1、出国留学 申请奖学金文书 ps 案例分析出国留学申请奖学金，申请文书所起的作用似乎远远超过托福和 GRE成绩。申请奖学金文书成功的关键在于读书计划和推荐信的独树一帜，能否获得奖学金评审委员会的刮目相看，以下是几个可以参考的范例：Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking water and use ox-driven p
2、lows to cultivate their fields dont have much use for televisions and personal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraption and see what inside made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrou
3、nded by wires and metal, I looked up at my father and asked where the noises were.(有删节)公道地阐述了申请者学习电子工程的动机，学习动机是评审委员非常看中的。同时，读了这段文字，会使读者沉醉在对童年往事的美好回忆里，借此感动评审委员的心。温馨提示：专业的事情，交给专业的机构来完成。10 年来，监审留学一直致力于留学文书的写作服务，已经帮助过无数留学生申请到理想的大学，擅长美国，加拿大，英国和澳洲的个人陈述和推荐信写作。如果您有写作方面的需求可以 联系 QQ：970865017，按时交稿，绝不拖延，再也不用发愁。
4、另外一篇修改过的文章开头用诗一般的语言写道(有删节)：.I first read this paragraph from Madame Curie as a 14-year-old child, and I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!“ As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adver
5、sity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science, and encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.结尾呼应了开头，阐述了作者为什么要往美国读书：I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another passage leaped out: “She was now 24-an age w
6、hen some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries. Maria took the train from Warsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.“For me, the intellectual Mecca is the United States. . I hope to continue my study and research, as detailed below. One day, I hope to find the pure esthetics of biology and reach its luminous summits.我们可以想象地到，评审委员在读了这位女士的申请文章以后，脑海里肯定能栩栩如生地浮现出一个好学上进、布满远大抱负的未来女科学家的形象，怎么会不拍案叫尽，全力帮助这个女士登上前往学术圣地美丽坚的飞机，成为第二个居里夫人呢?
