1、高考英语写作的有效复习,2014.12 刘景军,内容目录,高考对写作的要求学生现状及存在的问题高三第一轮写作复习高三第二轮写作复习高三第三轮写作复习,Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. 读书使人渊博，交谈使人机敏，写作使人严谨 培根,高考对写作的要求,课程标准对写作的要求,课程标准8级的写作要求1. 能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；2. 能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；3. 能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；4. 能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺
2、。,谋篇技巧,行文连贯,思维能力,辨析能力,文化知识,写作经验,要求考生根据题示进行书面表达，考生应能：清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。,高考说明对写作的要求(山东),短文写作（日记、小故事等） 实用性写作（卡片、信件、说明、留言、 填写表格等） 图文信息转换（图表描述、信息解读、写配图说明） 接续完成文字,课标建议文体形式,问题：,很多考生对写作存在畏难情绪写出来的作文错误百出（语法、拼写）篇章不连贯，主题不明确内容不全，篇章意识较差,学生现状及存在的问题,where there is a will, there is a way.,This is the prover
3、b I love the most, which encouraged me through the valley of life. It was a spring full of charm while the challenges in the whole world seemed to come at me. The deadline of the School Magazines release, the preparation for a students film exhibition and the imminent mid-term exams were not so attr
4、active or friendly to me as usual, but like three,where there is a will, there is a way.,monsters at the same time driving me down to the deepest valley. However, I was not so weak as the “monsters” thought that they could have beaten me down easily. The proverb “Where there is a will, there is a wa
5、y.” lit me up to fight against and surmount them. Not only did I organize the matters in a logical way, but put them into effect according to my schedule,where there is a will, there is a way.,as well. Whenever I felt too much pressure, I wrote to myself and said, “try hard and keep on”. It truly ma
6、de sense. The busy life lasted for about one month that I didnt fall into asleep before midnight even once during that memorable period. It couldnt make me more proud that I made it with flying colors. The printed magazine appealed to many readers, the exhibition showed the spirit of,where there is
7、a will, there is a way.,Students films and my scores of the exams was more than satisfying. Never would I realize my potential unless I push myself hard and keep on like that. Besides, I didnt give up so that I accomplished the mission impossible. Looking back to my steps, I thankfully admit that it
8、 was the proverb that played the significant role. I have realized that no matter how challenging the,where there is a will, there is a way.,task may seem, only do we insist on what we have faith in and never give up will the way to our goal show up sooner or later.,整体规划 全面复习循序渐进 扩大积累限时训练 范文引路评改多样 反
9、馈有效,总体原则,训练要点,九月英语学科授课安排,第一轮：提高基础读写能力 第二轮：微技能训练与应用 第三轮：文体写作强化冲刺,句子成分基本句型（5种）写作词汇表达积累,第一轮：提高基础读写能力,掌握一门外语对我们的生活很有帮助。（动名词做主语）Mastering a foreign language can be of great help in our life. 使我印象最深的是他们都经过了专业培训。（主语从句）What impressed me most was that they had had professional training.,1. 句子成分,1、主语+谓语（不及物动词
10、）2、主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语3、主语+系动词+表语4、主语+谓语（及物动词）+间接宾语+直接宾语5、主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语+宾语不足语,基本句型（5种）,作为一名中学生，我认为英语是非常重要的一门学科。As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. 显而易见，一个好的学习习惯能帮助我们尽快达到我们的目标。Obviously, a good learning habit can help us speed up to reach our goals.,admire 词性：动词 词义：崇拜，羡
11、慕I admire him for his success in business. I really admire the way she brings up those kids all on her own. We took time to stop and admire the beautiful view. He was much admired for his great scientific achievements. (钦佩)She gazed upon him with great admiration. (名词)His speech called forth admirat
12、ion from all the people present.,写作词汇,It is a common problem shared by many people. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents.I still have hundreds of stories to share with you.Women must receive their fair share of training for good-paying jobs.,表示增加的词increase / raise / ris
13、e / go up / grow up 表示减少的词decrease / go down / drop / fall / decline / reduce 表示稳定的词remain stable go on steadily stay the same表示变化的形容词、副词 rapid/rapidly sharp/sharplysteady/steadily slight/slightlyslow/slowly dramatic/dramatically,表达积累,被忽略的积累宝典1单选与写作1. Tsinghua University, founded in 1911, is home to
