1、英语写作八大语法错误总结（下）朗阁海外考试研究中心 杨晔五、词性（主语，动名词）错例：Along with the rapid growth of tourism industry, some scenic spots have successful attracted a large number of visitors.正解：Along with the rapid growth of tourism industry, some scenic spots have successfully attracted a large number of visitors.改错练习：1. Nowa
2、day, the economic of our country grows more and more faster.2. Pollution will effect the citizens living standards negatively.3. There was a considerably growth in the amount of people becoming UK citizens from 1962 to 2002.4. Sit in front of the screen for a long time will pose a threat to children
3、s health.5. Only when everyone is aware of the importance of environment preservation can the pollution be alleviated.六、单复数，冠词错例：One of the most challenging problem is who should be responsible for looking after the elderly people.正解：One of the most challenging problems is who should be responsible
4、for looking after the elderly people.改错练习：1. What our modern society values are the personality and creativity.2. Private car will exert adverse impacts on the environment and traffic of the whole society.3. Long-distance education provides students interesting way to learn.七、时态错例 1：It is obvious th
5、at comparing with its drawbacks, the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits.很明显的是，相对于它的弊端，英语作为全球性语言的崛起会带给我们更多的益处。 （被动）正解：It is obvious that compared with its drawbacks, the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits.错例 2：Evidence suggests that th
6、e poor are fail to seek medical treatment because of the cost.证据表明穷人因为费用的问题而不能得到治疗。 （进行时）正解：Evidence suggests that the poor are failing to seek medical treatment because of the cost.错例 3：Air pollution and other kinds of pollution become worse as a result of the increasing traffic.空气污染和其他污染的恶化是交通流量加大
7、的结果。Become 一般用完成时或进行时正解：Air pollution and other kinds of pollution have become worse as a result of the increasing traffic.错例 4：A lack of job opportunities restrict school leavers independence, either forcing them to remain at home and forcing them to move back home.缺乏工作机会限制了离校生的独立性，迫使他们留在家里或者搬回家里住。
8、用将来时态，将会，表意愿正解：A lack of job opportunities will restrict school leavers independence, either forcing them to remain at home and forcing them to move back home.改错练习：1. The increasing violence showing in films or on television has sparked public outcry, and some critics have shown their concern on the
9、 interplay of social violence and media violence.八、标点逗号表示句子内部的一般性停顿。两个具有独立含义的句子，在没有连词的情况下简单地被一个逗号隔开是不正确的。改正这样的错误须用句号或分号代替逗号，或用并列连词（and, but, or, so, nor, yet）连接两个句子，或用从属连词（ because, as, although 等），否则会导致句子出现语法错误。错例：Some people believe children in secondary school should study international news as a
10、 subject, others think thats a waste of time.正解：Some people believe children in secondary school should study international news as a subject. However, others think thats a waste of time.或：Some people believe children in secondary school should study international news as a subject, but others think thats a waste of time.改错练习：1. Students should do some housework, it is good for them to be independent.2. They are far away from parents and friends, they can deal with everything by themselves.
