1、 原创六级写作之第一课（ver.6502）第一课概述 自我介绍1. 英语专业2. 领事馆3. 新东方 课程安排1. 概述和书信2. 书信和对立观点题3. 对立观点和单一观点题4. 单一观点和图表5. 图表，改错和完型 课程要求1. 预读范文，模板，泛读2. 复读例文，笔记3. 实践押题 评分原则内容与结构 总体评分1. 找：idea2. 扫：从，写作方法3. 感：文字，文法，文体，文笔检查扣分点1. 作文格式2. 拼写3. 搭配4. 三“一致” 印象分加分点/闪光点十大闪光点（求求大家）1. 提问法2. 总结法3. “一些人认为”4. 从句：宾语从句、定语从句5. 并列句6. 理由词汇7. 理
2、由段公式8. 路线句型9. 数据的表达10. 结语书信 信件类型：订购信、退货信、投诉信、建议信、道歉信、感谢信、邀请信、咨询信、安排信、通知信、倡议信、求职信和辞职信十三种。 主考类型：求职信、投诉信、订购信、咨询信、倡议信、建议信和邀请信七种。 未考类型：求职信、投诉信、订购信和咨询信四种。 特殊要求主要体现在以下两个方面：一是要求信息点覆盖全面。至少应当包含：时间、地点、人物、主要事件（或观点）等。二是突出了语言的准确性、格式和语域。 下面归纳五大信函写作策略： 1. 求职信 开头段：表明信息来源，说明写作意图（时间、地点）。主体段：介绍自己相关的工作经历、学习经历，以此证明你能胜任这个
3、职位（人物）。 次要段：表明自己申请这个职位的理由（事情）。结尾段：等待回音，联系方式。2. 投诉信 开头段： 说明与收信人的相关性，点明你写作的意图（人物、关系）。主体段： 写明投诉的原因，要展开说明，或者讲具体理由，或者谈问题的具体体现方式（事情）。结束段：表达你希望上述问题得到尽快解决的强烈愿望，并对有关人员做出的努力表示感谢（时间、地点）。 3. 订购信 开头段： 开篇点出写信的目的，定购你要的东西（事情）。 主体段： 详细说明你订购货物的规格、大小、颜色、尺寸等（时间、地点）。 结束段：表示对方回函以便确认（人物）。4. 咨询信开头段： 明确写信的目的，说明写这封信的目的是寻求某信息
4、或帮助（事情）。主体段：询问具体问题，强调所需信息的重要性（时间、地点）。结束段：表达获取信息的强烈愿望，提供联系方式以便收信人与你联系，并对有关人员表示感谢（人物）。 写作建议：一是，生活中尽量养成使用英文的习惯；二是，在平时的写作训练中要从严要求；三是，熟读甚至背诵不同类型的范文。 例文 1Dear Sir / Madam, To Whom It May Concern Yours faithfullyDear Mr. / Ms / Mrs. / Miss（全名/名）, . Yours sincerely / trulyDear Tom, (With) Best wishes, Yours
5、 Tommy, Yours (ever) Hai, Love第一段1. 问候型 Long time no see.2. I havent written to you for ages because Ive been so busy over the last year and I never seem to have a minute to myself.3. Long distance separates no bosom friends.4. Though we have never seen each other, yet I have long heard of you.5. Ho
6、w nice it was to hear from you at last!6. 告知型 You will be very glad to hear that7. With great delight I learned that8. To tell a piece of good news, I have/am doing9. I am writing this letter to tell/inform you that10. I have just received your kind letter regarding第三段1. 客套型 Thanks for your precious
7、 time.2. Thanks again for your kind help / assistance.3. Thank you in advance.4. 展望型 I am looking forward to seeing/meeting you here in Shanghai China.5. 寄语型 Your timely reply to this letter is highly appreciated by all the people concerned.6. I would appreciate it if you contact me as soon as possi
8、ble.7. I am looking forward to your reply / hearing from you soon.8. Write to me a.s.a.p.9. Remember: I shall always my fingers crossed for you at any rate.10. Shall you come across any problem, please do not hesitate to let me know.11. Please let me know if I can help you any further.12. I hope thi
9、s information will help you.13. Please feel free to contact me for more information / further confirmation.14. I trust these suggestions will be of use to you. 泛读P20N23 押题求职信，投诉信，感谢信，介绍信，临别信，定购信，咨询信。原创六级写作之第二课（ver.6502）第二课对立观点 例文 十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”Some无数的 numerous/myriad (a myriad of)大量的 A great / large
