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2、，值得你下载，教育，管理，论文，制度，方案手册，应有尽有-如何让你的雅思写作语句符合官方标准写跃典仑品霍锅妈缚五不秤埃豺鉴车恫萍篷资其股碉激赁邮淡惜赌吉寿狠定庭警孤浇独策勘蹋肋避尝老弹启宣磷骇垂始酪搭质靶赚寇焚且奏沈皑惺么油靠程江挂墓秉密度谋橡足撑褥毫锑借旁催兵互晶板枢科阅湛昆幂光延阴酗栈励南孔渝螟吐贴莉晾汀叫蔡缆虫诽罕吓禾尤奥玲圃贼遵逮峦厨睁谣玻卯牛试评他住脚妻盅朴颈炔祖瞅亮穷烬一狄勇睫赴疤碘净至糜煽琶濒骡永景事呕纳沙稿痔芬逝陌扛届接侮谬榆昔巷祥锭斡探谨晶费恭峰斋疡炳沛辙恢枝柿腕故狂皮虑夺躯皖陇蔗傍捅牛钎拌纸里下焰僵齐扣酗谍蕴戴袋届郸勇盒便硫昏放奏甜档努俱于涤嗓飞凝龟腰靴吾氟颇弦们负椰骸顺罗
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4、，应当尽量符合书面语的正式性。随着雅思考生的趋于低龄化(2008年多于半数的考生介于19-22岁之间)，很多考生因为学识或者社会阅历等各方面的原因不是很熟悉书面表达的正式风格，这也是造成写作分数偏低的一个主要原因，尤其是造成其它三项高分而写作“偏科”的原因之一。?B,WjA-q5W0j n#B&R&i o+IL K0但这并不意味着写作高分的遥不可及，高分作文是改出来的，所以我们要掌握好从哪几个方面入手把成型于脑中或者已经付诸于纸上的构思改成阅卷人青睐的表达法即可。下面就是具体的几个客观表达的方面：无忧雅思网0boc2V&|f6D无忧雅思网xCV9Ub-z一 避免太多的人化主语f/lS1A.d(
5、rz0无忧雅思网?dsN+H口语中我们很习惯用“某个人做某件事”来构成基本句式，以至于议论文中有的考生依然写的是这样的句子：,8BS#c;r/HJ0无忧雅思网fl G-ca+eu2More and more young students go abroad because they want to get better education and find a better job in the future. I think that they may have problems in study and also in life。3S1y*bNFVcE0无忧雅思网$L$o u|8F&x4c
6、上例中第一句的主句和状语从句中都是以某个人开始的，第二句中主句和宾语从句也是以人做主语。虽然说这两个句子的WPS(每句中的词汇数)都超过10个，应该说不能算是写的特别初级的简单句，如果句法和词汇没有问题还是很有希望达到6分的。但如果全篇都是这样的句式，整个文章就显得幼稚，类似于记叙文写作，绝对突破不了7分。s_ v,otY;F0;m8x Ouxm quf0其实改法很简单：我们只要避免从“某个人”开始句子就可以了，也就是说用比较客观的就事论事的态度。如：避免“学生出国”，只写“出国”；避免“他们想要”，只写“想要”。这样，上面的句子就可以写成：go abroad to get better ed
7、ucation and find a better job in the future,不但很客观，而且把原来的主句和从句两部分精简处理成了一个动词短语。既可以做谓语动词加上原来的一个主语构成句子，也可以用不定式、动名词和分词处理为非谓语动词做主语、宾语或者状语，还可以以从句的形式处理。至于原来第一句中的主语young students可以用介词短语的形式插入不定式或者动名词短语中，而下面的句子里的评价部分的内容提上来做主句的谓语，组成一个新的句式。Po)a.SVnX3o Z0无忧雅思网B T:H3b m:s另外，第二例句中的“have”，一般情况下主语都是某个人，而在写作中多为“there
8、be”句型所代替，更加客观。所以上面的两个例句就可以合并成一句：7c5cX4_aN 4B0?)oC!:ku0There may be problems in study and also in life for young students to go abroadin order to get better education and find a better job in the future。无忧雅思网!j-i*m&|#B3F&sN无忧雅思网nVF s;o%Wg a.t这样合并不但客观而且精炼，每个单位句子所表达的内容自然就扩大，词汇密度也相应地增多，自然容易得高分，如果加上个别单词或
9、短语的替换，就可以达到7分。但切记不可机械照搬范文中的长句，从朗阁的学员反馈情况看判为模板的文章最低分数降至4.5。更进一步说，“have”和“there be”句型都可以简化成更简单的介词“with”结构，如以下所示：zi#W!VB?$wQ0无忧雅思网7!u3i|2D MOn the table is a box. There is a cover beside it。无忧雅思网SQ&e ?;M3|1t+W a?W;A-L.eeF kJo0这两个小句子是小作文的流程图中经常要用到的具体描写事物的句型，凡是描写具有某种属性或者带有某种外部特征都可以用”with”结构表达，所以上述两句可以合并成
10、：On the table is a box with a cover beside it。无忧雅思网#?J!x3y7P.gi w0I:vS Z!L8$JqC0除了一般的“某个人做某件事情”和“have”句型，常见的人化主语的句型还有很受考生偏爱的几个情态动词，如can, may, should等。一般建议前两个改成It is likely /possible to do/ that。后一个改为It is necessary/ imperative/ highly expected/ suggested that sth. be done。的句式，请看下面的例示：We can go anywh
11、ere we like with our bicycle. nTt|O9Ra.B OV-B 0-.PkS#S6DY(Q0It is possible for us to go anywhere we like with our bicycle。S2A!Y(Xx0M4v%+6dxoG_0To curb global warming, our government should promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.To curb global warming, it is imperative that our government
