1、The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything but could make decisions by myself. Besides, my parents didnt seem to think so. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one ti
2、me, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on their own, but I still want to have my parents to turn whenever I need help.I was reading an arti
3、cle in a book while I came across a word I didnt know. “Dad, what is the meaning of the word?”My dad, as he usual did after work, was watching his most favorite show. “You have the dictionary, dont you?” he shot back. He didnt even look up my face. I went back my room, and there on my study table is
4、 that dictionary. I looked it up and found its exact meaning. Ten year have passed and I still use that dictionary, along with the lesson I received earlier in life from my old man: to be independent.Dear Sir,Ive learned a teaching assistant for foreign teachers is wanted in your school. Im writing
5、to apply to the position.First of all, I had graduated from Anhui University one month ago. Having exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate with others in fluently English, Whats more, years of experiences of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, who will help a lot t
6、o keep the class in order. The most important factor is that I love kids, and Im confident of my patience and care will undoubtedly, win his trust.All in all, I think my enthusiasm and full sense of responsibility will make me a qualifying teaching assistant. Id appreciate you if you could take my a
7、pplication into consideration.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hun【解析】1.句意为我想要应聘这个职位。apply for 为固定搭配，表示申请。故将 to 改为for。2.句意为我一个月前从大学毕业。这里考查的是时态问题。从 a month ago 可知，毕业应该是过去时，应该用一般过去时。故将 had 去掉。3.句意为从小的时候开始我就接触了外国老师。考察 explose 用法，暴露与作者之间应该是被动语态。故在 having 后面添加 been。4.句意为我能和他人用流利的英语交流。fluently 为副词，不能修饰名词。故将
8、 fluently 改为 fluent。5.句意为当班长的多年经历让我成为一个很好的组织者。experience 没有复数形式。故将experiences 改为 experience。6.句意为这会对保持班级秩序有很大帮助。该句为非限制性定语从句，而且此处的关系代词应该是指的是作者是一个很好的组织者，为一件事，不能用 who。故将 who 改为which。7.句意为我的耐心和关怀会毫无疑问的赢得他们的信任，对此我很有信心。be confident of 后面加名词。be confident that 引导从句。故将 of 改为 that。8.由文意可知，作者是想当助教。因此赢得的信任应该是一群
9、学生，而不是一个人。故将his 改为 their。9.句意为我认为我的热情和责任感，会让我成为一名合格的助教。考查形容词。qualified为符合资格的。故将 qualifying 改为 qualified。10.句意为如果你将我的申请列入考虑范围内的话，我将非常感谢。考察 appreciate 用法。would appreciate it .为固定搭配表示感谢。故将 you 改为 it。One night I was going to work on my usually bus route. Upon our arrive at the terminal, I noticed that I
10、 was the only passenger left on the bus. I looked around and saw a mobile phone in a chair that must have been left behind by the passenger. I give it to the conductor.Two day later, the conductor told me that the passenger was very much happy that I returned the mobile phone. The passenger was tryi
11、ng to get her name, so she wanted to post on Facebook about what had happened as a sort of appreciation. I thought it was unnecessary. What was important was when I saw the smile on her face, I was happy.46.第 1 处【答案】usually 改为 usual【解析】用形容词修饰名词。第 2 处【答案】arrive 改为 arrival【解析】Upon ones arrival 是固定用法，意
12、思是某人到来时。第 3 处【答案】on 改为 in【解析】句意：我发现我是汽车里唯一剩下的乘客，on 改为 in。第 4 处【答案】the 改为 a【解析】泛指“一位乘客” ，所以用不定冠词。第 5 处【答案】give 改为 gave【解析】发生在过去的事情，所以用一般过去式。第 6 处【答案】day 改为 days【解析】Day 是可数名词，且被“two” 修饰，所以用名词复数。第 7 处【答案】去掉 much【解析】 “非常高兴” ，直接说 very happy，所以去掉 much。第 8 处【答案】her 改为 my【解析】句意：这名乘客想要知道我的名字，所以 her 改为 my。第 9
13、 处【答案】so 改为 because【解析】句意：因为她想要张贴在脸书上。表示原因，所以 so 改为 because。第 10 处 【答案】when 前加 thatThe blue whale is certainly the largest animals on the planet today. Just the heart of a blue whale can weight as many as a family car. You might think that such a big animal would need to eat another big animals to s
14、urviving. Surprising, the blue whale feeds on some of the smaller ocean animals.A blue whale can live between 80 and 90 years. Unfortunately, it is believe that there were only 10,000 to 25,000 alive. They were hunted for in the 1900s but hundreds of thousands of them were killed. Lets hope number o
15、f whales on the planet starts to increase in the coming years.The blue whale is certainly the largest animals on the planet today. Just the heart of a blue animalwhale can weight as many as a family car. You might think that such a big animal would need to much eat another big animals to surviving.
