1、新东方 大学英语六级考试短文写作写作常见错误分析一、语法错误（一）句子结构错误1 主从句叠置1) There are more and more students like to use the computer.2) There are still many problems should be noted and resolved.2 简单句叠置I like chatting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend.3 从句叠置As is known to all that computers play an
2、important role in many fields of our life.4 句子成分缺失If work hard, we will surely be successful.5 语序错误1) Why college students spend more and more time on the computer?2) I often wonder where have they got their money.（二）动词错误1时态错误Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future. 2
3、语态错误1) I have excited several days at the news that you will come here.2) Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall.3单复数错误1) Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.2) Someone are afraid that computer may control men in the future. 4非谓语动词错误1) Let me to represent
4、everyone to say “hello” to you.2) Do exercise in the morning is good for ones health.3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.（三）代词错误1) We can use computers in doing everything you like.2) A college student should be able to do their washing on their own.（四）
5、冠词错误1) Horse is an useful animal.2) The exam will be held in the December, 2004. （五）词性错误1) I wish you can consider my suggests.2) If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.二、用词错误1) Students must know how to apply a computer. 2) People can touch many new things on
6、the Internet. 3) The purpose of this letter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall.三、表达习惯错误1) Why generated so large a change? 2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer. 3) A room often lives 6-8 students. 4) I think this great change has three reasons.5) The prices of the food are
7、 too expensive.6) The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.四、标点符号及大小写错误1) However, every coin has two sides, I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.2) The man was racing down the street. Because he was late for
8、the class.3) At last I want to let you know, I love our university very much.4) My favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis.5) The best English film in my eyes isForrest Gump.三、六级写作题型分类（一）对立观点型2000年6月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
9、 composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The First sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是.2. 也有人持不同意见，.3. 我的看法和打算1999年6月Directions: Fo
10、r this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人认为读书要有选择2. 有些人认为应当博览群书3. 我的看法1998年6月Directions: For this part, you ar
11、e allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人认为某些数字会带来好运2. 我认为数字和运气无关.1997年6月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 min
12、utes to write a composition on the topic My View on Job-Hopping. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为.2. 有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为.3. 我的看法1996年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a compo
13、sition based on the title: Why I Take College English Test Band 6. You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).1. 有些人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试2. 我参加CET-6考试的理由1995年6月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Firecrackers B
14、e Banned? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有人认为放鞭炮是好事，为什么?2. 有人认为放鞭炮是坏事，为什么?3. 我的看法1993年6月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Opportunity. You must
15、base your composition on the following instructions (given in Chinese):有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。你的看法如何？写出你的理由并且适当举例。在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论。Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember to write it neatly.（二） 解决问题型2003年12月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to writ
16、e a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:1 有些大学校园浪费的现象日益严重2 浪费的危害3 杜绝浪费，从我做起2000年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You shoul
17、d write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多种途径解决。2. 哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。1998年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should write at l
18、east 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 假冒伪劣商品的危害2. 怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品1995年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: My View on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements. You should base your composition
19、on the following outline (given in Chinese).1. 现在有些不良的商业广告2. 这些广告的副作用和危害性3. 我对这些广告的态度You must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the Composition Sheet and remember to write in readable handwriting.1990年6月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on
20、 the topic How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities. Four suggested solutions to this problem are listed below. You are supposed to write in favor of one suggestion (ONE only) and against another (ONE only). You should give your reasons in both cases. You should write no less than 120 words. R
21、emember to give a short introduction and a brief conclusion. Write your composition clearly.四种可能解决住房问题的方案：1. 多造高层建筑2. 向地下发展3. 建造卫星城市4. 疏散城市人口1990年1月Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic according to the foll
22、owing OUTLINE. Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember that the contents of the OUTLINE should ALL be included in your composition. But you are not supposed to translate the OUTLINE word for word.OUTLINE问题：城市交通拥挤解决方案（solution）1.建造(lay down)更多道路优点：(1) 降低街道拥挤程度(2) 加速车流（flow of traf
23、fic）缺点：占地过多2. 开辟（open up）更多公共汽车线路优点：减少自行车与小汽车缺点：对部分人可能造成不方便结论：两者结合（三）谚语警句型1997年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)
24、 below.1. 为什么“欲速则不达”？2. 举例说明。（四）图表图画型2003年9月2003年6月2002年6月1996年6月1992年1月1991年6月（详见“九、历年写作真题”部分）（五）应用写作型2004年6月2002年1月2001年6月（详见“九、历年写作真题”部分）四、六级写作分类范文（一）对立观点型1. Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of College English Test (CET). Som
25、e people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker. A test of spoken English will bring the college stu
26、dents an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact th
