1、成功申请汉普郡学院的留学文书本文为深圳中学某同学成功申请汉普郡学院的 Essay 范文Speakout, Stand up, Step forward“To be a qualified citizen, never should you ignore the darknessand unjust in society, once you aware the existence of them, you should speakout your thoughts clearly, stand up bravely, and step forward responsibly.”-An anony
2、mous web-user onShenzhong Tieba“11 years of study, 8 schools, 4 cities, 2 countries, andseparated parents.” Too many complex human relations, too many schools and toolong a journey have matured me too early.Because Im interested in communicating with different sorts ofpeople, I started to focus on w
3、ork in the public sphere. This led me to be oneof the earliest users of Shenzhen Middle Schools online bulletin-board systemcalled Tieba. On Tieba, we debate, proclaim our beliefs and criticize negativeactions taken by school or government. With the appearance of many valuableposts, Tieba grew vigor
4、ously.After a series of bureaucratic problems on the site, however, itwas almost closed down. Finally, in November of 2008, I was elected the Tiebaadministrator. This was the start of a “Golden Age” for Tieba. But after oneyear, I, too, was forced to resign from the head of Tieba due to schoolspress
5、ure.The fact was that a teacher, whose name is Liu Kexin, was facingnumerous criticisms from students and parents on Tieba. With anger andarrogance, he asked me to delete those posts about him and to prohibit usersfrom criticizing him and other teachers. To defend the freedom of speech, myanswer was
6、 “No”. Then he exerted pressure on school via his connections, whichmeans “guanxi” in municipal government. School obeyed and asked me to deletethe posts or they wont let any teacher to write recommendations for me anymore, I didnt obey, but resigned.What to do? Shut up? Or keep speaking and fightin
7、g in publicsphere?Shenzhen Middle School, where the most progressive educationalreformation of China is taking place, needs Shenzhongers not only to watch, butalso to involve in. Under this circumstance, with courage and love for freepress, I established Nirvana Weekly with my friends.Nirvana Weekly
8、 is not an ordinarymagazine, but the first and the only fully independent magazine operates byhigh school students. We do never ask the help of school or government, and allthe money was come from editors, donators and sponsors. The essential goal of NirvanaWeekly is to be independent,free, objectiv
9、e and liberal; we do know that this might be impossible for mediain China, however, since we have the chance and passion to chase our dream, whynot give a try?Before the Revolution of 1911, Chen Shaobai, the director of ChinaDaily in Hong Kong, said “The fire of the revolution is breaking out! Till
10、thenwill the China society earthshaking! A new world is coming! Please think, sucha tremendous battle originates here! And you, are one of the pioneers of us!”Here and now, I want to say: “One hundred years passed, ademocratic and free China is still a dream. However, as more and more Chineseyoungst
11、ers start to call for democracy and freedom, a new world is coming! Andwe, the editors of Nirvana Weekly,are pioneers of this campaign!”To speak out, Im no longer a member of “silent majority.”To stand up, Im no longer a fighter in the shadow.To step forward, Im no longer a boy who is easily to be d
12、efeated.The development of human society has its rule. The whole worldwould come to democratic at the end, and China wont be an exception. Who willchange this ancient nation? The answer is “qualified citizens”. And I, as adreamer and practicer who has a strong sense of mission and love for thenation, will be a pioneer of them.温馨提示：专业的事情，交给专业的机构来完成。10年来，监审留学一直致力于留学文书的写作服务，已经帮助过无数留学生申请到理想的大学，擅长美国，加拿大，英国和澳洲的个人陈述和推荐信写作。如果您有写作方面的需求可以 联系 QQ：970865017，按时交稿，绝不拖延，再也不用发愁。
