1、上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,汉译英中的逻辑关系处理周维上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心2006年3月17日,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,提纲,I.两种语言的差异II.应对策略III.总结,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,I.两种语言的差异,句子结构动词形式表达习惯,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,原文：推进义务教育均衡发展，/加快课程体系改革和招生考试制度改革，切实减轻中小学生过重课业负担，/不断加强教师队伍、特别是郊区中小学教师队伍建设，提高基础教育整体水平。初译: More support will be given
2、 to education in ex-urban areas to promote balanced development of compulsory education. / We will push for curriculum and examination-based enrollment and reduce the excessive workload of primary and secondary school students. / We will continuously improve the competence of teachers and upgrade th
3、e overall level of primary education.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,原文：推进义务教育均衡发展，加快课程体系改革和招生考试制度改革，切实减轻中小学生过重课业负担，不断加强教师队伍、特别是郊区中小学教师队伍建设，提高基础教育整体水平。终译: To improve the overall quality of basic education, we will take various measures, such as promoting the balanced development of compulsory education, acceler
4、ating reforms of curricula and entrance examinations, reducing the excessive workloads primary and secondary school students face, as well as improving the skills of teachers, especially those in primary and secondary schools in ex-urban areas.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,II.应对策略,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,A. 分析句子逻辑
5、关系,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,分析逻辑关系原文：全市社区卫生服务中心和乡镇卫生院进行了标准化建设，一大批公立医院得到了改建和扩建，/公共卫生应急处置和医疗服务能力明显增强。初译: We greatly strengthened our ability to handle public health emergencies and deliver health care/ by upgrading community health service centers and town/township clinics to meet defined standards, as well
6、 as by renovating and expanding a large number of public hospitals.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,分析逻辑关系 原文：全市社区卫生服务中心和乡镇卫生院进行了标准化建设，/一大批公立医院得到了改建和扩建，/公共卫生应急处置和医疗服务能力明显增强。 终译: We upgraded community health service centers and town/township clinics to meet defined standards,/ renovated and expanded a large numbe
7、r of public hospitals, /and improved our capacity to handle public health emergencies and deliver health care.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,原文：保持速度与结构、质量、效益相统一初译：align speed with structure, quality and efficiency,分析逻辑关系,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,分析逻辑关系原文：保持速度与结构、质量、效益相统一终译：maintain momentum while pursuing structural
8、 optimization, quality and efficiency at the same time,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,B. 搭建句子结构,调整句序变换动词形式添加,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,调整句序原文：完善新型农村合作医疗制度，加大政府投入力度，建立逐年递增的筹资机制，/ 进一步提高农民医疗保障水平。初译：The government will establish a funding system to increase its input year on year in developing the new rural cooperative me
9、dical system / and make it an effective vehicle to enhance health care for farmers.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,调整句序 原文：完善新型农村合作医疗制度，加大政府投入力度，建立逐年递增的筹资机制，进一步提高农民医疗保障水平 。 终译: The government is committed to providing better health care to farmers by refining the rural cooperative medical system and increasing
10、its inputs through a funding mechanism allowing for annual increments.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,调整句序 原文：健全法律法规、强化技术支撑、加强政策引导、明确管理职责、广泛宣传教育，/ 切实抓好节地节能节水节材，提高资源综合利用效率。初译：We must improve relevant laws and regulations, give a bigger role to technologies, / so as to make substantial achievements in the conserv
11、ation of and enhance the efficiency of integrated resources consumption.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,调整句序原文：健全法律法规、强化技术支撑、加强政策引导、明确管理职责、广泛宣传教育，切实抓好节地节能节水节材，提高资源综合利用效率 。 终译: In order to attain tangible results in the conservation of land, energy, water and raw materials and enhance the efficiency of resource
12、utilization, / we must improve relevant laws and regulations, and launch an extensive public awareness campaign.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,调整句序 原文：推进工业、交通、建筑和民用节能，/对消耗高、污染重、技术落后的工艺和产品实施强制性淘汰制度，/新建建筑严格实施节能50%的设计标准，强化能源需求侧管理。/加强风能、太阳能等新能源开发利用。初译：In order to step up our efforts of energy conservation / we mus
13、t impose close-down orders upon ./ We must also strengthen the management over the side of energy demand by forcefully applying the new rule / In addition, the development and use of new energies .,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,调整句序原文：推进工业、交通、建筑和民用节能，对消耗高、污染重、技术落后的工艺和产品实施强制性淘汰制度，新建建筑严格实施节能50%的设计标准，强化能源需求侧管理。加强
14、风能、太阳能等新能源开发利用 。 终译：Besides developing alternative energy sources , we must implement demand-side management to reduce energy consumption for . Measures in this regard must include phasing out and enforcing green design standards ,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,2. 变换动词形式,现在分词过去分词,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,现在分词,原文：落实上海
15、实施科教兴市战略行动纲要，/ 科技创新力度明显加大，创新环境进一步优化。初译: Effective measures were taken to implement Shanghais Plan of Action for Revitalizing the City through Science and Education. /More scientific and technological innovations were made and the environment for innovation was improved.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,现在分词原文：落实上
