1、 剑桥雅思作文范文及解析目 录剑 5.2TEST 1 .2TEST 2 .3TEST 3 .3TEST 4 .4GENEAL TRAINING .7剑 6.7TEST 1 .7TEST 2 .10TEST 3 .10TEST 4 .12GENERAL TRAINING.18剑 7.18TEST 1 .18TEST 2 .19TEST 3 .22TEST 4 .23GENERAL TRAINING.24剑 8.25TEST 1 .25TEST 2 .28TEST 3 .29TEST 4 .31GENERAL TRAINING.35剑 9.39TEST 1 .39TEST 2 .40TEST 3
2、.43TEST 4 .44大作文剑5TEST 11. Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree.这是一篇关于教育的雅思写作高分作文范文，主要内容是提供了一种观点就是，在大学的任何一个学科里，都应该有相同数量的男性和女性。你同意这种观点吗?为什么?不同意 男生和女生思维特点不同，个人的喜好也不同，实践表明，更多的男生喜欢理科，而更多的女生倾向于文科; 生理构造的差异造成的选科上的差异，比如在高强度训练的军事专业，强壮的男生
3、就更适合。同意天赋人权，人人生而平等与自由。男女平等，无论男生还是女生都应该享有平等的选择专业的机会。比如居里夫人就在以前人们认为男人才能胜任的放射性元素研究上取得了杰出的成就Nowhere in the world has the issue of female rights and interests been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, plenty of universities limit the number of female students who study in some of subjects; theref
4、ore, many people think universities should accept equal numbers of men and female study in every subject, but others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I think men and women should gain equal educational opportunities, but accepting equal numbers of male and female, in every subject,
5、 is unnecessary and impossible. Therefore, I disagree with the view that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. My argument in support of my view is as follows. The main reason is that mode of thinking is different between female and male. Everyone, ma
6、le and female, has equal right to study in universities, nevertheless, due to difference of in thought and views. Men and Women may represent varied study capability. A case in point is that men may possess more talent than women in mathematics, physics and like stuff. In the study of language, on t
7、he other hand, female shows stronger ability than male. In the history of human beings, most scientists, especially those who research abstract theories, are male.Another reason is that nature decides different directions of development between men and women. Today, although females right is being i
8、ncreased, female still plays a different social role. Women are by nature good at house keeping since the biological function of a woman is first to bring children into the world and then to bring them up and it has been proved by some scientists that women are not good at business management, polit
9、ical administration, etc. So, in the study of business and management, requiring equal numbers of male and female is not essential.From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that accepting equal numbers of male and female students in every subject is impossible and I also disagre
10、e with this point of view.TEST 22. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.It is quite common these days for young people i
11、n many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.The reasons for this tren
12、d may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and b
13、etter personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important
14、 age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to re-adapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely
15、today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspec
16、tive are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the way to gain this.TEST 33. Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate become useful adults. Discuss both views and give
17、 your own opinion.TEXT:Education has been viewed as one of the most essential elements of individual and social development. One topic now under heated discussion is that if competition or cooperation should be encouraged among children. Essentially, having a sense of competition for children is a n
18、ecessity for it can promote their social adaptability. Also, it is believed that nobody would like to fall behind with others so that children will be given motivation to study harder and they will be more independent as well.However, there are some disadvantages about the competition in children. S
19、cience they are too young, strong sense of competition would make them going astray. They will be selfish instead of native. Indeed, they will learn how to do ever thing for serving their purposes prematurely. In contrast, a sense of cooperation, admittedly, is what the job market expects from the w
20、orkers. A man can hardly finish a huge project like scientific research. It needs team work. But we can not be certain about if every child can be beneficial through cooperation. Some children will feel unmotivated about team work science thy believe others will finish it well so that they need do n
21、othing about it,Thus, a sense of competition or cooperation should be encouraged or not is a frequent topic of discussion. As for my opinion, I do not think a sense of competition or cooperation should be encouraged one-sided, they are supposed to be combined. Not only should children learn how to t
