1、八年级上册书面表达训练作文指导加范例点评与练习( 上)Unit1 Where did you go on vacation ?写作指南本单元的写作任务是写关于假期活动的文章。写这样的文章时，要从以下几个方面入手：1你在哪儿度的假期？2在假期期间你做什么了？3那儿的天气怎么样？4你认为那儿的人怎么样？5你喜欢那儿的食物吗？为什么？由于写的活动已经过去，故时态用一般过去时。常用句型：1I went to.on vacation.2The food there was.3The people there were.去年的暑假你是怎样度过的？去了什么地方？那里的食物怎么样？那里的人怎么样？有哪些有趣的
2、或难忘的事情发生？和大家分享一下吧。请运用本单元所学知识，写一篇关于假期活动的短文。I still remembered my last summer vacation. My family and I went to see my grandparents in the countryside. The weather there was nice. Sometimes I went to the mountains with my grandfather. Sometimes I went swimming by myself. My grandmother cooked deliciou
3、s food for us every day. In the evening，we all sat together and watched TV.What a great time we had!点评：作者用I still remembered my last summer vacation引入正题，介绍了在暑假期间和家人去乡下看望祖父母的经历。重点介绍了在乡下的活动，讲述得条理有序。其中sometimes的使用，使文中内容更为丰富。最后以What a great time we had！结尾，既写出了自己的感受，又对全文进行了总结。写作练习 Unit1假设你是张杰。你父母去过世界上许多地
4、方旅游。然而，给你印象最深的是巴黎之旅。请根据下面表格提示，以The trip to Paris为题写一篇70字左右的文章。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考范文： Paris ，FranceTimeLast summer vacationHong you stay thereFor four daysWhat you didvisited the Eiffel Tower ,tasted delicious wine and bought something niceFeelingtired but excited The trip Paris My name is Zhang Jie. My
5、 parent and I visited many big city around the world.But the trip to Pais,France was the most exciting one.We went to Pais last summer vacation.We got there by plane and stayed there for five days.When we were in Paris,we visited the Eiffel Tower and many other places of interest there.All of us had
6、 a great time.Paris is famous for its delicious wine.So we tasted it.Later,we bought something nice and went to parties.Although the trip seemed to be short and we were tired,we felt excited.Unit 2How often do you exercise?写作指南本单元是写关于介绍某人进行某活动的文章。通常以记叙文的形式体现。写此文章时，应注意：一、可以开篇点题，在文章的开始交代人物，然后再进一步详细叙述情
7、况。如做了什么事，多久做一次等，使文章内容具体、充实。二、合理选用人称，记叙文可以用第一人称，也可以用第三人称来写。人称不同，其利弊不同。用第一人称行文，文章比较生动、形象，它给读者身临其境的感觉，但其叙述的范围受到一定的限制。因为它无法同时叙述发生在不同地方的事件。用第三人称行文，没有这种局限性，但是，用第三人称很难把不同地点的不同人物发生的事件排列恰当。具体用哪种人称，需要根据作文的要求来处理。三、在结束时，可以用一两句话点明所叙述事情的作用。下表列出了你的四个朋友喜欢的活动和他们做这些活动的频率，请根据表格内容写一篇文章描述一下。NameActivityHow oftenJohnPlay
8、ing basketballAlmost every dayDavidSurfing the InternetOnce two weeksHan MeiShoppingThree times a weekLi PingReading in the libraryOnce a week_There are fifty students in our class.John，David，Han Mei and Li Ping are my best friends.Let me tell you what they like doing best.John likes playing basketb
9、all best.He plays it almost every day.He says basketball is very exciting，but he doesnt care about the results of the game.David likes surfing the Internet，but his parents dont want him to play with the computer too often.So he surfs the Internet once two weeks.Han Mei likes shopping best.She does s
10、hopping three times a week.Li Ping likes reading in the library.She goes there once a week.What about you？What do you like doing best？How often do you do it?点评：开篇点题，说明作者的好朋友喜欢的活动，从而为下文做好铺垫。按照表格，运用恰当的短语和句子描述了他们的具体活动，并写出了从事这些活动的频率，同时加进了对这些活动的评价，显得丰满不空洞。最后两句紧扣上文，起到了与上文相呼应的作用。习作练习： Unit 2 某报社学生习作栏目正在向广大
11、学生征文。请以Lets do exercise together为题，根据以下提示，写一运动的重要性保持健康保持良好心态.上学时步行或骑自行车体育课做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球.）周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等.篇60-80词的短文，向该栏目投稿。开头已给出，不计入总次数。参考范文： Lets do exercise together.Its very important for us to do exercise.Doing exercise can make us healthy and help us keep happy.Whats more,taking exercise is good fo
12、r our study.We can do many kinds of exercise whenever we want.It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike.During PE class,we can do exercise such as running jumping playing basketball and so on.On weekends,we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends.Also,we can go hiking during t
13、he vacations.Lets do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!Unit 3Im more outgoing than my sister.写作指南本单元的写作是记述人与人之间的异同的。在写这样的文章时，要抓住所要比较的人物的特点，从外貌特征、个性特点等方面进行描述。指出哪些方面具有相同点，哪些方面具有不同点，并正确使用形容词的比较级进行比较和分析，从而增进人与人之间的了解和友谊。写作时，语言要简练，对比要鲜明。可以先介绍一人，再介绍另一人；也可以同时就某一方面对双方进行对比。以My Best Friend and I 为