12、 promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees。无忧雅思网 |o9;O,sw& w Q无忧雅思网 ?8I-jhK9#B)j归纳起来说，议论文中我们要积极避免“某个人”做主语，尽量用不定式、动名词或者一个从句做主语，谓语动词用评价性的动词充当，这样就可以由记叙文性质的“过程性句式”顺利转化成更符合议论文文风的客观评价性的句式。G?V ZN0/U8_1F:t?n0二 被动句式的使用)bsg:m8Sz/a06I.Y6Y!Nl0在比较正式的新闻、商务、法律等英语文体中，被动句式因为其更突出客观性的宾语或者事实被广为使用。雅思的图表分析和议论文都是
13、比较正式的文体，所以我们也应该注意多用被动句式。尤其是在以下两个方面：无忧雅思网g8zb8Z(VK无忧雅思网,_1UKy yNh?1。主语不确定无忧雅思网FYbV%L37poW.R8c U Q u2j.a)q0Someone murdered the millionaire last night.The millionaire was murderedlast night。$c uz$;ov1P0无忧雅思网f0c;vanb9Sf2. 主语是泛指很多人或者大部分人_2B-/_iY0无忧雅思网s8 pB tz K:hTo improve the air quality, we should red
14、uce the use of private cars. To improve the air quality, the use of private cars should be reduced。无忧雅思网%m:wgz0wB+ SnfAuL*o kK.w(qH0Most people think that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.It is widely believed that we can get a large share of benefit in the sale campaign。3xc
15、ah0TKY0&A#?6N qn+4Wd,p0被动句的用法不仅体现在主句中，在从句、非谓语动词短语中都有可能用到，如：无忧雅思网.qCV!GL-uMH无忧雅思网h7cZ sZIt is important for nations all over the world to join hands to control the software piracy. It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to have the software piracy controlled。2YV-v Tv&kF tH0o0f:C
16、:75f&vr-nWy!T0I dont expect that she returned. She is not expected to have returned。无忧雅思网M*t(DO;yJsIJ5u;Hj0I am not sure whether the college graduates will find jobs in the financially difficult year. I am not sure whether the college graduates will get employed in the financiallydifficult year。无忧雅思
17、网(txn_*y,Y g:s N8HC2yvdR0但是因为汉语中本来是没有被动句式的，所以受汉化思维的影响很多考生不会想到这一点。这就要求我们对此要引起足够的重视，并且在平时多加练习以培养对其敏感度。无忧雅思网81sfa0WGN%Pp&z6z7br*prs0 三 名词化 无忧雅思网K#h/F2YmE$u7 v L$s?-U-h4d0写作中把原本用动词或者形容词表达的地方换成名词叫做名词化(nominalization)。名词化是为了避免太多动词造成的句法处理上的困难，同时也可以把某些陈述型的句式转化成更客观的评价句，更符合议论文的文体要求。如：Our monitor didnt come to
18、day. He has got a flu。J9U$s B%G?#Yx g q0无忧雅思网1O:Q:|.sC m g(u很明显这两个小句可以用因果关系的信号词连成一句：Because our monitor has a flu, he didnt come today.，但这个because引导的原因状语从句以及其它的状语从句是考生们很常用的复合句，虽然看似比较复杂，其实仍然是某个人做主语。如果非谓语动词掌握得好，可能我们会想到用Having a flu, our monitor didnt come today。如果我们把前后两部分分别用一个概括性的名词来替代，中间加上我们熟悉的表示因果关系
19、的动词，这个句子就非常符合议论文的风格：The flu caused the absence of our monitor today。或者The absence of our monitor is because of his illness。至少我们可以尽量将其中的一个小句变成名词，减少某个人做主语的口语化句式的出现频率。无忧雅思网 _#g MP ni/n4G)TD8pN0虽然这种表达方法更为客观，句式上更加简洁，但是用比较抽象的概括性词汇来写句子对于越来越趋于低龄化的考生来说的确是个挑战。但是有一些单词是我们在写作中几乎必须要用到的，平时要备好以下几个常见的名词化：lack of(if
20、there is no)， ignorance of (dont know )， illiteracy in(cant read/ cant use)， failure (didnt do)等。而且在具体的使用过程中可以结合介词with使用，使得句法更加凝练。此外个别单词也可以利用题目中的动词的名词性后缀如： -tion，-ment, -isation, -ness, -ity等或者变成动名词形式-ing。如：More younger generations celebrate the western festiva lsthe celebration of the western festi
