精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上l 批改By Will本次批改严格按照ILETS小作文评分标准进行。ILETS小作文评分项：TA (内容的完整性), CC (连贯性及一致性), GRA (语法范围及精准度), LR (词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。l 文中标识：用词不当 逻辑错误 语法错误 修改添加 Test 1 There are two images about agriculture. The pie chart describes why agricultural land becomes (时态，改为became) less productive. The table illustrates how to affect (语法问题，时态与语义不完整，改为it affected) three regions of the world during 1990s. The first image shows some causes of worldwide of land degradation. It was divided into
