1、1高一英语短文改错系列（二）原创精华版(有答案解析）第一篇Dear Lily,Im very happily to get your letter. I receive it after school today, and now let me to tell you something about my hobbies.I like swimming ,and I swim every day in summer . You know summer in England is real hot. I like reading ,too. I read different kind of bo
2、oks . I read two and three books a week. I also like playing for my dog，Mickey. He is big and needs a lot of exercise . So at weekends we often go for long walk around the lake near my house.Well ,these are our hobbies. Im looking foward to hear from you soon.Yours ,Mary 第二篇Dear Mom,Today I will int
3、roduce Sunshine Town for you. It is a new town in Beijng. It takes only 40 minutes to go there from the center of Beijng by the subway. There is little air pollution there than in other areas of Beijng. There is some shopping malls in Sunshine Town. You can find kinds of souvenir there. If you want
4、eat Chinese food, you can go to Star Shopping Mall, but there are some western restaurants,too. If you like Beijing Opera, you can go to the local theater. What do you like Sunshine Town, Mom? I hoped you and Dad will come for a visit some day and enjoy your stay there.Best wishes!Yours, Tom 第三篇Mrs
5、Peter has two children -Sammy and Annie. Sammy loves his sister very too much and he is usually kind to her, but sometimes something happy may happen.2One Saturday morning, Sammy and Annie are playing in the garden. Their mother was cooking. Suddenly Annie began to cry but ran into the kitchen with
6、a broken toy horse. Mrs Peter asked,”Why are you crying,Annie?”“Sammy did it,” Annie answered, crying sad.“How did he break them?”her mother asked. Annie stopped cry, but did not answer for a few second . Then she said ,”I beat him on head with it.” Hear this ,Mrs Peter understood the whole thing.第四
7、篇The parents have two boys. One day the parents took for a trip for the weekend with friends. They left earlier on Friday morning, and left the boys at home. That evening the boys drove their father car to see movie. They had a good time. After see the movie, they got back to the car. They saw the b
8、ig hole at the back of the car. They were terrified and asked someone fix the car.Their parents come back on Sunday , but the boys didnt tell them about the hole so they were too terrified . The father went out in his car. When he came back,he was surpring and said to the family, “Someone drove into
9、 the back of their car on Thursday and now it is fixed well!”第五篇Once upon a time, where there was a little boy naming Sima Guaang. One day, he played with some boys near a big tank in front of the house. One of the boy wanted to hide himself in a tank. He thought somebody could find him if he hid in
10、 it. And he didnt know the tank was full of water. When he climbed to the top, he fell into the bank. The other boys rtan to help at once. But Sima Guang didnt . He stood there,thinking hardly. Then he had a good idea. Quickly ,he picked up a big stone and break the tank. In this way, Sima Guang sav
11、ed the boy. How a clever boy!第六篇Last Sunday I went to a animal hospital to help the doctors there. I arrived at the hospital early in the morning, And there were already much work to do:giving the pets food and water,and even giving them kisses on the heads.At first , they looked at me with frightin
