1、 四级写作 满分评分标准解读 CET 作文题采用总体评分方法。从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 满分 15 分，根据考试大纲的评分标准，给出的最高的 14分评分标准为： 14分：切题，表达思想清楚。语言通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误； 解读： A. “切题，表达思想清楚 ”：所谓切题，最直观的理解就是 “不跑题 ”，在四六级英语写作中，跑题是比较难的，因为题目会给出非常明确的观点选择或
2、者命题场景。所谓表达思想清楚，尤其对于四六级写作中的给出两种观点，问你同意哪一个观点的时候，这个时候建议同学们要有清晰的观点倾向，即便你会对比两种观点各自的利弊，最终你清晰的 preference 是给考官非常重要的信息传递。 B. “语言通畅，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误 ”：这一条主要要求 考生的语言的逻辑和语言的使用能力。在四六级写作中，虽然不像 GRE GMAT 这种高端逻辑写作对逻辑要求那么高，但是逻辑的通畅也是最基本的，而且只有逻辑通畅了，语言才是通畅的。但是英文作为 “形合 ”语言，既注重 “内容逻辑 ”也注重 “形式逻辑 ”，例如必要的逻辑引导信号， firstly， seco
3、ndly， whereas， on the other hand，all in all.都能引领读者和考官更加清晰的把握你的文章的起承转合。关于语言错误，建议大家还是要高标准严格要求自己，用最地道的书面英文进行写作，四六级写作还不 是真正的文章写作，但是是非常好的过渡都 GRE TOEFL、甚至论文写作的桥梁，培养自己书面化表达的严谨性和地道性。 2013年 06月四级作文真实批改报告 题型： 英语四级作文 题目： 2013年 06月英语四级作文 原文 字数： 164 批改 时间： 2013年 08月 22日 21： 13 A young lady is 1teaching student s
4、tudy multiplication table in the classroom. Maybe, 2multiplication table too difficult to learn, suddenly, a girl speak up, 3No offense , but by the time we are in the job market , 4won not that stuff be outdated?” Just at that moment , the teacher also can not reply. Exactly as, the lassock said 5,
5、 stuff can change , why 6multiplication table do not outdated. With 7the society of the development, everything is 8happening change. Even knowledge also 9sharpen the saw ,but still have some stuff can not outdated, for example , multiplication 10table .This is the basic of math. 11Just as ,one add
6、one always equal to two, as broad as it is long. We have to admit 12society is 13progress , certainly, so 14knowledge does. But some stuff 15won not outdated. We 16sole make take full advantage of these 17resource. 18Whatever society how to change , please remember 19these basic won 20not outdated.
7、Only 21master these basic knowledge, we 22ability to get there. 错误归类分析： 单词合并错误： 1：批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： The phrase should be “teaching the multiplication table to the students”. 4: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： Its “wont” here. 6: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： It s
8、hould be “cant multiplication table be/get outdated?” 7: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： It should be “the development of the society”. 8: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： You mean “changing”? 10: 批改解释： Incomprehensible text. 修改建议： Its better to say “the multiplication table which is th
9、e basics of math”. 13: 批改解释： Incomprehensible text. 修改建议： Better to use “in progress” or “progressing”. 15: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： Its better to use “wont get” or “will not get”. 18: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： It should be “However the society develops,” 19: 批改解释： Error i
10、n word combination. 修改建议： Better to use “the basics” here. “The basics of sth” means “the most important and necessary facts, skills, ideas, etc. from which other things develop”. 22: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： Its more reasonable to use “are able to get there”. 从句错误： 2: 批改解释： Clause def
11、iciency. 修改建议： The clause is supposed to be “because the multiplication table is too difficult to learn,”. 标点错误： 3: 批改解释： Punctuation error. 修改建议： Add a quotation mark “” here. 连词错误： 5: 批改解释： Incorrect or missing conjunction. 修改建议： Add “since” here. 词义不明 (INC)： 9: 批改解释： Incomprehensible text. 修改建议：
12、Hard to understand you. Do you mean “is developing fast, but still have to be based on some basic skills”? 中式英语 (CHI)： 11: 批改解释： Chinglish. 修改建议： Chinglish. 冠词错误： 12: 批改解释： Missing article. 修改建议： Insert “the” here. 词序不当： 14: 批改解释： Incorrect word order. 修改建议： Seems that it should be “is knowledge”, t
13、o go along well with “is in progress”. 选词错误： 16: 批改解释： Poor word selection. 修改建议： The word “sole” doesnt make any sense here. Did you intend to type in the word “should”? 单复数错误： 17: 批改解释： Error in singular or plural form. 修改建议： “Resources” should be used here. 单词缺失： 20: 批改解释： A word is missing. 修改建议