10、 / huge / (in)considerable / significant / noticeable number / amount / quantity / portion of对半的 almost / nearly / some / close to / approximately half of大多的 the (vast / overwhelming) majority of一些/另一些（抽象意义）：some others, majority minority 十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”people公众 the public各行各业 people from all walks o
11、f life / the circle/community/walk of education学生 examinees / testees / students特殊人群 readers / drivers 支持/反对者 followers objectors, dissenters consenters参与者 participants / candidates / interviewees 十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”think认为 assume / argue / hold (the opinion) / claim / suggest / declare / say / assert /
12、state / believe / insist/ maintain / doubt / suspect that支持 give / express / show / demonstrate ones support for赞成/反对 vote / ballot for/againstcast ones vote / ballot for / againstside with / stand on the side of接受 take the advise / follow the suggestion / accept the opinion / idea that意见是 ones view
13、point is that / be with the view that 十大闪光点之一提问法A. 直接提问法B. 间接提问法C. 连续提问法 十大闪光点之二总结法1. 玫瑰 All roses have thorns.2. 花园 No garden is without weeds.3. 金币 Every coin has 2 sides.4. 利剑 Every sword has 2 edges.5. 利弊 Every advantage has its disadvantages.6. 众口 Its hard to please all.7. 仁智 So many people, so
14、 many minds.8. 伟人 Great minds think alike.9. 毒肉 One mans meat is another mans poison.10. 过及 Throw the baby out with the bath water.第一段：1. 背景法 Along with the advent of2. As Chinese society develops, greater importance is attached to3. Gone is the days / years / age / period / era / times in which / w
15、hen people regard / take / consider / think of / take sth. as a new / strange / radical blessing / curse / phenomenon / concept / notion / creation / invention4. 提问法 Is it a blessing or a curse?5. 总结法 Admittedly, there are merits to both sides of the argument.6. All roses have thorns.7. No garden is
16、 without weeds.8. Answers shall find it hard to please all, as the old say goes.9. As the proverb goes: “Every coin has its two sides”, _ is no exception.10. As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.11. At present, some people think _, while others claim _.
17、 Both sides have their merits and drawbacks.12. Consensus has never been reached on this issue.13. Every advantage has its disadvantages.14. 组合句型 As the proverb goes: “So many people, so many minds.“, it is quite understandable that people from different backgrounds put different interpretations on
18、the same issue of sth.第二段1. On the one hand / For one thing2. Supporters firmly suggest that 3. The majority is in favor of the idea / point out the fact that sth. is beneficial to4. These people hold the view that5. Thunderous applause could be heard to maintain the idea that6. 因果法 They also argue
19、that sth is helpful to7. 数据法 According to a recent survey, 第三段1. One the other side of the coin / On the other hand / For another2. Adverse criticism complains that3. Criticism could also be noticed to show peoples concern over4. Discommenders / Antis could not concur with the former by insisting5.
