1、2011 四级辅导 写作1 / 112011 年北京林业大学外语学院四级辅导班资料写作 （Writing）一、全国大学英语四、六级考试作文题评分原则及标准（一）评分原则1 CET 检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2CET 作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Award Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚
2、而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。4避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。5所发样卷一律不得翻印，严禁出版，一经发现，必予追究。（二）评分标准1本题满分为 15 分。2阅卷标准共分五等：2 分、5 分、8 分、11 分及 14 分。各有标准样卷一份。3阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如 8 分) 相似，即定为该分数(即 8 分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即 9 分) 或减一分(即 7 分)。但不得加或减半分。4评分标准2 分 条理不清，思路紊乱
3、，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5 分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8 分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11 分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14 分 切题。表达思想清 楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给 0 分。5字数不足应酌情扣分：累计字数 CET-4 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 49 CET-6 140-
4、149 130-139 120-129 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 79 扣 分 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9注：1如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。2规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。3如果扣为 0 分，要慎重处理。2011 四级辅导 写作2 / 11（三）官方范文Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 12
5、0 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：1车祸发生的时间及地点2你所见到的车祸情况3你对车祸原因的分析以下为各得分档次英语作文范文,全面体现了评分标准的区别An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident2 pointsI saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1.
6、Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton. Wait a time, The ploiemen
7、arriverd in the Accident place.My opiontoin: The car driver is so fast by car, and He didnt attendation to the children by bike aside the road. Two children by bike didnt heared the car come. All of above, I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident.5 pointsIt was 8:00 this morning, I
8、 went on my way to school. When I just at the school gate, I saw the terrible traffic accident happend.A student ride his bike in a high speed, and just when he arrived the school gate, a large truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down. He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground. S
9、urely, the poor boy was hurt very bad.I think there are two reasons for the accident. First, it was just the time we began our first class, the bike rider perhaps did not want to be late, he ride his bike so fast, even didnt low down his speed at the gate. Secend, the truck is too large, and at that
10、 time, there were too many people walk through the gate, so the bike driver have no other way to chose, but to ride in the middle of the road.8 pointsThe trafic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways when I was driving my car home at about 4 oclock.The yellow car involed in the acc
11、ident was running at a high speed along the right-hand when it happened. Hardly it reached the junction when it cracked with a truck running from another direction. There was no time for the drivers to change the directions.I think the accident mostly attributed to such reasons: Firstly and the fore
12、most, it was the carelessness of both of the 2011 四级辅导 写作3 / 11drivers that mostly made the accidents happen. It was not too careful for them when running a car. Secondly, the weather also should be responsible for it. The fog made the vision of drivers vague. Last but not the least, the constructur
13、e of the roads was unreasonable. The trafic lights are needed at any junctions.11 pointsIt was last Friday morning. The accident happened when I was on my way to school. It was so terrible that I would never forget it.I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the road. Then, wi
14、th a big sound, the accident happened. The red car stoped suddenly on the road so that the driver of following car couldnt respond immiditely. The back of the red car was badly damaged, but fortunately there was no people injured in this accident.I think the main reasons are as follows: First of all
15、, the red car shouldnt stop suddenly without any signals. Secondly, the following car should keep a certain distance from the front car so that the driver could have enough time to take measurs when any badly situation. Finally, these two drivers were careless. If they had paid more attention to dri
16、ving, this accident wouldnt have happened.14 pointsIt was the morning of April 6th, 2003. At about 7:30, I went to school by bike as usual. It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way, I noticed a boy riding in front of me, talking loudly with his friends. He didnt wear a raincoat; inst
17、ead he held an umbrella in one hand, and rode with another hand. As he turned left to Guangming Road, he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner. Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella thrown away. The boy was knocked down by the car. I was completely shocked.I
18、think the boys absent-mindedness accounted much for the accident. He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike. The weather also played a role in the tragedy. The third cause was the unproperly parked truck, which was big enough to make the road conditions invisib
19、le to the students who were going to make a turn. All these contributed to this accident.2011 四级辅导 写作4 / 11二、近年四级真题作文举例（注：下列范文并非满分作文，课上可根据上文评分标准予以不同评定）1. 2010 年 12 月大学英语四级考试试题Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be I
20、ndependent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2. 为了让孩子独立, 父母应该参考范文How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?It is nothing unusual to find overprotective parents who help their children in all aspects of life. The question is, are they sure
21、 their heart loaded with love will bring good to their children? Lets look at the real situation of the second-rich generation. Some of them, rather than becoming the second-strong generation, have become the defeated generation which is notorious for their life focused on consumption rather than cr
22、eation.Because of the changes of education in history, most Chinese parents, though successfully accumulate wealth, dont know much about the right value they should pass on to the new generation. They have tried all that they can to be good parents while neglecting the core value they should address
23、, which is INDEPENDENCE.How should parents help children to be independent?They should give their children the freedom to make choices for themselves. Children cannot be happy if they dont have control over their life, which in daily life, means they make choices for themselves, like, what to eat, w
24、hat to wear, what career to take, what kind of spouse they are going to marry. Some parents may be open-minded enough to let their children to make these tiny decisions about food and clothes, but when it comes to the big ones, they are too anxious to let their children have a try. They used to be y
