题目:On Excessive Packaging提纲:1. 目前很多商品存在过度包装现象2. 出现这一现象的原因3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议Model 1On Excessive PackagingNowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing普遍的,流行的 in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.(第一段用模版句型 the phenomena of .are .导出,后面用几个精彩的排比句说明)There are several causes