1、美国留学 MBA 专业 PS 范文( 二)留学美国申请 MBA 是很多学生的首选，对于美国 MBA 的申请，个人陈述起到了很大的作用，本文是加州大学洛杉矶分校(UCLA)MBA 申请个人陈述范文，附中文翻译及点评。 下面是一篇小编给大家找到的美国 MBA 申请文书的范例，喜欢能对大家有所帮助。Born into a peasant family isolated by high mountains, I have come a long way to be where I am. A senior manager now of a state-owned company that has gr
2、own into a medium-sized foreign trade business in China in only five years, I not only head one of my companys most important departments but also travel abroad from time to time on behalf of the company. Often hungry and cold as a child, I now enjoy a comfortable life, which I hope will still get s
3、ignificantly better after I receive advanced business training in a quality MBA program.In many ways, it is thanks to the childhood hardship that I have made my achievements. In trying to help alleviate the financial burden on my parents, I made my debut in the art of money-* at an age when American
4、 kids probably could not be hired to work. I still remember earning my first coin by buying fruits from one place and then selling them in another. Too little a profit it might seem, but it counted towards meeting the familys expenses the. But more importantly, the coin started me out in a business
5、career that I now hope to translate into sizable fortunes.The hunger and humiliation that I endured as a conspicuously poor child, even by the standards of the poverty-stricken mountains, taught me the importance of success. Luckily, my parents, ignorant as they were, knew that the key t real succes
6、s would lie in my education, and they toiled and moiled year in and year out to put that key into my hand, in a parental spirit and tradition that probably can only be found in China. Watching my parents working their backs off every day, I acquired the kind of determination, drive, and sense of res
7、ponsibility not usually expected of Chinese women in China. With my parents unswerving support, I studied diligently and outperformed most of my classmates. For years, my academic report card was the main source of pride in my family.On the strength of my high scores in the National University Entra
8、nce Examinations, I entered I 1986 into the Beijing-based University of International Business and Economy, one of the nations leading higher-education institutions of its kind, to major in accounting in its Department of International Business Management. Brought up in an isolated community, I was
9、convinced that my country, just as my family, could only achieve real and sustained prosperity by readily doing business with the outside world. Masking full use of every minute I had, I read a variety of books and journals related to my major, through which I broadened my vision and enriched my kno
10、wledge. My professional interests were focused mostly on accounting, finance, and international trade. As you can see from the transcripts, my undergraduate academic record was excellent, ranking me among the top three among the 140 students of my department. In recognition of my performance, the un
11、iversity awarded me a stream of scholarships and prizes.While my grades are outstanding, I am more distinguished by my publications, which demonstrate an insistent quest for real solutions to real problems. The International Business, a widely-read business journal in China, published a number of my
12、 articles. These include Reasons of the American Trade Deficit with China (Sept. 1, 1987), Exploration of the Stock-holding System Employed by the Big and Medium-sized State-owned Enterprises (Mar. 29, 1988), and Prospects of the International Shipping Industry (May 5, 1988). In 1990, I worked as a
13、coeditor to the Dictionary of Contemporary Accounting and Financial Management, which has since become a major professional reference book to many Chinese entrepreneurs, accountants, auditors and other professionals in the business community. My editing concentrated on six sections, Accounting, Audi
14、ting, Financial Management, International Finance, International taxation, Bonds and Real Estates.My solid education paid off in my ability to take on a variety of responsibilities in Chinas booming economy. After I obtained my Bachelors Degree in Economics in 1990, I first took up the job of an ass
15、istant to the funding manager at the China National Technical Import & Export Corporation, where I gradually developed into an experienced accounting professional. Upon a meticulous analysis of the companys financial statements, reports and other records, I found its financing policy skewed. It was
16、borrowing billions of RMB with high interest rates while maintaining large bank deposits at low interest rates. Together with my supervisor, I rewrote the financing policy, saving the corporation approximately thirty million yuan. To maximize financing efficiency, I also developed an internal bankin
17、g system that, by closely tracking the actual funding supply and demands of different departments and projects, made full use of the corporation financial resources. For this, I received special commendation from the president of the corporation.Since 1993, I have been meeting increasingly greater c
18、hallenges at the China Kingdom Import & Export Corporation, a company that I helped to set up. As head of the companys Financial and Accounting Division, I formulated its accounting rules and policies, internal control mechanism, financing plans, contract-control systems, and many other crucial poli
19、cies. By meticulous budgeting and accounting, my division played a very important role in the corporations rapid growth, which reached an annual total of sales of US $30,000,000 in 1997. This impressive track record now gives it a strong competitive edge over others. It enjoys an A credit rating by
20、the China Merchants Bank, and has been designated an honor importer by the U.S.A Sea-food Association.Having been in business for eight years, I feel that I have not taken full advantages of my potential, all my achievements notwithstanding. I have practiced my professional expertise in accounting,
21、demonstrated my leadership abilities and perfected my communication skills. But I have yet to become an entrepreneur in my own right, and to fully master the art of modern business. I want to be trained more vigorously in scientific methods of analysis and synthesis. As Chinas embrace of market econ
22、omy gets consolidated, it creates a lot of opportunities and challenges that I do not yet feel fully confident to seize. I need to understand better how a full-blown market economy like that of the United States really works. I am sure that, in many respects, Chinas development in the coming decades
23、 will mirror the American experience in the past. My business career has so far benefited mostly the companies that I worked for, but a good business education in America will probably spell the beginning of a new era for me. It should be the final leg of my journey before I achieve significant fina
24、ncial success for myself.Your university is well known for its excellence in American business education. I am sure that, with my extensive business experience on forefront of Chinas economic reform and development, I can be a worthy student of yours. I am anxious to benefit from your seasoned guida
25、nce and take advantage of your research facilities. If you accept me, you will be not only taking me farther away from the destitution I suffered as a child but also putting me in a position to help lift multitudes of Chinese people out of poverty. When my own company makes not only me but also many
26、 other people rich, when many people become insulated through my effort from the kind of suffering that I once endured, I will perhaps finally say I have achieved real success.毫无疑问 MBA 是最重视工作经历和在职业生涯中能力的体现的专业了。几乎所有的顶尖 MBA 学校都会重视你的过往和将来。过往的职业背景以及将来的职业目标。对于已经工作相当年限且取得了一定工作成就的 MBA 申请人来说，即要在 essay 中体现出自己过往的成就、能力以及领悟，也要结合过往展看未来，写清楚自己的职业目标，同时，这个目标是可行且需要 MBA 课程的帮助的。温馨提示：专业的事情，交给专业的机构来完成。10 年来，监审留学一直致力于留学文书和留学论文的写作服务，已经帮助过无数留学生申请到理想的大学，留学过程中如果时间不够的都找我们监审留学写作课堂作业，不敢保证高分，但最低保及格。如果您有写作方面的需求可以浏览 www.jian- 或联系 QQ：970865017，按时交稿，绝不拖延，再也不用发愁。
