1、Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?(语言:在每段的论述中都要注意句式的变化,如定语从句,宾语从句等。注意连接手段的使用,连接词的必要性。 )(第一段:指出一些人做好事期望回报)A great many people presume upon a reward when conducting a good deal. First and foremost, some people incline to equate doing good deeds with a certain amount of material reward,
2、 and reward with a certain sum of money. What is more, they maintain that since the basis of contemporary society is money, getting reward by conducting good deeds can be one method of earning money.(第二段:以雷锋为例指出还有人不求回报)On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that doing good deeds should
3、be based on peoples individual consciousness of responsibility. Hence, conducting a good deed is one way of fulfilling oneself and should have nothing to do with monetary reward.Numerous illustrations can be given, but this one will suffice: Mr.Leifeng lived an austere life dedicated to doing good d
4、eeds without expecting any reward and helping people from all walks of life, yet he was remembered as one of the most successful idol of our time.(第三段:对两种观点进行总结,阐明自己的观点) 。Generally speaking, it is imperative for us to conduct good deeds without expecting any rewards. For one thing, we should appeal
5、to the authorities to legislate laws and regulations to encourage people to do good deeds. For another, we should cultivate peoples awareness that conducting good deeds is extremely crucial for ourselves. We do this for enjoyment, self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement, not for the purpose of reward.