is going on all
4、over the world. Finally, by clicking the mouse, we are capable of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, making friends, down-loading files and programs, doing business, publishing papers and freely airing our opinions on all sorts of interesting issues. What is more, Internet offhrs
5、 many opportunities. For example, 大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导2/49we can work, educate ourselves and communicate with others at home via Internet.In the Information Age, it is difficuh to imagine modern life without Internet. With the rapid development of Information Technology industry, successful dot-com com
6、panies mushroomed everywhere. Internet is revolutionizing our economy, our society and our life.关于大学生压力的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your comp
7、osition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的 压力 2)大学生缓解压力的方式有 3)你一般都是如何排解压力的? How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? _ _ _ 大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导3/49关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点指出一个问题，提纲第 2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第 3 点要求阐述“我” 的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生
8、主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我” 是采取哪种方式排解压力的。 关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文 How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? Todays college students face many pressures, mainly from parents expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. 1Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, o
9、verdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a students confidence. 2More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors. 3Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. 2First, w
10、e should have a right evaluation of ourselves 4so as to 5make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. 2Second, we should 6set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. 2Third, 7attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. 2Fi
11、nally, if you find pressure is nearly 8beyond your control, 大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导4/49youd better turn to professional psychological guidance. 2As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. 4In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a
12、 more practical job objection. 2So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I 9do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation. 【亮点点评】 1although 引导让步状语从句。 2过渡 衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 3“考虑到， 鉴于”，介 词。 4表示目的。 5“扬长避短”。 6“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。 7动名 词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出
13、缓解压力的第三种方式。 8“超出范围或能力”。 9强调动词 believe。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. 临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。 大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导5/49_ 2.佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve 临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第
14、一步也是最重要的一步。_ 3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages 临摹： 为了在激烈的 竞争中获得优势，大学生 们必须全面发展自己的能力。 _ 【KEY】 1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it. 2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the
15、 most important step to enter into the society. 3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on 大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导6/4
16、9Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡2)分析产生该现象的原因3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 Credit Cards on Campus_关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点指出一种现象，提纲第 2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第 3 点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文
17、应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我” 的建议。关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文Credit Cards on CampusIn recent years, credit cards have 1gained more popularity among college students. 2With banks more focus on college market, 3an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card an
18、d 大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导7/49begun to consume by it.4The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. 5Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, 6which is 7a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. 5Secondly, a credit
19、card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and 8hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. 5Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. 7Drawn by these policies, many college students apply
20、for credit cards.5As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. 5However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they dont need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards deb
21、t. 5Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. 9Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文【亮点点评】1“越来越流行”。2“随着”，介 词。3“越来越多的”。4用于引出原因。大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导8/495过渡 衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
22、6which 引导非限制性定语从句。7表示 “吸引”的两种不同的方式，用词 富于变化。8“由此，因此” 。9“only+状语” 位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-佳句 临摹1.佳句：With banks more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card.临摹：随着市场经济的快速发展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。_2.佳句： A credit card can help those poor students
23、pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school.临摹：一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力，并由此来增加就业机会。3.佳句：Drawed by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.临摹：在就业压力的迫使下，一些大学生开始自主创业。_【KEY】大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导9/491. With the rapid development of market economy, money play
24、s a more and more important role in the society.2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abilities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment.3. Forced by employment pressure, some college graduates begin to set up their own businesses.(关于勤俭节约的英语作文 Direction
25、s: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已经过时了 2)但是很多人反对这种说法 3)你的看法是，为什么? Is Thrift Still a Good
26、Virtue? _ _ 关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点提出一种观点，提纲第 2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第 3 点要求谈谈“我” 的观点，由此大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导10/49可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第 1 种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第 2 种观点：勤俭节约仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法，并说明理由。 关于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文 Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? With the improvement of
27、the living standards, many people are 1no longer interested in the simple life style 2and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style. 3However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say th
28、at the unprecedented power of production doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited 2and some of them even are 4on the decline. 5Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.
29、 6As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe 7 “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is 8not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 5In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. 5Besides, there are still millions of Chinese 9living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. 5Therefore, 10it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.
