1、1（全文由 Peter 编制） 2016 年高考试题分项解析之专题-短文改错1.【2016 全国新课标 I】短文改错（10 分） My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that
2、the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2.【2016 全国新课标 II】短文改错（共 10 小题，每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）
3、The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip ab
4、road, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.3.【2016 全国新课标 III】 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）The teenage year from 13 t
5、o 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didnt seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my
6、parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.4.【2016 四川】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）2It
7、 is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shoppi
8、ng. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day！”Mom was grateful and moving. 5.【2016 浙江】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）When I w
9、as a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,wed greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they w
10、ould talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2015 年高考试题分项解析之专题 -短文改错1.【2015陕西】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分）
11、My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were r
12、eally well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party i
13、s of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!32.【2015四川】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，共 15 分）Hi, Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We han
14、g out together during lunch andafter school. Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. Its been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a timewasting activity! In fact ,I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. How do you thi
15、nk I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace3.【2015浙江】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the l
16、eft-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the v
17、iew of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.4.【201
18、5新课标全国 II】4One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was s
19、cared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.5.【2015新课标全国 I】When I was a child, I hoped to live
20、 in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warmin
21、g has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,well live to regret it .2014 年高考试题分项解析之专题 -短文改错1. Correction 1(2014 课标全国 )Nearly five years bef
22、ore, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There a
23、re so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2. Correction 2(2014 课标全国 )5My dream school starts at 8:30 a.
24、m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look
25、 like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.3. Correction 3(2014 浙江 )I was taking
26、 a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which wa
27、s eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to
28、others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.4. Correction 4(2014 辽宁 )Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking. I
29、t is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock. That is too much for u
30、s, considering how closely the houses are.6We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose5. Correction 5(2014 四川 )Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If
31、 you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, you
32、r teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.72016 年高考试题分项解析之专题-短文改错(答案解析)1.【2016 全国新课标 I】短文改错（10 分） 【答案】1. that where 2. but 去掉 3. had have 4. honest honesty 5. or and 6. using used 7. becoming 前加 of 8. the a 9. our
33、 his 10. steadsteadily 【归纳总结】在英语中 though、although、while 或者 as 等引导的让步状语从句不和 but 连用；连词because 不和 so 连用；此外，return 不和 back 连用。3. had have 考查动词时态。 文章是介绍现在的情况，应该用一般现在时。4. honest honesty 考查名词。此处是指诚实是他成功的秘诀，用名词形式。 而形容词 honest 意思是“诚实的”，是指人的性格特点。 2.【2016 全国新课标 II】短文改错（共 10 小题，每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）【答案】1.how 改为 what