25、oung and they made mistakes and now it is their sons and daughters turn to be youngthe deep love and care is so intense that it becomes even suffocating-they are reluctant to give their children opportunities to start to be responsible for their own lives.2. 2010 年 6 月大学英语四级考试试题1、如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写；2
26、、出现这个现象的原因是3、为了改变这种状况，我认为参考范文Due Attention Should Be Given to SpellingThey say “mind breeds physiognomy”, which implies the importance of ones appearance. Similarly, a correct and neat spelling of a composition can not only reflect a success of the composition but embodie the decent disposition of t
27、he writer as well. Unfortunately , a great number of students pay little attention to their spelling though their composition turns out quite good either in content or in logic, thus leaving the teacher in a dilemma 2011 四级辅导 写作5 / 11whether to give a high score or not.Tracing the reasons hidden beh
28、ind, we can easily find it is mainly because some students are unaware of the importance of the spelling. In their minds, the content absolutely outweighs the form so the attention to spelling can be pleasantly spared. Objectively speaking, in the examination, the limited time and urgent situation m
29、ake students have no more effort to care about their spelling and the fact is that they have to write as quickly as possible to finish it on time, leaving some characters vague or incorrect.Just as is said above, spelling, in a sense , mirrors the content, so a direct result of the bad spelling is t
30、he low academic score in the exam for it is hard to expect a text full of undistinguishable words to receive a good appreciation. Further, once the habit of lax spelling was formed, in a long run the quality of being negligence could also be gradually shaped, which would undoubtedly exert negative i
31、mpact for our future work and life.3. 2009 年 12 月大学英语四级考试试题1. 建设绿色校园很重要2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该参考范文Creating a Green CampusNow we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional practice, especi
32、ally in the area of English learning , one of which is less attention has been given to spelling by college students. This issue has been brought into public focus and called for further concern.A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. First, i
33、nformation is expanding at such an increasing rate that our society is called the one of information. The information is so immense that students haven t ample energy and time to deal deeply with spelling, and some computer programs, such as word ,have done the spelling checking work for us . Second
34、, the standardized-test oriented way of English learning, in which the high score can be achieved without spelling, put students to the position in which they have the quite reason to ignore spelling.This issue may lead to a number of unfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious
35、. For one thing, the information would be incorrect when conveyed by hand- writing way and cause some bad effects. For another, we may indulge ourselves in this way of inaccuracy which may influence our attitude of learning or research. The awareness of the importance of this issue should be enhance
36、d and some proper measures should be taken. It is reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the near future.4. 2009 年 6 月英语四级作文及范文4. 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?5. 也会带来一些问题6. 你的看法参考范文Free Admission to Museums2011 四级辅导 写作6 / 11Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-f
37、ree to visitors home and abroad. The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as theres a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society. Only with free access to this live database, can
38、 most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.However, free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well. The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly impedes the sustainable development of these organizations. As a
39、 result, our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control. On the other hand, free admission attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valua
40、ble treasures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct. Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it. For example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior
41、of visitors or set some closed days for museums for regular maintenance. Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development.52008 年 6 月 21 日英语四级作文及范文1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习3. 你对于网络的看法参考范文The InternetIn the era of info
42、rmation technology, the Internet has played an increasingly important role in our society. With the Internet, its easy to get the information we need so as to improve the efficiency of our study and work. We cant deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern so
43、ciety without the Internet. However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers. The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet. Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study. In my opinion
44、, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it. Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively, and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development. 6. 2008 年 12 月英语四级作文及范文 1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2. 造成的问题3. 限制使用塑的意义参考范文Limiting t
45、he Use of Disposal BagsThese days, disposal products often hit the headlines of newspapers and have been brought into focus of the public. Indeed, it is widely accepted that they have gained increasing popularity among people in all walks of life. 2011 四级辅导 写作7 / 11Taking a look around you, you can
46、find examples too numerous to list: When you walk on the street, you can see plastic bags flying over your head; When you ramble along the river, you can find plastic bottles floating on the water; When you stroll in the park with your lover, you can notice waste paper thrown everywhere.Among the mo
47、st important reasons often cited by people is the quickening pace of modern life. They are often too busy to wash dirty dishes or glass; as a result they can do nothing but use disposal products. Also playing a part is the improvement of peoples life. As a result of the policy of opening and reform,
48、 an increasing number of people are much richer than before and can afford disposal products.Admittedly, they might benefit us in a short term. Unfortunately, they will do us harm in more than one way. The major harm is (that) they are sure to pollute the environment. To make matters worse, they are
49、 likely to have potential harm to public health. To illustrate this point, I can think of no better example than HP, the river through S. As a result of disposal products in it, the water has caused some diseases in the local people. To sum up, for the factors mentioned before, we can safely reach the conclusion that the prevalence of disposable products is bound to cause a chain of undesirable effects. In view of the present situation, it is high time that the government tried every means to protect the envir