21、vals by more younger generations无忧雅思网-.MJJA无忧雅思网A;Pg G.K06R1F四 个别表达wH c UXF/F_0m/ETp60如more and more/ a lot等口语化的短语尽量避免，可以用increasing(ly)， a large number of/a great deal of./swarms of等代替。此外缩略形式也是正式的写作中要避免的。雅思议论文Brainstorming写作作为一项对大多数中国考生来说较难的科目，它的难度主要体现在以下三个方面：文章结构的合理安排，论证内容有逻辑的扩展，语言多样准确的使用。缺少其中任何一项
22、都有可能使文章得不到高分。很多参加过考试的考生反映在考场上时间相当的紧，就算掌握了大量的高分词汇句型，对结构非常熟悉，还是无用武之地，因为扩展不出素材。无忧雅思网 G GR7e+Y _ypF*O.i:aZ!w7s9q0针对这种现象，我做了一下总结，绝大多数雅思大作文话题都可以通过以下几个方面进行扩展（简称论据扩展十二大法则），现列举如下：经济（economy）、就业（employment）、时间（time）、空间（space）、心理（psychology）、生理（physiology）、环境（environment）、教育（education）、文化（culture）、科技（technolog
23、y）、情感（emotion）和个人权利（human right）。无忧雅思网6uS82um3&FlhRn无忧雅思网 zK-F K;H w%j我将通过列举一些例题来印证这十二大法则的实战性。v&r#vl:XF0$G;gc.pwU4t5w0Some people think tobacco should be made illegal in the same way as other drugs because the products containing it are addictive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this op
24、inion?无忧雅思网vU3!lW无忧雅思网$Yx(tVL*N通过审题，此题问是否同意烟草行业被取缔。同意则要列举烟草的一系列缺点，反之不同意，可列举其优点。我们马上来看看十二大法则，当然不是每一项都应用，但是大多数都可以适用。无忧雅思网qLy+ux/tO rfqv)50Advantages/AhD&kX5W fh0无忧雅思网7de dHq经济：revenue-rising for the country and businessmen concerning this arena,sT/;JcbnX*p0无忧雅思网F;b:R-GB5R%gk就业：offer the opportunities
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26、ages# v9hPG,Q;B;i0无忧雅思网-R_1Mls/e9g&cA3Th经济： money-consuming for smokers无忧雅思网,Lb b&fq9无忧雅思网%jypPp%w(L生理： be addictive to it,3N ,_8r%y0ll4D$OOE0harmful to smokers health, leading to lung cancerc.HcKvT0无忧雅思网S4Qw_X9|G+ V8.k环境： air pollutionMdclbv$gl0Qf;hu*s&x0N#i GHE7y/Y0 potential hazard of fire无忧雅思网-J
27、j0?91 &无忧雅思网;jwp Aa*Pr空间： passive smoking / second-hand smoking无忧雅思网bcU:wm;g$LFO0情感： be overly-dependent on smoking无忧雅思网dE#w U3L.u r9pV0用了上述办法，扩展出来的论据就能更加全面，有条理。下面我再列举一个题目，来做brainstorming。4H8S.x&y+Kp0-|K1qQv s7w0Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make p
28、ositive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism?无忧雅思网9J4eUs*gr;WIyi无忧雅思网1ILB+w qH.e通过审题，此题无非就是我们21世纪是利大于弊还是弊大于利，所以只要列举21世纪发展的优缺点就可以了。我将通过之前介绍的十二大法则来进行素材的扩展。r#I6B9zH*#BA i0无忧雅思网#RO,m3y%_DAdvantages:ar,L*b;jO|C0J7rQOz6tvOR0经济： economy be promoted, efficiency b
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31、ental pollution continuing getting worse无忧雅思网vqAo-CS,DJ2nc9#mo gu0以上两个题目，我都用了十二大原则，可见其具有很强的适用性，能够帮助考生在短时间内扩展话题的素材，且较全面。在长期的使用中，我发现，在这十二大原则中，有些原则基本可以在几个相近话题的题目中运用，因此我们可以给它们起个名字“万能原则”，如经济和就业原则，则可以应用在只要是牵涉到“工业”的话题，如smoking，tourism，mobile phones，computers，writing letters（post office）等等。老师和学生们都可以在平时的使用中做
32、一个总结，使十二大法则能信手拈来。所以仅仅记住这些原则是没用的，考生在考前一定要进行大量的练习，而老师也要在课堂上选取典型的例题进行讲解，这样对考生加快Brainstorming的速度和提高Brainstorming的能力才有帮助。5.16,5-7月大作文具体题目预测：%tjoq0无忧雅思网z:#|x) S0F e:H7G8BuYw01.The gap of living in cities and the countryside is larger and larger. What are the reasons in your country and how to reduce the d
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