14、： Insert the word “get” here. 21: 批改解释： Words are missing here. 修改建议： Add several words here “after we”. 得分 14.0 分（满分 30 分） 切题 Response to the prompt 文章切题，阐说充分 response to the prompt with adequate explanation 文章结构 Organization 段落组织有序，衔接紧密 well-organized structure, clear and close transition as well
15、论点扩展和细节运用 Development and Details 段落内句与句连接顺畅，句式使用恰 当，用词确切，得体，论证充分 coherent structure, appropriate word usage, adequate exampling 语法 Grammar 表达准确，简单句、复杂句使用流畅 accurate expression, advanced vocabulary with a high degree of accuracy 总评 A lot of effort is needed in ensuring the use of every word, the gra
16、mmar of each and every sentence, and the use of punctuation marks. Remember to check it over to minimize the potential mistakes after youre done with your writing of an essay. Dont panic though. If you read this webpage, http:/ for good model sentences, youll find it not so difficult to write good s
17、entences. The structure of the essay needs improving. Urgent for you to acquaint yourself with the structures of different categories of CET4 writing. Please refer to the webpage for the model structures of different categories of writings, and you can find similar articles anywhere on the internet,
18、 http:/ Dont be discouraged by the weaknesses of the essay I pointed out. As long as you work harder and be careful enough with details, youll be an excellent writer. Trust me. 2013年 06月四级作文真实批改报告 题型： 英语四级作文 题目： 2013年 06月英语四级作文 原文 字数： 151 批改 时间： 2013年 08月 14日 11： 23 1In the classroom, the teacher is
19、 showing the multplication table, but the students dont think it is necessary to learn this kind basic skill because it would be outdated in the job market. 2However, I dont think this kind opinion is right. In fact, the basic skill will play important role in everyones job. 3People are more practic
20、al than before, so they do everything to achieve the requriement of the job they want, such as language 4lever certificate, 5computor certificate and kinds of 6ability proof. It seems the job will be got by 7kinds of certificates not our ability. 8In fact, the bacic skill will be the key part in the
21、 career development. Without the strong 9basic, the skyscrapers cant be 10finished. Thus I think 11basic skill is very important and we need to master the 12basic skill 13and we can 14run more far and higher in our future career development. 错误归类分析： 逻辑错误： 1：批改解释： Logic error. 修改建议： In the first para
22、graph, you should begin with a topic sentence, describing the general idea of the picture, like “The picture depicts what happens in a classroom meeting”. Then you can go on with some details, such as what the students are saying, and what the teacher is teaching. Pls refer to the final comment for
23、more information about the logic structure of a writing. 2: 批改解释： Logic error. 修改建议： This sentence should be put in the third paragraph, stating your opinion on this issue. 3: 批改解释： Logic error. 修改建议： Your topic sentence for this paragraph is “students are getting more practical in choosing what the
24、y learn at schools”. Then, youre supposed to several reasons behind this, or examples of their becoming practical in their study. But your essay seems illogic in this regard. 8: 批改解释： Logic error. 修改建议： The sentences following this sentence should be placed in a new paragraph, the third paragraph fo
25、r presenting your view on this issue. 打字错误 (TYP)： 4: 批改解释： Text input error. 修改建议： “level” is the correct spelling. Practice your typing skill. 拼写错误 (SPL)： 5: 批改解释： Spelling error. 修改建议： “computer” is the right word. 中式英语 (CHI)： 6: 批改解释： Chinglish. 修改建议： “proofs of your ability” will do here. 14: 批改
26、解释： Chinglish. 修改建议： Just use “fare well” here. 单词缺失： 7: 批改解释： A word is missing here. 修改建议： “obtaining” is needed here. 选词错误： 9: 批改解释： Poor word selection. 修改建议： Do you mean “foundation”? 指代不清： 10: 批改解释： The meaning is vague. 修改建议： How about “built”? 可数名词错误： 11: 批改解释： Count noun error. 修改建议： It sho
27、uld be “basic skills”. Its easy to avoid this kind of mistakes by just following the expressions in the directions. 12: 批改解释： Count noun error. 修改建议： We need another “basic skills” here. 连词错误： 13: 批改解释： Incorrect conjunction. 修改建议： You used two “and”s in this sentence. Divide this sentence into two
