精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评My friend and I I have a good friend. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. Im 11. Hes older than me. Hes 150 cm tall. Im 148 cm. Hes taller and stronger. Hes 43 kg and Im 41 kg. Hes heavier. We like summer best. We like sports, too. On Saturday, we play ping-pong. On Sunday, we play computer games. How happy we are!【要领点评】写法:这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。不能只描写朋友,也不能只叙述我。解决这个难点的关键是:找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况,再进行比较,通过比较突出