1、浙江高考写作“读后续写”点津与练习一、“读后续写”样题呈现1. 样题呈现阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进 行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walkedalong Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start acar. He tried again and again but couldnt get the car
2、 moving. Arthur turned and looked inside atthe face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like youve gota problem,” Arthur said.“Im afraid so. Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the
3、twosuitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. Id be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it onthe ground, he turn
4、ed to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and startedwalking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of thealarm and the shouts of people
5、 running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joinedthe crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had adifferent answer.Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into theyoung woman in front of him.She lo
6、oked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking atme like that?” he thought. “The suitcase! She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without anotherthought, he started to run.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 应使用 5
7、个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；13. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开 头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关 键词语。Paragraph 1:As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”_Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur._2. 参考答案Keys (possible answers)【Possible version 1】As he was running,
8、Arthur heard the young man behind him shouting, “Stop, stop!” And atthat same moment, Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber. So,Arthur didnt stop but continued to run until he saw a taxi. He stopped it, jumped in with one ofthe suitcases, and said to the driver, “Go to
9、 the police station, please. The man shouting behind meis the bank thief! The taxi raced away as fast as the wind.The taxi stopped in front of the police station, and Arthur told the police what had happened.Obviously, the police already knew about the robbery. They opened the suitcase and there was
10、 alarge sum of money inside, as Arthur had expected. Then the police asked Arthur to describe theyoung man and the other suitcase. Later, with this information, the police caught the robber. Thepolice and the bank both thanked Arthur. People were happy that the robber was caught.【Possible version 2】
11、As he was running, Arthur heard the young man behind him shouting, “Stop, stop!” Thinkingabout the way the young man had behaved, he realized the young man might be the bank robber.So, Arthur ran fast and stopped a taxi. The moment he got into the taxi, he told the driver the manshouting behind him
12、was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the nearest police station. Thedriver did as Arthur asked and drove away.The taxi stopped in front of the police station, and Arthur thanked the driver and went inside.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened on Park Avenue and reporting the young
13、man tothe police, he heard a voice outside: “Help! Help!” To Arthurs surprise, it was the young man. Hehad followed Arthur in another taxi. It turned out that the young man was innocent, and inside thesuitcases was just some clothing. Arthur felt embarrassed, but the policemen thanked him anyway.3.
14、答案点拨原文所给关键词分类为：地点：Park Avenue，the bank2人物：The young man，people，the bank thief事件：suitcases，in the back seat，loud noise of an alarm，robbery ，the shouts在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关 键词， 还需要注意以下线索：1. Why did the young man look worried?2. What happened? But everyone had a different answer.3. Arthur became frightened a
15、nd without another thought, he started to run.二、“读后续写”样题解读1. 题型介绍选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在 350 以内；（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情 节 有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。评分参考阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右（词数少于 130 的，从总分中减去 2 分）；（2）应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下
16、划线的关键词语；（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开 头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关 键词语。2. 能力考查“读后续写”是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考 查 学生的综合语言运用能力。与应用文不同，故事续写除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。主要聚焦在以下四个方面：（1）把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通 过续写短文表现出来。（2）注意语言运用的准确性和丰富性。期望学生在词汇和语言结 构的使用方面准确、恰当，3能够根据内容需要使用较为高级的词汇和语言结
17、构，阅卷老师会感 觉到这个学生的英语水平非常高。（3）注意对语篇结构的把控能力。考 查学生对上下文逻辑关系的掌握情况，希望学生续写的短文语句连贯、有序。（4）发挥创造性思维能力。这是对 学生续写短文内容的要求，期望学生续写的短文具有较丰富的内容。该试题具有一定的开放性，要求学生详细和生动地描述情景、态度和感情，符合课程标准的要求和学生的能力水平。3续写特点“读后续写”就是要求学生阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把 这篇文章未写完部分补充完整，使之浑然一体。它一方面很好地考查考生 对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，而另一方面，它也培养学生的发散思维能力。根据考试说明该部分的规定，考生在续
18、写文章时，要注意续写部分 “与所给短文及段落开头语的衔 接程度”“内容的丰富性和，对所标出关键词语的应用情况”“应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性”以及“上下文的，连贯性”。根据这些规定，我们会发现“读后续写”有如下特点：（1）“读后续写”并不说明考生可以随心所欲地写，而是要在引导语 （开头语）和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分。如考试说 明样题中规定“应使用 5 个以上短文中 标有下划线的关键词语（10 处）。这些关键词语类 似于传统写作中的要点提示，如人物、地点、事件，但”是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用。 这样考生可根据自己的理解有很大的自主 权。另外，所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头语
19、，即：不能另起炉灶。 这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引 导你的思路向哪方面发展。（2）续写短文多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强 。这样考生能够根据提示词语，顺着原来文章的思路续写文章，并适当发散。（3）“读后续写”要求读写并重。与 阅读理解题一样， “读后续写”同 样需要对本篇文章精确理解，这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主 题， 就这方面而言有点 类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断，如“What would happen next?”。（4）所给文章的未完部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的，考生可以根据自己对文章的理
20、解，从而对文章的结尾有不同的 诠释。如 考试说明中“读后续写 ”的样题的结尾，考生可以理解为这个年轻人是银行抢劫者，而 Arthur 因此成为一个大英雄；考生也可以理解为这个年轻人不是一个银行抢劫者，结果产生了误会。三、“读后续写”解题指导1. 注意步骤（1）精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，如是以时间为线 索还是以空间为线索等，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜（结尾）。”（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文 续写的具体要求，4如字数限制、使用几处下划线关 键词语、 续写段落的首句提示，这样考生做到“心中有数”。
21、（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，同时结合文章中有下划线词语的提示，确定续写段落的内容。（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中有下划线的关键词拟写草稿。 拟写时，注意句子 结构的多样 性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文 连贯。（5）标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时 ，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。2备考建议面对“读后续写”这一新写作题型，
22、在了解了其特点和写作技巧之后，考生只要加以适度练习，对此新题型可以做到得心 应手。（1）充分利用记叙文故事类的阅读理解或者完形填空。考生在做此 类文章的试题时， 读到适当的位置，可以短暂停止，根据已读部分文章的脉络，对文章进行发散思维，设想可能的几种结尾，最后对照原文的结尾，看自己的设想是否与原文一致。（2）经常实施微型化训练，也就是 对所读文章的某一段落进行设 想。根据某一段落的首句提示，结合文章的上文对该段进 行合理设想，具体推断 该段可能要 讲述的内容。（3）与传统写作类似，续写文章更加要注意句与句之 间的连接词 ，甚至是冠 词的暗示作用。如考试说明的样题中续写部分的第二段“the Police Station”中的“the”表明在上一段中已经提到，同时后面的 and 表明前后之间是并列关系。（4）进行适度专题化练习。俗话说 ，熟能生巧。 对于“读后续写”这一新题型也是如此。通过适度地练习，可以进一步熟知 该种题型的特色，更好地掌握该种题型的写作技巧，更有效地调动传统写作的基础知识，从而写出一篇 优美的续写短文。需要注意的是，后续写补全的是语篇，而非单词或短语。（5）在平时的教学中，老师要帮助学生 释放创造力和想象力，激 发 表达动机。5