12、g eyes. A doctor say to them,”Dont worry,and everything will be OK.” . I washed a dogs hurt leg. I worked careful t make sure I didnt hurt him. I wished he could know we were just trying help him. It was a long day and the work made me tired,and I was very happy. I knew I loved animal. And the anima
13、ls knew I loved him . They enjoyed about my care with love!第七篇Do you know Mo Yan, that is a great writer from China? He is the 59-year-old man. He is either short nor tall. His really name is Guan Moye, and Mo Yan is his pen name. It mean “No speaking”. He was born in Gaomi, Shangdong in February 17
14、,1955. Now he lives in Beijing. He joined in the PLA in 1976. He began writing stories when he was 26 years old. He can write stories very well. And he can use his left hand write. He has many work 3and theyre very famous. He win the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2012. We Chinese are all proud of him
15、.第八篇Tom liked fish too much. One day he brought a fish to home and then went out. When his wife saw the fish, she said to himself , “I can ask my friends have lunch, and we can eat the fish.” When Tom come home in the evening, the fish wasnt there. His wife said, “Oh, your cat ate it.” But she gave
16、Tom some breads for his supper.Tom was very angrily. So he went to a shop with his wife. He weighed the cat in a shop with his wife and said , “My fish weigh one kilo. This cat weighs one kilo , too. My fish is here, you see, then where is my cat?”第九篇Let me tell you something about my little dog Sno
17、opy . Snoopy was an American dog. He is very unfriendly. He never barks at strangers.Its great fun play with him. I often teach him to play games. Now he can play many kind of games. If I say “go to sleep”, he goes to his bed and lies down. If I say “play the basketball”,he goes to catch a ball and
18、put it into a basket. If Isay “please dance with us”, he dances the music. “Can he sing a song?” one of my friends ask me. Of course he can. But he does not sing in English and Chinese . So when he sings, everybody can understand him. 第十篇Every school has their own rules. In some schools in Asia, stu
19、dents cant smoke or talk aloud. In some schools in America ,each child must look for their books well. They should cover the books . But one rule is very popularly around the world: Students have to wear uniforms on weekday. Howerer ,many students dont like to wear the school uniforms so they think
20、the uniforms are most ugly clothes in the world. The schools dont let their students to wear their own clothes at school. Some students drew beautiful pictures or their favorite stars on their uniforms,because they dont want to wear the same clothes. How do you think of it? Do you like your school u
21、niform? 短文改错答案：第一篇 1 第一句：happily 改为 happy. be 动词后用形容词作表语。2 第二句：receive 改为 received. 由时间状语 after school today 可知，receive 表示的动作发生在 过去，故用一般过去时。3 第二句：去掉 to. let 为使役动词，后跟不带 to 的不定式作宾语补足语，let sb. do sth.”让某人做某事” 。 4 第四句：real 改为really.修饰形容词 hot 用副词。 5 第六句：kind 改为 kinds.此处 kind 是可数名词，前有 different 修饰，用复数。6 第