16、Surprising, the blue whale feeds on some of the smaller other survive Surprisingly ocean animals.A blue whale can live between 80 and 90 years. Unfortunately, it is believe that there were believed areonly 10,000 to 25,000 alive. They were hunted for in the 1900s but hundreds of thousands of them 去掉
17、 for andwere killed. Lets hope number of whales on the planet starts to increase in the coming years.aWhen my twentieth birthdays came, I was not at home. In order to celebrate such important day with my parents, I wrote him a letter, in which I thanked them for having raised me for twenty years, an
18、d expressed my love for them. Later my mother tell me when they read the letter, tears were filled her eyes. And my father appeared very cool. Before that, he read it alone careful, and then he put it away into a desk drawer. I can imagine the scene clearly because I know father. Being a man with li
19、ttle words, he prefers show his love for me in a silent way.61. birthdays 改为 birthday 62. such 后加 an 63.him 改为 them 64. tell 改为 told 65. 去掉 were 66. And 改为 But 67. Before 改为 After 68. careful 改为 carefully 69. little 改为 few 70. prefers 后加 toMy parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah F
20、u. One day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister and Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu follows her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediately. When my parents
21、 heard of Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying his little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.1. calling 改为 called2. parent 改为 parents3. they 后加 were4. the 改为 a5. follows 改为 followed6. while 改
22、为 when7. to 改为 into8. 去掉 heard 后面的 of9. his 改为 my10. warm 改为 warmlyLast summer, to my delight, I got a chance to go to the United Kingdom. I was eager to see how England was like. Although my parents objected to my decision at first, but finally they were persuaded. It was the first time that I have
23、 travelled abroad alone. Felt excited, I boarded the plane. Suddenly, however, I found my luggages gone and felt helplessly. It was on that moment that the airhostess came to my assistance. After helping me find it back, she suggested that I attached a label to my suitcase on my next journey. I was
24、thankfully to the kind lady for his help! What unforgettable trip!Last summer, to my delight, I got a chance to go to the United Kingdom. I was eager to see England was like. Although my parents objected to my decision at first, but finally they were howwhatpersuaded. It was the first time that I tr
25、avelled abroad alone. excited, I boarded the havehad FeltFeelingplane. Suddenly, however, I found my gone and felt helplessly. It was that moment luggagesluggage onatthat the airhostess came to my assistance. After helping me find it back, she suggested that I a label to my suitcase on my next journ
26、ey. I was to the kind lady for attachedattach thankfullythankful hisherhelp! What unforgettable trip! anNowadays, as the development of high technology, smart phone is very popular to high school student. Smart phone once is forbidden. But now it has become a very common tool for students. A lot of
27、students keep his eyes on smart phones all the time. Teachers are annoying about this situation, so they feel most students ignore them when they are giving lessons. Some teachers think it is time to let the students hand to hand in their smart phones.I dont think it is good idea. Even for the teach
28、ers, they used their phones so much, let alone the students. The teachers should improve their teaching methods to catch the students interest.Nowadays, the development of high technology, smart phone is very popular aswithhigh school students. Smart phone once forbidden. But now it has become a ver
29、y towith/among iswascommon for students. A lot of students keep eyes on smart phones all the time. toolstool histheirTeachers are about this situation, they feel that most students ignore them annoyingannoyed sobecause/aswhen they are giving lessons. Some teachers think it is time to let the student
30、s to hand in their smart phones.I dont think it is good idea. Even for the teachers, they their phones so much, let a usedusealone the students. The teachers should improve their teaching methods to catch the students interest.Dear Sir,Im Xiaoli, a student of Senior 3. I am writing to ask yourself f
31、or some advice. Since I entered Senior 3, my parents and teachers have kept asking me to board（寄宿）in the school. They say it will be very much convenient for me to ask question whenever and wherever. However, they think boarding will make this possible to make full use my night time, and that I can
32、also develop the ability to look after myself.However, in my opinion, stay at home in the evening allow me more time to work at my lessons. At a same time, I can learn which I think Im not good at. I really dont know how to deal with the disagreement. Can you help me out?Yours,Xiaoli71. yourself 改为
33、you 72. 去掉 much 73. question 改为 questions 74. However 改为 Besides 75. this 改为 it 76. use 后面加 of77. stay 改为 staying 78. allow 改为 allows 79. a 改为 the 80. which 改为 what As a Senior Two student, my favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practice for three times a week
34、and often watch football match on TV or on the Internet together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in minds that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, sports teach us the important of obeying the rules in
35、 a match. Each player must listen to the captain, which is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.As a Senior Two student, my favorite sport is football. I a member of our school football wasamteam. We practice for three times a week and often
36、watch football on TV or on the matchmatchesInternet together. football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also us a PlayPlaying givegivessense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in that we play for the team instead mindsmind ofourselves. Also, sports teach us the of obeying the rules
37、 in a match. Each player must importantimportancelisten to the captain, is the leader of the team. And must not break the rules too often whichwho theyweif we want to win the game.The winter holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between s
38、taying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges that we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to p
39、laces of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.71.【 答案】第 1 处 how 改为 what 第 2 处 chose 改为 choose第 3 处 take 改为 taking第 4 处 but 改为 and;第 5 处 about 后加 the第 6 处 your 改为 our第 7 处 knowledges 改为 knowledge第 8 处删除 can 或 can 改为 should第 9 处 thought
40、 改为 think第 10 处 many 改为 muchAs the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that
41、it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.From this, I am firmly convincin
42、g that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared.As the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my favor experience. experiences I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, Ia de
43、cided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was playing and my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball thaton every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was