14、 a great number of outstanding figures. 2. Life is like a long race where we compete with others to go beyond ourselves.,被忽略的积累宝典2课文与写作3. I normally wake up about five minutes before my alarm clock goes off. 4. It takes me less than fifteen minutes to wash, get changed, have breakfast, leave home an
15、d get on a bus.5.They have already expressed a keen interest in working in design after their tennis careers come to an end. (注意含冠词词组的固定搭配),被忽略的积累宝典3完形填空与写作被忽略的积累宝典4阅读理解与写作,三大从句的写法 含it 的高级句型 非谓语动词的写作高级表达法的渗透（词汇、句式）衔接与过渡（句子、段落）,第二轮：写作微技能训练,使用高级句式的几个策略：使用被动语态、强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句、with复合结构、虚拟语气,高级句式策略,Above
16、 all, we must do something to stop pollution.Above all, something must be done to stop pollution.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.It was when I enteredthat I realized.,We dont know its value until we lose health. Not until we lose health did we knowIf its not we
17、ll organized, the meeting will be a failure. If not well organized, the meeting,Because there was too much noise, I couldnt go on studying. With too much noise going on, I I didnt take his advice, so I failed in the exam. If I had taken his advice, I wouldnt have failed in the exam.,1首先，需要休息，因为我们应该以
18、饱满的精力迎接新的一天。_，a good rest is needed _ we are supposed to embrace a fresh day energetically.,衔接与过渡,First of all,because,2就我自己而言，我正准备上大学，就要离开我学习了三年的母校了。_ ，Im preparing to enter a university _ leaving the high school where Ive been studying for three years.,As far as Im concerned,and,4.As a new way of
19、shopping，online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life.(1)On one hand，online shopping has many advantages.First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of searching a crowded store，we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like.(2)
20、 Second，it is much faster for us to do shopping. We dont have to spend a lot of time going to shops. Third，we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time.,(3)On the other hand，online shopping also has many disadvantages. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are
21、 not always what they are.(4) As result，we can be cheated easily.(5)Whats worse, we cannot see the things in detail.(6)In a word (7) despite the disadvantages of online shopping，I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.So we should develop it.,我会永远爱读书，因为书籍在我的生命中既像良师又像益友。_,I can never stop the lo
22、ve for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life.,翻译,总之，条条大路通罗马。我相信有付出就有回报。_,All in all，every road leads to Rome. I believe hard work pays off.,应用文分类指导大作文专题细化步骤与方法指导统练作文全覆盖分类整理作文夹,第三轮：文体强化训练,小作文分类指导,理清应用文分类，各个击破分别训练,应用文写作策略和方法（北京）,1. 仔细审题，看懂题目的意思，整理要点，决定语言形式；2.
23、开头直截了当，尽快入题，不要拐弯抹角，拖泥带水；3. 行文一般以10个句子为宜。若用少于8句容易表达不清；若多于10句则零乱琐碎，缺乏整体感；,应用文写作策略和方法,4. 用最有把握的词语句型将规定内容加以表达，并始终注意达意；5. 应按照合理顺序，适当使用一些过渡性的连接词，将句子连珠成串；6. 结尾要干净利落，既不能拉杂，也不能草率，要显得自然，恰当得体。,应用文书信写作“模板”,书信的类型可能千变万化，如建议信、邀请信、申请信、求职信、感谢信、道歉信、批评信、抱怨信等（以建议信、邀请信和感谢信为主）；在掌握了掌握了英语书信的基本格式的基础上，还要根据写作对象和目的组织核心写作部分的内容，
24、充分考虑到交际性原则和应用型选择。,大作文专题细化,提纲类作文（观点类议论文）图表作文（说明议论）图画作文（描述议论）图画作文（故事叙述）,专题一：主题先行+双线并行,专题二：注意矛盾冲突/心理发展/动作全程,专题三：对画面细节进行联想、扩充,专题四：注意起承转合、场景转换,步骤与方法指导,书面表达六步走,审题: 明确体裁，掌握格式 抓要点, 一一对应 选词造句, 点石成金 连句成文 检查修改, 删繁就简 认真眷写, 书写规范，卷面整洁,好文章的标准,整洁的卷面；-书写工整 丰富的表达；-语言丰富流畅的结构； -逻辑合理独到的见解；-思想积极,His brother, who is a tou
25、rist guide, will help us plan this trip. His brother, a tourist guide, will help us plan this trip.,语言的选择-简洁性,Mr. Stevens is great to work for-he is really the best boss for me to ask for. Mr. Stevens is great to work for-I couldnt really ask for a better boss.,语言的选择-生动性,尝试不同的教学模式,1）兴趣入手，说写结合（应用文）2）
26、知识积累，学以致用文章的肉词汇文章的骨语法句法文章的筋连接词,写作过程,规划,准备,初稿,填空,转换,激发,明确,讨论,写前,写中,指导性训练方法,成品,素材,填空,听写,改写,结构,语言,逻辑,使用固定批改标记 让学生先自己修改,老师提出共同问题 让学生参照再修改,集体讨论作文要点 开卷再做回收再判,因需施教提供范文 建议不用官方版本,1,2,4,3,写后活动作文讲评建议,每周一个专题/一次统练,统练作文全覆盖,你的英国笔友Chris要在班级介绍中国传统文化，他发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下提示回复邮件。1. 建议介绍北京春节期间的庙会(temple fairs)；2. 庙会很受人们欢迎，有很多传统表演和小吃；3. 随邮件附上几张自己逛庙会的照片。注意：1. 词数不少于50。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 邮件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数,分类整理作文夹,1) 分两大类：小作文类/大作文类2) 每次写作文用一张活页纸，正面为一稿件，背面为二稿。3) 将学生范文、教师例文、写作指导均添加到作文夹子中。4）作文勤赏析，构建范文库。,1）改进书写，美化卷面2）关注生活，言之有物3）精读课文，跳出教材4）广泛阅读，实践思维5）不断积累，学以致用6）学会欣赏，提高自我7）激励评语，提高热情8）重视过程，结果自然,几点建议,Thank you!,