16、海实施科教兴市战略行动纲要，科技创新力度明显加大，创新环境进一步优化。 终译: We implemented Shanghais Plan of Action for Revitalizing the City through Science and Education, bolstering the innovation environment and making local technological innovation significantly more dynamic.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,过去分词,原文：错误和挫折教训了我们，使我们比较地聪明起来了，我们的事情
17、就办得比较好一些。（毛泽东选集四卷，1417页）1译文：Taught by mistakes and setbacks, we have become wiser and handle our affairs better. 1 引自汉英翻译教程P155,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,3. 添加,逻辑关系概括性标点符号,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,逻辑-目的关系,原文：以企业为主导,以项目为载体,/ 以产业化 导向,加强政策引导,/ 推动产学研紧密结合。 初译：Driven by businesses themselves and projects, / guided by
18、various policies towards industrialization, / the industry, academia and research community could form an alliance.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,逻辑-目的关系,原文：以企业为主导,以项目为载体,以产业化 导向,加强政策引导,推动产学研紧密结合。 终译：We must use stronger policy incentives to encourage enterprises to take the lead in engaging universities and t
19、he research community in collaborative research projects, so as to bring research results to the market faster.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,逻辑-并列关系,原文：（产业布局进一步优化，）中心城区服务业规模不断扩大，2005年第三产业增加值比重预计达到75%；/郊区先进制造业集聚发展。 初译：Specifically speaking, the service industry experienced on-going expansion in the city proper
20、 which drove the share of the tertiary sector in the citys added value up to almost 75%./ , the ex-urban areas has become an important base of manufacturing industry.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,逻辑-并列关系,原文：（产业布局进一步优化，）中心城区服务业规模不断扩大，2005年第三产业增加值比重预计达到75%；郊区先进制造业集聚发展。 终译：On the one hand, the city proper has se
21、en its service sector grow in size, now accounting for 75% of its economic growth. On the other hand, Shanghais ex-urban areas are attracting and spawning more and more manufacturing businesses.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,逻辑-因果关系,原文：消费需求逐步扩大，投资和出口结构继续优化，/ 保持了投资、消费、出口共同拉动经济增长的格局。 初译：We gradually expanded the
22、 consumption demand and continued to optimize the investment structure and export mix / so that our economy was driven together by investment, consumption and export.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,逻辑-因果关系,原文：消费需求逐步扩大，投资和出口结构继续优化，/保持了投资、消费、出口共同拉动经济增长的格局。 终译：Consumption demand has been growing steadily and the s
23、tructure of investment and exports is becoming more and more optimal, / contributing in turn to balanced economic growth driven by investment, consumption and exports.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,概括性,原文：信息产品制造业要强化研发设计，进一步完善产业链，/ 加快发展集成电路、新型元器件、新一代移动通信等重点产业。 初译：In the area of ICT products manufacturing, we st
24、ress the stronger capacities as well as / To this end, we must accelerate the development of such key industries,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,概括性,原文：信息产品制造业要强化研发设计，进一步完善产业链，加快发展集成电路、新型元器件、新一代移动通信等重点产业。 终译：In the area of ICT product manufacturing, our challenge is to enhance R&D and design capacities, and buil
25、d up competencies across the whole value chain, focusing particularly on such key industries as integrated circuits, new generation components and next-generation mobile telecommunications systems.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,概括性,原文：加强大气污染治理，以实施燃煤电厂烟气脱硫为重点，有效控制煤烟型污染、扬尘污染、机动车尾气污染。 初译：taking effective measures
26、 to control pollution caused by coal burning, dusts and vehicle exhausts. 终译：taking effective measures to control sources of air pollution such as coal combustion, dust and vehicle exhausts.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,概括性,原文：依托国际航运中心建设，促进国际中转物流发展，加快临港、外高桥、浦东空港、西北综合物流园区等重要物流基地建设 初译：By leveraging the developm
27、ent of the international shipping center, we must promote and speed up the development of such key logistics bases as 终译：With regard to the modern logistics industry, we must increase international transshipment volumes through Shanghai by, speed up the development of our key logistics bases,上海市人民政府
28、外事办公室翻译服务中心,概括性,原文：坚持需要与可能相结合，/ 积极主动，分类逐步解决城镇职工老年遗属、无保障高龄老人的医疗和生活保障问题，/ 以及未成年人等群体的医疗保障问题。 初译: We should stick to the practice of taking both necessity and possibility into consideration / and work to provide to the bereaved family members of urban employees and the seniors yet to be covered by socia
29、l security system / and for family members of employees and minors.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,概括性,原文：坚持需要与可能相结合，积极主动，分类逐步解决城镇职工老年遗属、无保障高龄老人的医疗和生活保障问题，以及未成年人等群体的医疗保障问题。 终译: We must prioritize among the social security problems faced by different social groups. Where provision is necessary and possible, we w
30、ill work actively to provide better health care and living allowances to senior family dependants of deceased urban employees and to elderly persons not covered by the social security system, as well as health care for minors.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,标点符号,原文：二、三产业共同推动经济发展的格局进一步巩固，现代服务业快速发展，先进制造业能级不断提升。 初
31、译：The economic development structure fuelled by both the secondary and tertiary sectors was consolidated.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,标点符号,原文：二、三产业共同推动经济发展的格局进一步巩固，/ 现代服务业快速发展，先进制造业能级不断提升。 终译：The tertiary and secondary industries are gaining more weight in the overall economy; / the modern service industry is developing rapidly and the advanced manufacturing industry is continually scaling new heights.,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,III. 总结,A. “规定动作” 原文逻辑关系的分析B. 灵活使用各种处理方法 句序调整动词变换添加,上海市人民政府外事办公室翻译服务中心,谢 谢！,