22、hink independently and solve a problem by themselves, but also value the power of the team and get along well with others. Only in this way can children become well-rounded and outstanding. (279)TEST 44.Research indicates that the characteristics we were born with have much more influence on our per
23、sonality and development than experiences we have had in our life. Which do you think is the major influence?范文1Introduction ( 38words)Humans endeavor in researching on factors affecting ones personality and development has offered quite a amount of proofs. My position may provide you with a clear n
24、otion that nurture plays a far more important role in ones development.Body 1 (95words)Reportedly there was a maid, a countryside girl with only an educational background of primary school, working for an American professor who worked in Shanghai Jiaotong University, China. After two years of stay a
25、t the learned and exotic surroundings, amazingly this plain girl could speak fluent English and started to help the host to receive and send e-mails to his students. When the professor left for New York later, soon she sought a post at a multinational firm. This example clearly reveals a common trut
26、h: appropriate nurture can turn an average person to be competent. (topic sentence)Body 2 (89words)I will then go on to examine my position by offering other facts. It is well believed that overseas graduates who once furthered their education in foreign universities are taking incredible places in
27、China because these elites have a broader way of thinking and their bilingual and creative capabilities have proved themselves much better than domestic ones. In contrast, some people show their linguistic talent by precisely speaking a variety of dialects but still lead a poor life because no forei
28、gn language learning process has been conducted for them.Conclusion ( 42words)To sum up, the competence of a former maid and the qualities of overseas Chinese students already illustrate an undeniable fact: a right way of nurture can mold one to be outstanding whilst extraordinary nature without nur
29、ture is a waste of resource.范文2(1)Admittedly, the inborn characteristics we have impose influence on our personality and development to some extent. From my point of view, however, the experiences we go through in life, education and work outweigh the characteristics in terms of shaping our personal
30、ity. (2)To make my claim more convincing, I list three arguments as follows.诚然，先天的特性会在一定程度上影响我们的人格和发展。但是，以我之见，就塑造人格而言，我们在生活、教育和工作中的经历所起的作用更大。为了使我的观点更加具有说服力，我在这里列出了三个理由。As a proverb says “life is the best teacher”, we constantly draw on our life experience to improve ourselves. For example, hardships
31、 and setbacks make us more psychologically strong;(3)getting along with people teaches us how to be socially appealing and getting married and bringing up our offspring awards us a sense of responsibility. Almost every element in, or facet of, life contributes to the formation of our personality.正如一
32、句谚语所言-“ 生活是最好的老师” 。我们经常会使用生活中的经历来提升自己。例如，困苦与挫折会让我们心理上更加坚强;与人相处会教会我们如何成为一个社交上受欢迎的人 ;结婚、抚育子女会赋予我们责任感。生活中的每一个元素或方面都会有助于我们人格的形成。In addition to life, education-from pre-school to tertiary education-also plays a vital role in the development of personality (4) as it helps build up ones career path and lif
33、e trajectory. During the process of learning, one can broaden his or her horizon through grasping knowledge and or skills in various disciplines, and consequently develop his or her traits and attributes, such as creativity, critical thinking and troubleshooting capacity. These are all essential con
34、stituents of ones personality and are fairly difficult to acquire from inborn characteristics.除了生活的经历，从幼儿园到大学的教育在我们的人格发展中也起到了至关重要的作用;同时，教育也会有助于规划我们的职业道路和生活轨迹。在学习的过程中，一个人通过掌握各个领域的知识或/和技能开阔了他的眼界，并最终赋予了他一些特性和品质，例如，创造力、批判性思维和解决问题的能力。这些都是人格中的核心组成部分，并很难从先天的特性中获得。Equally important as life and education is
35、working experience. As a continuation of educational experience, It further helps refine ones personality in a very comprehensive way. (5)In awork context, when you handle paper work, you learn to be patient and meticulous; when you meet customers, you learn to be flexible and understanding; and whe
36、n you encounter pressure, you learn to be calm and prompt.与生活和教育同等重要的是工作经历。作为教育经历的延续，工作经历非常综合地完善了一个人的人格。在工作环境中，当你处理文案工作时，你学会了耐心和细心;当你会见客户的时候，你学会了灵活和为他们着想;当你遇到压力的时候，你学会了镇定和迅速行动。In accordance with the perspectives explored here in above, (6) we may safely draw the conclusion that experiences create a
37、more significant influence on our personality and development in comparison with inborn characteristics.根据以上的探讨，我们可以慎重地得出一个结论，即较之先天的特性，经历对于我们人格以及发展的作用更为深远。范文3Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever befo
