1、新东方在线 CET6 高分班网络课堂电子教材系列 写作CET6 写作高分班电子教材主讲：王兆飞大学英语六级考试短文写作一、六级写作评分标准(一) 作文评分原则1. CET 是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2. CET 作文题采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（ Reward Scores）,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清
2、楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括 0 分，一名阅卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。(二) 作文评分标准1. 本题满分为 15 分。2. 阅卷标准共分五等: 2 分、5 分、8 分、11 分及 14 分。各有标准样卷一至二份。3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如 8 分）相似，即定为该分数（即 8 分），若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即 9 分）或减一分（即 7 分） ，但不得加或减半分。4. 评分标准：2 分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或
3、大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5 分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8 分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11 分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14 分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给 0 分。5. 字数不足应酌情扣分累计字数 140-149 130-139 120-129 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 79扣 分 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9注:
4、 1. 如题目中给出主题句, 起始句, 结束句, 均不得计入所写字数2. 规定内容未写全者，按比例扣分。实例一2003 年 1 月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 当今社会上存在着很多不诚
5、实的现象。2. 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。It Pays to Be HonestIn our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: wher
6、e is our honest exist?Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, well feel guilt at last. To a company and its adverti
7、sement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again.So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Lets create a morally outstanding social.Although hones
8、ty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams. Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their
9、 products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good
10、friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to 新东方在线 CET6 高分班网络课堂电子教材系列 写作1get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who i
11、s honest will be paid back later.In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more
12、 clearly. Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was
13、 made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. We should b
14、e honest from now on and be honest in our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest them our country will be beautiful and wealthy.Now in our society, many people are not honest in doing soming. We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For exa
15、mple, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box. Every people do that, but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. For another example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students se
16、e others.I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be increase and make our socity develop. In doing every thing we should be honest all, study, word, life and so on. If you are honest, every people will be friend to you, and who wi
17、ll regard you are good people. But if you dont be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are want to be a good people, remember honest first.Nowadays, many people choose not to be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students ch
18、eat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money, sometimes damaged the patients health, even their life.Seeing this situation. I th
19、ink it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead you to face your problem bravely, which helps to solve it. And the last, honest surely helps to make the society more harmon
20、y.So. I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.实例二1999 年 6 月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 120 wo
21、rds and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人认为读书要有选择2. 有些人认为应当博览群书3. 我的看法Reading Selectively Or Extensively?When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that rea
22、ding extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good
23、books to read and never touch the bad books.But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know m
24、ore, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two
25、 sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all
26、kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life.
27、 They are all useful to ours. Most people thought that read books should have been selectived. But others belived reading extentively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas, on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose t
28、hose which we intrested, and it would be 新东方在线 CET6 高分班网络课堂电子教材系列 写作2helpful for us.on another hand. Someones intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldnt reading at only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas were good but werent wise.As a reader, the main task is t
29、o discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Dont treat these books with rackless abandon. The best technology of reading is connect.How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we sh
30、ould read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the b
31、ooks and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree. They emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge hell have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be usele
32、ss. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.Some people think reading shall be choosed. Because som
33、e books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man
34、. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beauiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Read
35、ing them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.二、写作常见错误分析一、语法错误（一）句子结构错误1 主从句叠置1) There are more and more students like to use the computer.2) There are still many problems should be noted and resolved.2 简单句叠置I like chatting on line very much, I go to the
36、net bar almost every weekend.3 从句叠置As is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life.4 句子成分缺失If work hard, we will surely be successful.5 语序错误1) Why college students spend more and more time on the computer?2) I often wonder where have they got their money.（二）动词错误1时
37、态错误Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future. 2语态错误1) I have excited several days at the news that you will come here.2) Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall.3单复数错误1) Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.2) Someone are afraid
38、 that computer may control men in the future. 4非谓语动词错误新东方在线 CET6 高分班网络课堂电子教材系列 写作31) Let me to represent everyone to say “hello” to you.2) Do exercise in the morning is good for ones health.3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.（三）代词错误1) We can use compu
39、ters in doing everything you like.（you 改为 we）2) A college student should be able to do their washing on their own.（四）冠词错误1) Horse is an useful animal.2) The exam will be held in the December, 2004. （五）词性错误1) I wish you can consider my suggests.2) If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure
40、 sufferings and setbacks.二、用词错误1) Students must know how to apply a computer. 2) People can touch many new things on the Internet. 3) The purpose of this letter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall.三、表达习惯错误1) Why generated so large a change? 2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 compu
41、ter. 3) A room often lives 6-8 students. 4) I think this great change has three reasons.5) The prices of the food are too expensive.6) The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.四、标点符号及大小写错误1) However, every coin has two sides, I think the surroundin
42、gs in our canteen are the best among all universities.2) The man was racing down the street. Because he was late for the class.3) At last I want to let you know, I love our university very much.4) My favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis.5) The best English fil
43、m in my eyes isForrest Gump.三、六级写作题型分类（一）对立观点型2008 年 6 月Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1. 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多2. 有人认为电子图书会在将来取代传统图书3. 我的观点
44、2007 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words, and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人认为有做好事应该有回报。2. 另一些人认为应该像雷锋那样，
45、做好事不计回报。3. 我的看法2000 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The First sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline (giv
46、en in Chinese) below:1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是.2. 也有人持不同意见，.3. 我的看法和打算1999 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline 新东方在线 C
47、ET6 高分班网络课堂电子教材系列 写作4(given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人认为读书要有选择2. 有些人认为应当博览群书3. 我的看法1998 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on
48、the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人认为某些数字会带来好运2. 我认为数字和运气无关.1997 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Job-Hopping. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为.2. 有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为.3. 我的看法1996 年 1 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: Why I Take College English Test Band 6. You should base your composition on the following outl