14、题写一篇短文，比较自己与好朋友的特征，不少于60词。My Best Friend and ILinda is my best friend. In some ways we look the same and in some ways we look different. We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller than IAlso she is more careful. I am more outgoing than her，and Im funnier. We both have a good habit. Linda
15、likes reading and I do，too. So you see，I like friends who have the same habits as me.点评：开头点明Linda是最好的朋友。接着点出我和好朋友的相同与不同之处，注重运用了本单元的重点语法比较级。最后谈了自己的交友观，从而突出主题。习作练习：健康的生活方式对我们的影响到底有多大？看看Henry的变化，你就知道答案了。请根据表格内容的提示，以“A healthy lifestyle is important”为题，写一篇不少于70词的短文。来描述Henry的变化。TimeTwo years agoNowHabith
16、ave much meat and colalike vegetables and fruitHealthHardly ever exercise;often feel tiredRun every morning;feel wellStudyWeak in all the subjectsMake great progress(进步）in every subjects 参考范文： A healthy lifestyle is importantTwo years ago,Henry had much meat and he liked drinking cola very much.he h
17、ardly ever exercised because he thought it was boring.So he often felt tired.He was weak in all his subjects.But he is different now.He likes vegetables and fruit very much.He runs every morning with his father in the park to keep healthy.So he feels well.And he is making great progress in every sub
18、ject.Unit 4Whats the best movie theater?写作指南本单元是写对事物或人物进行比较的文章。通过比较，突出事物的特点，更好地表现文章的主题。在写这样的文章时，要抓住事物或人物的特征，即抓住这个事物或人物区别于其他事物或人物的不同特点，从共性中发现个性，从一般中找到特殊。事物或人物的特征往往在同别的事物或人物的相比较中显示出来。写作时要正确运用本单元的比较等级。学校举办艺术节，请写一篇有关才艺展示的文章。要求：描写三种或三种以上的节目并对节目进行评价。词数：6080。The Talent ShowThe Famous People Talent Show was
19、 fantastic. The funniest performer was Jim Carrey. He sang a cute song as he danced to quiet music. His dance was cheerful and funny. Tom Smith was the quietest performer. He played dumb show which was very interesting. Susan won the prize for the best performer. She played a wonderful violin piece.
20、点评：提取出所给提示中的信息，先对所有节目进行总体介绍，然后对节目进行了比较，主要运用了最高级，使节目特色更加突出。习作练习假设上周你对你家周围的几家服装店进行了一次调查，调查结果如下表所示。请根据表格内容，写一篇调查报告，要求不少于70词。NameQuality(质量)PriceServiceRed StarbesthighestgoodSunshine Clothes StoregoodlowworstBlue Skynot very goodlowestbest 参考范文 There are three clothes stores in my neighborhood:Red Star
21、,Sunshine Clothes Store and Blue Sky.what do people think of them? Last week,I did a service about three stores.Here are the results.Red Star has the best but the most expensive clothes.Its service is very good.The clothes in Sunshine Clothes Store are good and the price are low.But the service ther
22、e is the worst.In Blue Sky,people can buy the cheapest clothes,and it has the best service.But the clothes there are not very good.Unit 5Do you want to watch a game show?写作指南本单元的写作任务是写对电视节目或时尚物品发表自己的观点和看法，从而体现自己的喜好。写作时要注意：1时态要用一般现在时。2写出你所喜欢的电视节目或时尚物品。3写出喜欢的原因或理由来充实文章。要注意运用表达观点、态度的词语，如：like，cant stan
23、d等。常用句型：1What do you think of.?2I dont mind.3Can you please do.?4Sb .thinks.对不同类型的电视节目，如连续剧、体育节目、访谈节目等，你有什么看法？请就此写一篇短文，阐述一下你的观点。要求：1.词数不少于50词。2节目种类：至少三种以上。On weekends，I like watching TV.I love sports shows because I like sports very much. I like to watch Soccer Night and Sports News. And I like game
24、 shows，too. They are interesting and sometimes they are exciting. But I dont like soap operas. They are usually long and boring. I cant stand them. And I dont like talk shows. They are boring，too.点评：作者通过点出“周末，我喜欢看电视”，从而引出下文的电视节目，语言干练简洁。下文介绍了自己喜欢及不喜欢的电视节目，运用了like，dont like，cant stand等词语，把作者的喜好清晰地呈现于读
25、者面前。本文写作时可值得借鉴。习作练习假设你是Grace，前不久班里做了一项关于家庭成员的节目喜好调查。请补充表格内容，然后根据表格提示，写一篇七十词左右的短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Favorite TV showExpect to learnGracenewsWhat happens in China and all over the worldMother.Father.参考范文My name is Grace.There are three people in my family.We like different TV shows.I like news.I want to know what happens in China and all over the world from the news.My mother likes sitcoms because they can always make her laugh and relax after a days work.She also expects to learn a lot about how to do better in sports shows so that he can make his program better and more popular. 7