34、 2.chose 改为 choose 3.take 改为 taking 4.but 改为 and 5.about 后加 the6.your 改为 our 7.knowledges 改为 knowledge 8.删除 can 或 can 改为 should 9.thought 改为 think 10.many 改为 much【解析】试题分析：考查记叙文， “我” 和同学们对暑假的旅游计划的讨论。86.your 改为 our 考查代词。应该使用 our 与本句的主语 we 保持一致。句意：如果我们出国旅游，我们就拓宽视野并学到书本上学不到的知识。7.knowledges 改为 knowledge
35、考查名词单复数。本句中名词 knowledge 是不可数名词，没有复数形式。8.删除 can 或 can 改为 should 考查虚拟语气。动词 suggest 作为建议的时候，后面的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气“(should)+动词原形”,所以本句可以删除 can 或 can 改为 should。9.thought 改为 think 考查时态。本文介绍我和同学们商量暑假旅游的事情，全文以一般现在时为主，所以本句使用现在时 think。10.many 改为 much 考查代词。本句中代词 much 代替不可数名词 much money 作为动词 cost 的宾语，而 many 通常代替可数名词复数
36、形式。【名师点睛】高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高，就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查，而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。一、词法改错词法的测试包括：定冠词和不定冠词的用法；名词的单复数和名词的所有格；动词的时态、语态、语气，情态动词和非谓语动词等；人称代词、人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法；介词的搭配；并列连词、从属连词的用法；形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法；固定搭配和习惯用法。例如：本题中的5.about 后加 the 考查定冠词7.kno
37、wledges 改为 knowledge 考查名词单复数10.many 改为 much 考查代词二、句法改错句法的测试包括：主谓语在数上的一致性；名词性从句、定语从句和强调句；句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性。例如：1.how 改为 what 考查特殊结构。2.chose 改为 choose 考查句子结构3.take 改为 taking 考查并列结构8.删除 can 或 can 改为 should 考查虚拟语气三、语篇改错9语篇的测试包括：上下文的时态是否一致；上下文中的代词指代是否一致；上下文中的逻辑关系是否一致。4.but 改为 and 考查连词6.your 改为 our 考查代词
38、和逻辑关系9.thought 改为 think 考查时态3.【2016 全国新课标 III】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）【答案】51.yearyears 52.worseworst 53.the 去掉 54.yourselfmyself 55.suchso 56.telltold 57.freelyfree 58.wearwearing 59.tofor 60.I need55.suchso 考查 so/such 的用法。 my parents didnt seem to think so 我的父母似乎不这样认为，so 指代上一句的内容，故把 such 改为 so
39、。56.telltold 考查时态。通篇回忆过去的事情，使用的一般过去时，故把 tell 改为 told。57.freelyfree 考查形容词副词。 be 后跟形容词构成系表结构，be free from.摆脱.，不受. 的影响，故把 freely 改为 free。58.wearwearing 考查固定搭配。by 是介词，意为 “通过” ，后跟名词代词或动名词，故把 wear 改为wearing。考点：名词；形容词；代词；介词；最高级；固定搭配；时态【名师点睛】改错中动词、连词以及上下文语境也是出题者经常会考虑的出题知识点，其解题方法如下：1.动词错误的发现与解决英语中有许多的短语动词，是很
40、难从字面上判断其意义的。其中与介词构成短语的动词是最常见的。我们在分析题目的时候，发现有动宾搭配的时候，应该考虑该动词是否是一个短语动词，并进而分析构成该短语动词的介词有无遗漏。对于短语动词的熟悉是一个长期积累的过程，需要随时总结与记忆。以下是考试中常见到的短语动词：account for； add up to； back up； break down； break away from； bleak out； break up； break 10in； break off； bring about； bring up； bring out； bring down； build up； call
41、 off； call for； call on； carry out； check in； clear up； come off； come around； count on； cut down； cut off； do away with； dwell on； fall back on； fall out； get over； get out of； get at； give out； give up； give off； hang on； hold back； keep back from； keep up with； lay off； lay down； live up to； look
42、 into； look forward to； look over； make up； make out； pass away； put up with； role out； run out of； set about； take over； take up； take in； take off； turn up； turn out； work out 等。还有一种常考的动词的用法就是语态。在所分析的文字中包含谓语动词，那么应该分析是否是这方面的问题。其中应该重点分析主语与谓语动词的关系是主动还是被动。2连接词错误的发现与解决例： However, a second person though
43、t that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good manners本题所考查的就是比较连接词的用法。从前文的 more 我们就可以看出，下文的 as 是不恰当的，正确的答案应是比较连接词 than。一般来说，比较连接词所考查的重点集中在 as 与 than 的用法上。句意中是否还有比较意义是很容易辨别的，我们一旦觉察到句子有比较的意思，就应考虑是否是 as 与 than 的用法混淆。此外定语从句的连接词也是要特别注意的。我们看 2000 年 6 月的第 74 题：Instead，this other person told
44、 us a story，it he said was quite well known在这里，句子的后半段很明显是一个非限制性的定语从句，所以应将 it 改为 which.非限制性的定语从句的连接词在近几年的考试中反复出现，应该引起我们的重视。解决此类问题的方法是，凡是发现有复合句的分析对象，首先就要考虑从句的连接词。首先看是否有连接词，其次看连接词是否正确，尤其是 which 与 that 的不同应用。3语言环境类错误的发现与解决从历年的考题来看，语言环境类的错误是最有章可循的。这类错误一般是一行中的关键词与上下文所体现出来的意思完全相反。此类题的解决也较简单，那就是将不符合文意的词改为它的
45、反义词即可。如第54 题就是属于语境错误。句意：我认为我什么都知道，可以自己拿主意了。这里指作者自己做决定，根据主语 I 可知，应该用 myself，故把 yourself 改为 myself。4.【2016 四川】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）【答案】 1.so-but 2.houseworks-housework 3.or-and 4.get-got 5.去掉 on 6.her-his 7.在 in 和 kitchen 之间加 the 8.what-that/which(或去掉 what) 9.favoritest-favorite 10.moving-moved