28、or three sentences. 得分 16.0 分（满分 30 分） 切题 Response to the prompt 文章切题，阐说充分 response to the prompt with adequate explanation 文章结构 Organization 段落组织有序，衔接紧密 well-organized structure, clear and close transition as well 论点扩展和细节运用 Development and Details 段落内句与句连接顺畅，句式使用恰当，用词确切，得体，论证充分 coherent structure,
29、appropriate word usage, adequate exampling 语法 Grammar 表达准确，简单句、复杂句使用流畅 accurate expression, advanced vocabulary with a high degree of accuracy 总评 Most of the sentences in this essay are well written. However, some other ones are not grammatical, even appearing to be Chinglish (you literally translat
30、e your Chinese ideas following the Chinese grammar). Suggest that you work harder to memorize good model sentences. Read this webpage, http:/ for good model sentences. This essay got a bad score for its ill constructed structure. Familiarize yourself with the structure of one essay before you actual
31、ly sit down to write out it. Please refer to the webpage for the model structures of different categories of writings, and you can find similar articles anywhere on the Internet, http:/ 2012年 06月四级作文真实批改报告 题型： 英语四级作文 题目： 2012年 06月英语四级作文 原文 字数： 133 批改 时间： 2013年 08月 23日 16： 10 1During the festival sea
32、son ,many supermarkets 2show delicate packaging of products in order to attract massive consumers to purchase their goods. There are several reasons for this problem. 3one of the main 4cause is that 5manufactures believe 6them could benefit from excessive 7packaging.so they could gain a great deal o
33、f money. 8Of course, it is because of government cant control such as this behaviour, the phenomenon of excessive packaging becomes more and more. In addition ,9vanity of consumers 10are also 11important. In my opinion , 12Excessive packaging waste too 13much 14resoures and 15material ,and it 16brig
34、ht serious environment pollution. 17we should carry out 18following tips. First of all 19, government could 20proclaim 21several of the law about excessive packaging. Next, consumers need to build correct 22aware. Finally, 23manufactures should take inexpensive packing material. 错误归类分析： 逻辑错误： 1: 批改解
35、释： Logic error. 修改建议： Theres no topic sentence in this paragraph. Its quite simple to make one by translating the first statement in the outline given in the directions. 单词合并错误： 2: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： Better to say “show off products with delicate packaging”. 7: 批改解释： Error in wor
36、d combination. 修改建议： It should be “packing, and”. 11: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： If I were you, Ill write it as: “an important factor in excessive packaging”. 21: 批改解释： Error in word combination. 修改建议： How about “several laws to curb excessive packaging”? 22: 批改解释： Error in word combinat
37、ion. 修改建议： Better to use “awareness about proper packaging”. 大小写错误： 3: 批改解释： Capitalization error. 修改建议： Use “One” here. 12: 批改解释： Capitalization error. 修改建议： Better to use “excessive” here. 17: 批改解释： Capitalization error. 修改建议： Better to use “We” with the capitalized initial here. 单复数错误： 4: 批改解释： E
38、rror in singular or plural form. 修改建议： “causes” should be used here. 15: 批改解释： Error in singular or plural form. 修改建议： “materials” should be used here. 拼写错误 (SPL)： 5: 批改解释： Spelling error. 修改建议： “manufacturers” is the right word. 14: 批改解释： Spelling error. 修改建议： “resources” is the right word. 23: 批改解
39、释： Spelling error. 修改建议： “manufacturers” is the right word. 选词错误： 6: 批改解释： Poor word selection. 修改建议： It should be “that they”. 10: 批改解释： Poor word selection. 修改建议： Grammatically “is” better to go with “vanity”. 13: 批改解释： Poor word selection. 修改建议： Here it should be “many”, since “resource” is a cou
40、ntable noun. 20: 批改解释： Poor word selection. 修改建议： Lets use “introduce, pass, or legislate against”. 词义不明 (INC)： 8: 批改解释： Incomprehensible text. 修改建议： Ill rewrite this sentence, as “Whats more, because the government cant bring this under control, the phenomenon of excessive packaging goes much wild.” 时态错误：