27、at students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden.In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a m
28、ust for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.2. Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?There are people who believe that some numbers bring g
29、ood luck, while others bring bad luck. For instance, in China the number eight is thought to be lucky. Turning our attention to the West, we find that the number seven is considered lucky, but the number 13 is avoided like the plague.In spite of all these claims, most people would agree that there i
30、s little evidence that numbers have any influence on our lives. In fact, they say, the reverse seems to be the case. For one thing, we might expect calculators to break down every time they note the number 13, and for another, although every week has seven days we know that not every week is lucky f
31、or us.Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. It is obvious that there is no scientific basis for the belief that there is a connection between luck and numbers. All in all, it seems to me to be superstition.3. My View on Job-HoppingJob-ho
32、pping, or frequent change of jobs, is becoming increasingly common in China today. As the economy grows, more opportunities for employment are appearing than before. The result is that people, especially young people, are tempted to change jobs frequently, seeking higher salaries or more interesting
33、 positions.Nevertheless, many people prefer to stay in their old jobs. This is partly because they feel loyal to their work units, and partly because they dislike the idea of having to spend much time training for a new job. In addition, although a new job may offer higher pay or more opportunities
34、for promotion, it may be located far from home and be inconvenient to reach.I think it is a good thing for the workforce to be flexible, so that new demands for personnel can be satisfied quickly. However, if a person changes jobs too often, he or she will cause losses to the employing units. Moreov
35、er, frequent job-hopping prevents a person from gaining valuable job experience and developing good work habits.4 Why I Take College English Test Band 6(a)Some people consider that it is unnecessary to take College English Test Band 6 (CET-6). One reason they cite is that most schools set CET-4 as t
36、he main requirement. Another reason is that they think that CET-6 is simply too difficult for them.I, however, have decided to accept the challenge of CET-6. The preparation for this test will force me to raise the level of my English ability. Besides, I regard CET-6 as a stepping-stone to further q
37、ualifications in English which will help me in my future career.All in all, taking CET-6 is advantageous for both a students studies and his personal development. The first advantage is that he will improve his English skills in an all-round way. The second is that he will strengthen his character b
38、y continuing his English studies when other people have been lazy and stopped.(b)When it comes to College English Test Band 6 (CET-6), opinions differ from person to person. Some hold the positive view. They believe that taking CET-6 is advantageous for both a students studies and his personal devel
39、opment. The first advantage is that he will improve his English skills in an all-round way. The second is that he will strengthen his character by continuing his English studies when other people have been lazy and stopped.Others, however, hold the opposite view. They maintain that it is unnecessary
40、 to take College English Test Band 6 (CET-6). One reason they cite is that most schools set CET-4 as the main requirement. Another reason is that they think that CET-6 is simply too difficult for them.Personally, I have decided to accept the challenge of CET-6. The preparation for this test will for
41、ce me to raise the level of my English ability. Besides, I regard CET-6 as a stepping-stone to further qualifications in English which will help me in my future career.5. Should Firecrackers Be Banned? (a)Some people think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing. They say that it is an ancient
42、 Chinese custom which should be preserved. They also claim that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.On the other hand, there are many people who say that firecrackers should be banned. They point out that firecrackers are resp
43、onsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders. They also say that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.My own point of view is that we should preserve the old custom of letting off firecrackers, while at
44、the same time making them harmless. We can do this by banning firecrackers from public places. In addition, we should restrict the setting off of firecrackers to festival days.(b)There is no denying the fact that setting off firecrackers has been a hotly debated topic in China. Peoples opinions diff
45、er sharply on this issue. Some hold the positive view. They say that it is an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved. They also claim that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children. Without firecrackers, festivals would be
46、come dull and cheerless.Others, however, hold the opposite view. They maintain that firecrackers should be banned. They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires, which destroy, property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders. They also
47、argue that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.Personally, I believe that we should not go to extremes. On the one hand, we should preserve the old custom of letting off firecrackers; on the other hand, we should make it harmless. This can be done by banning firecrackers from public plac
48、es. In addition, the setting off of firecrackers should be restricted to festival days.(c)There has been much controversy over setting off firecrackers in the past years, with each party owning convincing evidences. Those who are in favor of setting firecrackers claim that it is an ancient Chinese custom that should be preserved. They a