20、因果法 The minority, however, stands on a different ground. They complain that it does harm to sth.6. Moreover, they suggest, sth. might exert negative effects on 7. 举例法 A case in point, 第四段1. 单刀式 All things considered, a unshakable conclusion could be safely drawn that 2. As is mentioned above, 3. Bal
21、ancing the advantages and disadvantages / negative effects and positive effects of I intend to stand on the side that 4. Based on the evidence before me, I am bound to accept the viewpoint that 5. Given the factors listed before6. I am with the view that / I am inclined to stand on the side that / I
22、 would like to vote for the former / latter idea that / I prefer the former / latter viewpoint that7. 对比式 I note the advantage / negative effect / influence / drawback of sth, but this alone could not substantial outweigh the positive effect / influence / merit / disadvantage of it as a whole.8. 展望式
23、 Looking ahead, we can say with full confidence that China will raise its economic and social development to a new level despite of the current difficulties. 泛读P11N2, 4, 7, 8, 25 押题电脑，电子辞典，留学，汽车，压力原创六级写作之第三课（ver.6502）第三课单一观点 十大闪光点之四从句（主语，宾语，表语，定语，状语，同位语）宾语从句引出观点定语从句引出人事物 十大闪光点之五并列句1. 简单连词：and, or, b
24、ut, if, because2. 关联连词：both and, not only but also3. 短语连词：as if, as long as, in order that4. 分词连词：supposing, considering, provided2 十大闪光点之六理由段公式1. 序列词：the 序数词 / first and foremost / last but not leastthe other / anothera thirdone of2. + n. ：point / thing / fact / factormerit / demerit / positive inf
25、luence / advantagerule / principle3. + VP ：to remember / to be kept in mind / ought to be taken into consideration shall be borne / kept in mind / could not be forgot / neglected / ignoredworth mentioningof great importance / significanceholding the balanceI would like to mention / that talks / that
26、 holds water4. + is that5. + 从句十大闪光点之七理由词汇工作学习1. 昂贵：costly, expensive, lavish, extravagant2. 帮助：helpful, useful, beneficial, think / speak / praise highly of sth., assist, free from, make contribution to, do ones bit to3. 便利：efficiency, convenience, easy, handy, simple, comfortable, ready-to-use, fr
27、iendly interface4. 节省：save / waste time / money / space / energy, time-consuming, “Live now, pay later.”5. 节约：economical, thrifty/thrift, frugal/frugality6. 经验：social experience, enter the society, accumulate, inexperienced, green-hand, step by step7. 提高：improve, enhance, develop, upgrade, better, p
28、erfect, upgrade, advance, make much progress/improvement in (field)8. 重视：pay attention to, attach importance to, lay / give emphasis on, give emphasis to, list sth. on the top of agenda, rank the first, sth. comes first9. 重要：important, indispensable, essential, crucial, decisive, vital, fundamental,
29、 decisive, critical, inseparable, be of less importance, become ones utmost concern10. 信任：credit, decent background, world-renowned, trustworthy, respect, honor十大闪光点之七理由词汇性格态度1. 独立：independence, individuality, by oneself, stand on ones own feet2. 目标：ambition, strategic goal, aim, realize, dreams com
30、e true, target3. 能力：competition, capability, ability, proficiency, creativity, tolerance, perseverance, capacity4. 缺点：overbearing 傲慢的, arrogant, selfish, dependent, conservative 保守的, isolated, self-centered, indifferent, neglect, pay no attention to, turn a blind eye to, turn a cold shoulder to sb.,
31、 turn a deaf ear to5. 团结：cooperate, team spirit, team player, considerate, thoughtful, sociable, work together, joint effort6. 信心：(self)confidence, convince 十大闪光点之七理由词汇环境卫生1. 肮脏：dirty, filthy, messy, at sixes and sevens2. 环境：environment, surroundings, working condition3. 卫生：public health, hygiene4.
