1、美国院校对 PS的一般标准之四Step Three: ExecutionWriting with a Distinctive VoiceOnce youve gathered your information and selected a structure for your essay, you are now ready to write your statement. A key element of the writing process is choosing which point of view you will use to present your information.I
2、ts important to remember that youre not being judged on your creative writing skills. Many styles that would be effective and engaging in a short story or a magazine article would seem strained and awkward used in an application essay. The vast majority of writers use the first person singular, as i
3、n, “I feel that I am uniquely qualified for a career in law.“ It is a straightforward, easy-to-read style that can bevery effective. Make sure that you vary your sentence structure, length and rhythm to keep the essay flowing.In seem excessively casual and a more traditional reader might take it as
4、“sloppy.“ It is best to use this device sparingly, in sentences where the “you“ could be replaced by “one.“ For instance, “You can always achieve your goals if you plan wisely, work hard, and delegate.“Third-person narration (using “he“ or “she“ to refer to yourself) is extremely difficult and does
5、not work well in form of a personal statement. The commonest reaction to a piece written in the third-person is simply confusion. “Whats going on here? We wereexpecting an essay from the applicant, but this is an essay the applicant. Who wrote this?“ It would be disastrous to write about yourself “f
6、rom the point of view of“ a favorite teacher or mentor and have the admissions committee suspect that you are forging letters of recommendation. Even if your literary device is understood and accepted, its easy to come across as eccentric, affected and self-important by referringThe best bet is to u
7、se your own style-this isnt the time to experiment with a new “voice.“ Just make sure that whatever you write is clear, concise, and grammatically correct. Dont try to impress the admissions officers by using big words; simply make sure that the ones you *do* use arent misspelled.It Was A Dark and S
8、tormy Night.Your introductory paragraph could well be the most crucial portion of your entire essay. A good introduction grabs the readers attention and has them halfway through the personal statement before they realize whats hit them. Its best to draft multiple openings and then select the one whi
9、ch is most compelling. You dont have to summarize your whole essay in the first paragraph if you can instead draw the reader in to read what follows. If you are absolutely set on the dramatic effects of third-person narration, you may want to use it in your introduction. For instance, you could desc
10、ribe a galvanizing moment in your life-“It was only the first day of the sixth grade, and already the funny-looking new boy, the little Chinese kid, was being sent to the principals office“- as an introduction to the difficulty of assimilating to a new culture. Be certain to take “ownership“ of the
11、paragraph, though (“That kid was me. It was just the beginning of my long struggle to fit into mainstream American culture coming from a remote province in China“) and move into first-person narration fairly quickly.温馨提示：专业的事情，交给专业的机构来完成。10 年来，监审留学一直致力于留学文书的写作服务，已经帮助过无数留学生申请到理想的大学，擅长美国，加拿大，英国和澳洲的个人陈
12、述和推荐信写作。如果您有写作方面的需求可以联系 QQ：970865017，或是官方网址 www.jian- 按时交稿，绝不拖延，再也不用发愁。The Meat of the MessageThe bulk of your essay should consist of events, experiences and activities, arranged either chronologically, by topic, or in order of importance. Feel free to give emphasis to those accomplishments that yo
13、u believe deserve particular attention - remember, you are selling yourself to the readers. Dont merely tell them that you deserve to get admitted to their school; tell them *why*. Be confident but not arrogant; let them know that you would be an asset to the incoming class, but dont tell them that
14、theyre lucky to have you. Give each paragraph a distinct point that you could sum up in one sentence if necessary, and make sure that the segues between paragraphs are smooth.Wrap It UpAn effective personal essay, like any strong piece of writing piece, is “front loaded.“ Your most compelling anecdo
15、te or fact should come right at the beginning; dont bury the “good stuff“ or leave dramatic revelations for the last paragraph. Conclusions should be brief and to the point, summarizing your qualifications while not rehashing the entire content of the essay. You may wish to restate your goals and mo
16、tivations in a forceful, compelling style: “my excellent academic record, experience in the business world, and incomparable leadership skills make me a confident, accomplished and promising candidate who would be an asset to the incoming class“ rather than “I have worked hard in school and I believe that I will be successful at your school.“