22、七句：and 改为 or. “two or three+可数名词复数 ”是固定用法，意为“两三.” ；此处表示“我一周读两三本书” 。 7 第八句：for 改为 with. play with. “与.玩耍 ”，是固定用法。8 第十句：long 前加a。go for a walk 散步，是固定短语。 9 第十句：our 改为 my. 由上句可知此处表示“我”的爱好，故用my.410 第十二句：hear 改为 hearing. Look forward to doing sth.“盼望做某事”是固定用法。第二篇1 第一句：for 改为 to. Introduce.to sb.”为某人介绍.” 是
23、固定用法。 2 第三句：去掉第二个 the.by 后接表示交通工具的名词，不用 the. 3 第四句：little 改为 less. 由后面的 than 可知用比较级。4 第五句：is 改为 are. 本句 there be 句型， be 动词的形式应与其后的主语 some shopping malls 一致，故用 are. 5 第六句：souvenir 改为 souvenirs. 可数名词 souvenir 前有 kinds of 修饰，用复数。 6 第七句：want 后加 to. want to do sth.“想要做某事”是固定用法。7 第七句：but 改为 and. 逗号后的句子进一步
24、讲述 Star Shopping Mall 的情况，故用连词 and. 8 第九句：What 改为 How. How do you like.?”你认为.怎么样？”是固定句式。9 第十句：hoped 改为 hope. 此处应与全文时态一致，用一般现在时。 10 第十句：real 改为 really. 修饰动词 enjoy 用副词。 第三篇1 第二句：去掉 too. very much “非常” ，是固定短语， too 多余。 2 第二句：happy 改为 unhappp. 由 but可知，此处表示“但有时候会发生不开心的事” ，故用 happy. 3 第三句：are 改为 were. 由时间状
25、语 on Saturday morning 可知，用过去进行时，故用 were. 4 第五句：but 改为 and,began to cry 与 ran into the kitchen 是两个相继发生的动作，故用 and. 5 第七句： sad 改为 sadly. 此处表示“伤心地哭” ，修饰动词crying 用副词。6 第八句：them 改为 it. 此处指代上文提到的 toy horse,用 it. 7 第九句：cry 改为 crying. stop doing sth.“停止做某事” 是固定用法。 8 第九句： second 改为 seconds. 可数名词 second 前有 a f
26、ew修饰 ，用复数。 9 第十句： head 前加 the. 表示“打人的身体某部位”时，表示身体部位的名词前要加the. 10 第十一句：Hear 改为 Hearing. Mrs Peter 与 hear 是主动关系，故用现在分词。第四篇1 第二句：去掉第一个 for, take a trip “去旅行”是固定短语，for 多余。 2 第三句：earlier 改为 early.此处没有比较意义，只表示“早早出发”故用原级。 3 第四句：father 改为 fathers,此处表示“他们父亲的车” ，故用名词所有格形式。4 第六句： see 改为 seeing,此处 afer 是介词，后跟动名
27、词形式。 5 第七句：第一个the 改为 a ,泛指“一个大洞” ，用不定冠词 a. 6 第八句：fix 前加 to. ask sb. to do sth,”要求某人做某事”是固定用法。7 第九句：come 改为 came,讲述过去发生的事情时，用一般过去时。 8 第九句：so 改为because,”他们很害怕”是“没有告诉父母”的原因，故用 because 引导从句。 9 第十一句：surpring 改为surprised.主语是人，表示人感到惊奇的，用 surprised,surprising 意为“令人惊奇的” 。 10 第十一句：their改为 my. 这句话是父亲说的，所以应是有人撞
28、了 “我的”车尾部，故用 my. 第五篇1 第一句：去掉 where. 本句是一个 there be 句型，where 多余。 2 第一句：naming 改为 named. a little boy 与 name 是被动关系，故用过去分词。 3 第三句： boy 改为 boys. one of 后跟可数名词复数。4 第三句：a 改为 the,特指前面提到的 tank,用 the. 5 第四句： somebody 改为 nobody.有下文可知，此处表示5“没有人能找到他” ，故用 nobody. 6 第五句： And 改为 But. 此处表示“但是他不知道缸里面盛满了水”前后句是转折关系，故用
29、 but. 7 第七句：ask 后加 for. ask for help “寻求帮助”是固定短语。8 第九句：hardly 改为 hard. 修饰动词 think 用副词 hard,表示“仔细考虑”意义。hardly 意为“几乎不，几乎没有” 。 9 第十一句：break 改为 broke. And 连接两个并列谓语，形式应一致；由 picked up 可知，用 broke. 10 第十三句：How 改为 What. 感叹句的中心词是名词 boy，故用 what 引导。第六篇1 第一句：a 改为 an 2 第三句：were 改为 was 3 第四句：frightening 改为 frighte
30、ned 4 第五句：say 改为 said 5 第七句：careful 改为 carefully 6 第八句：help 前加 to 7 第九句：第二个 and 改为but 8 第十句 animal 改为 animals 9 第十一句：him 改为 them 10 第十二句：去掉 about第七篇1 第一句：that 改为 who 2 第二句：the 改为 a 3 第三句: either 改为 neither 4 第四句： really 改为real 5 第五句： mean 改为 means 6 第六句：第二个 in 改为 on 7 第八句：去掉第一个 in 8 第十一句：work 改为 wor
31、ks 8 第十一局：write 前加 to 9 第十二句：work 改为 works 10 第十三句：win改为 won第八篇1 第一句：too 改为 very 2 第二句：去掉 to 3 第三句：himself 改为 herself 4 第三句：have 前加 to5 第四句：come 改为 came 6 第六句：But 改为 And 7 第六句：breads 改为 bread 8 第七句：angrily 改为 angry 9 第九句： a 改为 the 10 第九句：weigh 改为 weighs第九篇1 第一句：with 改为 about 2 第二句：was 改为 is 3 第三句 un
32、friendly 改为 friendly 4 第五句：play改为 playing 5 第七句：kind 改为 kinds 6 第九句： 去掉 the 7 第十句： dances 后加 to 8 第十一句：ask 改为 asks 9 第十三句：and 改为 or 10 第十四句：everybody 改为 nobody第十篇1 第一句：their 改为 its 2 第二句：aloud 改为 loudly/loud 3 第三句：for 改为 after 4 第五句： popularly 改为 popular 5 第五句： weekday 改为 weekdays 6 第六句：so 改为 because 7 第六句： most 前加 the8 第七句： 去掉 to 9 第八句： drew 改为 draw 10 第九句：How 改为 What6