32、污染：pollute, pollutant, poisonous, harmful, contaminate, contaminant安全健康1. 安全：in safe, free from2. 疾病：disease, illness, attack, serious threat, spread3. 健康：mental / physical health, physical well-being, strong, energetic, keep fit, figure, build up, lose weight4. 危险：in danger, risk, hazard, harmful第一
33、段：1. 对比法 There is no consensus of opinions among people about sth. Some people are of the view that While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.2. If one has considered the followin
34、g perspectives, he could only agree with the title statement as I do3. 反问法 Can we stress the importance of too much? Never!4. 总分法 I would state my objection to this issue after analyzing the following three reasons.5. Among countless factors that influence my decision, there are two/three conspicuou
35、s aspects.6. This view is based on the propensity of following points.7. To assume that sth. is beneficial is destined to miss the following points.8. There are numerous reasons why I advocate the argument of sth. and I would explore a few of the most important ones here.9. In the following paragrap
36、h, I will venture to explore the reasons why 谦虚第二段：层次标志词1. In the following paragraph, I would venture to explore the reasons why2. To start with, first of all, first and foremost, when it comes to, Now there is a growing awareness that. 3. It is time we explore the truth of . 4. Nowhere in history
37、has the issue been more visible.5. Besides, in addition, whats more/worse, to make the matter worse6. Finally, last but not least, the last but not the least7. The main reason/factor/advantage that can be seen by everyone is that8. The major effect is that效果（affect 影响）9. Another that we must conside
38、r/take into consideration / cannot ignore is that10. . but that is only part of the history. 11. Another equally important aspect is . 12. A is but one of the many effects. Another is . 13. Besides, other reasons are.理由段公式a) The first point to be kept in mind is thatb) The second merit I would like
39、to mention is thatc) The third thing that should be taken into serious consideration is thatd) The fourth rule that could not be forgot / neglected / ignored is that列举法1. One very strong argument for doing sth. is that2. We may look into every possible reason, however, foremost reason for (doing) st
40、h. is3. The first reason can be seen by every person is that4. Those who object to this idea forget a universal truth: 5. First, we can observe easily that6. The other notorious disadvantages of sth. is that7. Some agree with the statement without reservation since8. Among all of the supporting evid
41、ences, one is the strongest. That is,9. Certainly no other reason in my decision is more crucial than the one as follow: 10. In term of substantive level, the reason mentioned below seems to be advisable and deserve more consideration.11. The main reason for my propensity is that12. Moreover, there
42、is a further more subtle point we must consider13. There is one impressive example I want to mention here.第三段：十大闪光点之八结语1. 单刀式 All things considered, a unshakable conclusion could be safely drawn that 2. As is mentioned above, 3. Balancing the advantages and disadvantages / negative effects and posit
43、ive effects of I intend to stand on the side that 4. Based on the evidence before me, I am bound to accept the viewpoint that 5. Given the factors listed before6. I am with the view that / I am inclined to stand on the side that / I would like to vote for the former / latter idea that / I prefer the
44、 former / latter viewpoint that7. Its safe to draw the conclusion, not difficult to reach the consensus8. Judging from all evidence available, we can predict with confidence that 9. My personal / humble opinion / view point / point of view / theory / understanding / view / belief is that 10. Through
45、 above analysis, 11. Weighing the pros and cons of the argument, I am inclined to agree with the former / latter.12. Were I to offer my choice, I would not hesitate to stand on the side/show my support / vote for13. A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that14. As a college student, I am
46、 most eligible to have a say in this discussion.15. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that16. So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion: 17. From above, we can predict that18. 组合式 All in all / In a word / In short / On the whole / In bri
47、ef / In conclusion, if we take a careful consideration / for the reasons presented above / given the factors I have just outlined / as is mentioned above, it is not difficult to reach the conclusion that / the writer believe that / it is sagacious to support the statement that / it is safe to draw t
48、he conclusion that the advantages of sth. could not easily overweigh its disadvantages.19. Taking into all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that20. 对比式 While the writer understand / accept that sth. has brought about some advantages / positive influences / effects, these benef
49、its alone could not substantially outweigh my serious / grave concern over its numerous / countless / immense / massive disadvantages / negative influences / effects to the development / advancement / benefit of study / country / society / economy as a whole.21. I note the advantage / negative effect / influence / drawback of sth, but this alone could not substanti
