高分作文的条件1:四级120-150字;六级150180字;2、是否长短句交叉;3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。如ho