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1、第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous 荒谬 but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking 突出 feature 特点 that impresses印象 me d

2、eeply is that unbelievably 令人难以置信的, ,(3)Recent few years has witnessed 证据 a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous 灾难性 to individual 单独的 survival生存 and prosperity 繁荣. (4)This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned 谴责 severely 严重 or made illegal 违法. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic 象征意义 me

3、aning subtly 隐隐约约 conveyed 传达 should be given deep consideration. 中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害,并举例论证,预测危害的趋势第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是

4、说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。 (1) To account 解释 for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward 提出. (2)To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to

5、our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating 挫折 and humiliating 屈辱 life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than 主题 to contradict 抵触 with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening 险恶 situa

6、tion we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration 例子 of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey 调查 made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced 主题 will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we ca

7、nnot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable 不良 results may come out unexpectedly 未预料, we will see the gloomy 暗淡 future of something. 最后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法 第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一

8、下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。 (1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent 主题. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible 合理 to strengthen the enforcement 执行 of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand,

9、it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands 魔掌 of destruction 破坏 . (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous 巨大 one,our efforts will eventually 最终 pay off 回报.(6) Only when you p

10、ay attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later. 2.积极有利型的文章 文章以团队精神为例子第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻. (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic

11、meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,并最后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有两个大的好处.第五个句子谈第一个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代替 for example 的五星级的

12、句子.第六个是具体的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者 (1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental 基本的 to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubte

13、dly 毫无疑问, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will

14、live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency.

15、 (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficie

16、nt in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society. 第三个段子首句 谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这

17、个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来. (1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken

18、to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other peoples opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

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