1、改错一I have a good friend whos name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doi
2、ng her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbours house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.改错二I wen
3、t to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country.
4、Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.改错三Dear Ralph, Im a senior student. Im getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in l
5、ove with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, “We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation.“ So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask
6、him about going out. But he said he didnt want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up? 改错四Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. Id like to your penfriend, and get to know more
7、about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but no
8、w I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 改错五Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested
9、me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was
10、 very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.改错六Dear Li Ming, I have received your letter yesterday. Dont worry about you. Im getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well
11、 in it recently and you have lost interesting. Im afraid I cant agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study har
12、d, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.改错七Some students dont like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a go
13、od talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when youre eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something youre interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty
14、, and your parents will trust you more. 改错八One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seenWhen he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(独木舟) and was struggling in the waterWithout think about
15、herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy He was about to drag（拖） the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and youve spoiled a whole afternoons work!” 答案：改错一：whos 改为 whose
16、2.正确 3.去掉 but 4.on 改为 in 5.parents 后加were6.homeworks 改为 homework 7.stopped 后加 to 8.find 改为 found 9.immediate改为 immediately 10.fire 前加 the改错二： the 改为 a 2.正确 3.see 前加 to 4.go 改为 going 5.去掉 been 6.去掉 had 7.去掉 but8.去掉 had 9.on 改为 at 10.him 改为 her改错三：1.getting 后加 on 或 along 2.fallen 改为 been 3.shy 前加 a 4.
17、feeling 改为 feelings 当情感讲时 feeling 常用单数 5.study 前加 to 或 study 改为 studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉 to 8.watched 改为 watch 9 正确 10.and 改为 or改错四：1. learn 改为 learnt 或 learned。 2. to 后加 be 或 become。 3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。 4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。 5. 此行无错。 6. subject 改
18、为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多” ， 修饰可数名词复数。 7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用 used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事” 。8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in为固定短语， “对感兴趣” 。 9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。 10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。改错五：答案：76去掉 to 短语错误。go abroad“出国” 。77presentpresents 名词的数错误。pr
19、esent“礼物” ，是可数名词。78去掉第二个 were 动词错误。interest 在此是及物动词用法，意为“使感兴趣”。be interested in“对感兴趣 ”。79buysbought 时态错误。由全文可知，用一般过去时态。8081them it 代词错误。在这本书里有关于肢体语言的图片和不同国家的语言习俗。用 it 指代这本书。82put 前加 been 语态错误。我的礼物被放在了你的卧室里了。礼物是被放在卧室里，所以用被动语态。83thatwhich 定语从句关系词错误。介词后用 which，不用 that。84butand 连接逻辑错误。前后是并列关系而非转折关系。85fe
20、w little 混淆错误。a little 与 little 可以用作副词， 表示“有点” “稍稍” ，修饰动词、副词、形容词或介词短语。如：He is a little tired.他有点累了。而 a few 不可用作副词。改错五 1.have 去掉 2.about 后的 you 改为 me 3.workswork 4.learnlearning 5.recentrecently 6.interestinginterest 7.English 后的 and 改为 but 8.be 后加 an 9.at in 10.where 后加 there改错六 41. aboutwith/to 根据句
21、意，可知此处是表达 “和父母交谈” ，而不是“谈论父母”。42. aseven if 意为“ 好像 ”，与句意不符；根据句意，此处应是表达让步关系。故用even if ,意为“即使 ”。43. goinggetting get along well with 是固定短语，意为 “和相片融洽” 。44. 45. wayways some 在此处修饰可数名词复数。46. walk 前加 a go out for a walk 意为“出去散步”47. andor 此处表选择关系。48. arewere “ 他们年轻时候 ”应用动词的过去式。49. ourtheir 和 they 保持一致。50. honestyhonest 形容词 honest 作表语。
